Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction
I knew he'd see the error of his ways! So much going on in that mind of his.... Well, get to steering Edward!
Really liked this one, Bannerday, he gets to experience himself through her eyes! Take that hottie!
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
Ruh-Roh! The jig is about to be up! Bella's going to be in troubbbble.... I'm just so happy that our surly playboy is clever and intelligent enough to understand Bella's POV, but it's gonna be hell until he gets over his anger! Can't wait!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five
So he figured out the screen name! Smart cookie, that Cullen is....
Reviewer: Kils (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
this is like a drug even tho i am no longer obsessed wit twilight i still love these fanfics
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate
F*#king hilarious! Ang is my girl! Hahahahahaha
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 21: A Series of Thought Provoking Events
Well, baby steps, right? Rome wasn't built in a day, bellybeans!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2013 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Hopefully the candlelit informal dinner will be an icebreaker. Maybe friendship, or at least a truce is coming in the near future?
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2013 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
Is Bella really certifiably insane? How could she make breaking and entering okay in that mind of hers.... I get exploring downstairs, but I feel she's so out of line going upstairs into his personal space! I hope he busts her big time! Not okay by me at all!
Author's Response: What Bella is doing really isn't okay in her mind. And he did give her the key, so technically she isn't breaking and entering. But I know...I wouldn't go this far either. She's ridiculously curious about him against her better judgement. But she won't be the only one lured into taking sneak peeks in this story. And there will be busting...big time. Give it time.
-bannerday
Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2013 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
brilliant, love it, more please!!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2013 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 6: Moving Right Along
Too damn funny! The inner monologues are priceless! Dickman and Dingbat! ROFLMAO
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Off to the races!
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2013 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Oh my god! I am practically peeing myself down at work laughing at this..
."there's either a problem in the uptake multi-fold or the exhausted systematic causing a lack of balance in the air-fuel fraction. Maybe it's a leaky vacuum, or maybe some extra-sensory perception needs replacement or it might need an adjustment"....WTH? And the whole time she's thinking about his hardon? ROFLMAO!
Too damn funny
And yes, I am sneaking in a few chappies on my lunch break....don't u judge me!
Cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Fate is a powerful thing. So is a good amount of foreplay. Much preparation is necessary before doing the deed!
Reviewer: roseblossome (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Great Chapter!!! I love that the sweat shirt belonged to Eirtdward and it was Bella's go to shirt!!!!!!
Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
oh my what a cliff hanger. REally, Post again soon
Reviewer: elsiemanville (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Really liked this chapter. MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: elsiemanville (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Really liked this chapter. MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: lowbatterysound (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2013 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Love this chapter! Seeing everything come full circle is nice. Can't wait to see how Edward handles this.
Reviewer: Pikapuff (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
So the question is - What is your own "go-to" sweatshirt?
Author's Response: Since you asked, it's a medium blue, all-cotton pullover hooded sweatshirt from a local surfshop. I've had that thing probably about 15 years. It's been through a lot of "life" with me. ;)
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Love it!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
oh shit lmfao!!!!!! I just loved this chap especially how you pulled off its ending epic!! he better not freak out.. lol
Reviewer: sr2011 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Wooowwww!!! They were meant to be together. I Love this story.
Reviewer: debr (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
♥ it...love them
Reviewer: mcjes (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Thank you. That was just...awesome.
Reviewer: HannahCullen (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Ahhh, can't wait for your next post!
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
So sweet. But I admit to some confusion. Th correspondence chap got me to thinking she was rereading, but obviously sshe hasn't had time for that yet....
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