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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
So as I was reading one of the best chapters by far, I had to bury my face in a pillow so as not to risk waking the entire household and possibly those of the surrounding neighbors with my gleefulness. The Water for Elephants reference was a literal knee slaper for sure and I am still grinning like a besotted fool over the Lord of the Rings posters. I will admit to having been over the stars obsessed with Lord of the Rings in high school, yes my friends and I were geeks, but the thought of Edward Cullen with Lord of the Rings merchandise of any kind is only trumped in sexiness by the idea of Edward Cullen with Lord of the Rings memorabilia in his black sexy-as-sin Aston Martin!!!! Okay enough rambling for me, I generally wait until the end o a story to review and I think this may be the longest review of my enterprising fan fiction life. Maybe the fan fiction inclusion within the story is rubbing off on me. Anyhow, on with the face splitting grin inducing tale!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: Do the (After)Math
And cue the angst! After all Edward is simply not Edward without it - even happy go lucky playboy Edward.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions
Ok so I know I mentioned it about three times already but your story is hilarious! My cheeks are actually aching from smiling so much 😄
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
Too funny, I've been making quite the spectacle of myself by laughing aloud.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 9: Perceptions and Misperceptions
I am enjoying your story immensely! As much as I typically love the more canon stories, occasionally I seek something out that is just more fun with a lot less angst. Could u have picked a better one?
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
Oh crap busted! Poor Bella! talk about feeling guilty, poor girl is going crazy with her internal monologue instead of running out of there.
I loved meeting Emmet, what a great guy! so funny and a great source of information.... hope to see more of him soon.
Can't wait to read all about Edward's trip and if he finds her in his room or not...
Kisses.R.
Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Great!!! Please update asap... ;-)) Can`t wait!!!
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
AWESOME!!
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! so not nice to leave us hanging right there... okay so i figured out about 8 of the bakers dozen.... oh and speaking of motu e l james is releasing the finial in the trilogy this month(unfortunatley i was unable to read that on this site so i am waiting to read the 3rd fifty shades freed as soon as its released). tropics of virgo another great. edward walbanger could bang me up agaist a wall anyday..... lol but i cant wait to see mr cullens review to bellybeans....
Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
"I'm enigmatic?"
Oh Edward, you simple minded dolt. I loved this chapter and it cheered me right up to the tippy top of cheer. Woke my sister up, but I was laughing too much to care.
I reckon he'll calm down and review Bella's stories, to which she'll frown at, in her little way, and reply. Thus then starts the mysterious conversation with a reviewer and a somewhat nicer Edward. Betcha. I think.
Anywoop, I loved this chapter! Please update again soon!
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
*blushes and looks around* Soo about my last review...LOL See My RL has been CRAZY and I havent had the time to read any FF lately. I had a little extra time tonight and found this one on the "most recent" list and started reading. I, for reasons unbeknownst to me, thought that this story only had 3 chapters updated...Turns out it has a lot more. LOL
Anyway, I am loveing the story and very glad I found it. ~Shannon
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Just read the whole thing through, definitely favouriting this, I love it! Love the way you've incorporated all the usual suspects in, or entangled them in! Looking forward to Edward reading the fanfic, and can't wait for the barbeque! PS love the references to other great fanfics out there eg "Ethan Wallbanger"!
Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
YES YES YES you should continue!! I am laughing out loud over here, much to the dismay of dogs, who are giving me evil looks. LOL ~Shannon
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Well we already know hess am asshat so.... nope gonna blow a gasket and probably emberass bellybeans.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
I love the bakers dozen some of my favs are on that list hehehe great minds I tell yeah! Look forward to E's read muah hahahaha Post again soon please!!
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
AHAHAHA! I'm laughing so hard right now. Poor Edward has been reduced to yelling at an imaginary audience and is being thouroughly mind-fucked by an unknowing Bella. Poor Kids. I LOVED bellybeans baker's dozen, good classic fics. If he finishes reading her fics, he's gonna need a nice cold shower and is definately going to be more interested in talking to her during Alice's get-together. And then that brings me back to that one review that Bella recieved, is it really Esme? I can't help but think it is because otherwise, it would've been someone else to try to call Edward about that shit. And speaking of, why hasn't he called her back about that? How long has it been since that happened? It's so hard for me to tell time because I get so lost in the story. It feels like months have gone by, but it's only been a week and one chapter of hate to heat. Oh, geez, I think I need an aspirin... Maybe that should be added to our tote? It could go right next to the eye drops. :) Alright, and this officially wraps up my ranting review.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Oh, Edward just discovered a whole new universe. His bad conscience for snooping shows that he is a good person, but the temptation is just too strong, like it was for Bella when she had the chance to find out mre about him. I can't wait for him to read "From Hate to Heat". Maybe he'll send bellybeans a review? The barbecue is getting more and more interesting, Edward can't "un-know" what he's read.
Reviewer: adraves (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
I didn't get all of them, but 2 is Master of the Universe, 6 is The Dominant/The Submissive, 7 is Not like this, 11 is Edward Wallbanger (A personal favorite of mine) and 13 is The Naked Guy Upstairs.
As always enjoyed the chapter, I will be rereading this one when it is completed just to get the full effect.
Alicia
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Wahahaha! Oh my is he pissed. I was dying while reading this. Laughing my ass off.... First over your Baker's Dozen. (I recognized most of them and Wide Awake was also my first ff foray.) Then The anticipation of him getting to the reading,,, and the reaction. :) This was a great chapter and not really that short, though I am really wanting to watch him him as he reads the story.
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Love it, cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Oh my word, I freakin love it!!! That is the best freakin chapter ever!! I knew he couldn't stay away from that computer. Bring it on and looking forward to reading the next installment.
Reviewer: pixiechix7 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Nooo!!! Do you know how much sleep I've lost reading this story?! :) (Not that I minded) I just started reading this story yesterday, thankfully finding it under the "recently updated" stories. My others ones were updated and I was suffering withdrawals during winter break (but lots of time to catch up!)
Of course, I'd knew you'd never disappoint, bannerday, I absolutely loved "The Transfer" and this story just cracked me up! I usually don't review because I'm trying to devour the stories as quick as possible, but since I am caught up (nooo!) I can honestly say I wish there was infinitely more chapters left to read *sob*. Guess it's back to cleaning the house...
Update soon, please! I'll be waiting like Bella lurking/stalking at Assward... ;)
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Isn't there some saying about eavesdroppers seldom hearing good things about themselves? I think this would fall under the same category, except for snooping and reading.
Is it sad that I recognized and have read many of those FFs? I am starting to wonder if I spend too much time reading here.
It is true that the banner sometimes makes all the difference in the world. There are times that I would skip over a story, but the banner sucks me in, and then I am hooked on the story.
Poor Edward, I hope that was a big pot of coffee he made. Hopefully he also realizes that Bella's story was written before a lot of events hadn't taken place. I also hope he can find some humour in it!
Till next time!
CM
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
OMG -- shit is gonna hit the fan tonight! I can't wait to read what the next steps for both of them are! Too funny. I'm not sure how I would react if someone was writing about me (or got the wrong impression of me and wrote about the wrong me). I think he's reacting how most would! You're a great writer -- thanks for sharing your talent.
Reviewer: chicchi (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
I love this story!!!!! And this chapter is incredibly fun!!!
I can't wait to read the next!!!!
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