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Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Paint Me Good

So would I...



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Paint Me Good

Poor confused Edward.   He is so completely in love with Bella and his sights are only set on Bella.  All of the other things around him are vague and useless.  He loves her picture and it gives him hope.  I would think so.   The converation with Aro just confused poor Edward more.   His mind couldn't wrap around the words that Aro was saying, lol.   Edward wants to run to Bella and yet he is afraid of crowding her now.   Not sure how poor Bella is feeling, or how she would respond to Edward barging in, lol   Would she feel like Scarlet O'Hara..lol.   Love your damn story.   Now Carlisle...GAH...I think Jessica should have given him the finger...lol...or maybe she should have flashed him..he would have a heart attack...there...problem solved.   One less idiot in the world...hahahahaha.   So so so so proud of Edward for standing up to Carlisle and letting Carlisle know that he has no interest in Tanya, and to stop pushing him in that direction.   I was also proud of Edward for keeping Riley far away from his business.   If I was a betting person, I would say that Riley would be in the company for a short time, and start causing trouble, as if Carlisle planted him there to cause trouble.   Love the story.  Can't wait to see more Edward and Bella time together.  Still so many questions to be solved.    GAH!   Send us more when you can!!



Author's Response:

Thank you again for this review. I love that you love this story. It inspires me. 

Thank you again. =) I'll try to update asap!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Paint Me Good

Angryward makes an appearance.



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Hellos and Goodbyes

Poor Edward is so tortured still.   He clearly wants to have Bella forgive him....and she is so hurt, and confused I guess that he'll ever really change.   I hope that Bella knows what she is doing in selling the family home.   It sounds like an amazing house.    I hope we will see some seriously nice times ahead for Edward and Bella.   They deserve it.   Edward still has some serious butt kissing to do, and he better get used to having chapped lips soon.   Bella needs to just explain her life a little better to Edward and then they will both be on the same page.   Love this story.   It is so intriguing.    Hell ya!



Author's Response:

Thank you, as usual, for this review. I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Muahz! =)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Hellos and Goodbyes

Poor Edward just wants to be with Bella. Bella, give him another chance, fr my sake. Poor Bella at the end of the chapter :(



Author's Response:

She will eventually. They just need to heal first. 

Thanks bb. ;)

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Wake Up to The Truth

OK, I'm a little bothered that Edward hasn't given his side of the story before things go any further.  I have a bad feeling about that.  Hope it doesn't backfire on them.



Author's Response:

Thank you again for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the next couple of chapters. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

Oh my God!  I love this story!  Bella is married?!  Edward is going to have a shit fit.  I'm strapping on my seatbelt.  This is going to be a rocky ride.



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks. =D

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Hmmm.  Sounds to me like Edward may be at fault here.  What did he do?  Please say he didn't screw someone the night before his wedding.  Well, I do love a flawed character, so I'm excited to start this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. ;)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Friends and Enemies

Oh shit lol



Author's Response:

=D Thanks.

Reviewer: chelseaterre (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

say WHAAAAAAAAAA? oh snap!



Author's Response:

You still with me? :)

Reviewer: chelseaterre (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Okay, so I just discovered this today, and I'm pretty stoked about reading the rest! I would leave a more detailed review, but i really want to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you're liking it. ;D

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Friends and Enemies

Got to say....I have respect for Edward, and his "I have no fear, as long as I can get to Bella" attitude.   I mean...damn....put his balls on the line, with Alice and Jasper.   He knew he wouldn't be welcome, and yet...he did it.   He did it for Bella.   He obviously cares nothing for his safety.     I LOVED it!    How Alice calmed down Jasper and stood toe to toe with Edward, trusting him...that he was going to do right by Bella....perfect!    When Tanya called, my stomach did turn over a little, but with sickness..lol.   It was obviously perfectly clear to me, and I'm sure to everyone else, that Troublesome Tanya is just there for the money, and now Edward knows it too.    How he put her in her place....DAMN proud of that boy.    He knows what he wants...he starting to be able to smile more with everything, including Rose....and now Bella is here....hmmmmm.   What could she want?  I doubt she's selling Avon door to door...not that Edward would probably need much...yummmm....or maybe selling cookies....NAH!!!   I think she's there to maybe explain a little about what is going on in her life, or is it too soon....Hmmmm?   Well, only you know, and you need to send us some pretty pages for us to figure it out, so I guess the ball is in your court...LOL.   OK...so get crackin please and send us more more more.   Love it!



Author's Response:

I love your review. Thank you. (I know it's short, but that's all I could think of after reading your fabulous words for this chapter). *hugs and kisses*

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Card

Is Jasper going to punch Edward in the face? lol So Edward is making an attempt to see Bella? This could get very interesting lol.



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward is one man who doesn't gives up easily. He is persistent...that I tell you.

Thanks. =D

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Ooops in my review I said the one thing I enjoy about your story...when I meant tp say...One of the things I enjoy about your story...lol.   Just feel a need to correct that.   Lots of reasons to enjoy your story.



Author's Response:

Lol. Well, you didn't need to correct that, because your last review already made my day. But thank you again. I really appreciate it. =D

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Card

The one thing I enjoy about your story is the true sincere emotions that each of your characters show during the story.   Rosalie is loyal and true, and a bit of a bitch, and doesn't mind admitting it.   She wants to protect Edward from being hurt again.  Edward was a really touch guy, but he's showing his softer side, well, his less tough side at least.   He wants Bella at any cost.   He knows what he needs to do, and he sucks it up, and goes to Alice, knowing that he will need to meet up with Jasper, and by the looks of things, it's not going to be a tea party, well unless there are flying dishes and karate moves....lol.   I think this meeting might border on being physical, and not in a good way...lol.   Love your writing.   Very well done.  Can't wait for more.   



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. You wouldn't know how much your words inspired me...really! ;) 

Rosalie is a bitch, and she owns up to it. That's why I like writing her, because she is no non-sense kinda gal. She will defend Edward whatever the cost, whether people would agree with her or not. lol

Well, I'm glad you're still liking this. Thank you again. Hugs and kisses!

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 11 - White Blank Canvases

I'm tellin' ya...he's gay!!  Has to be!!  lol  Ok Bella...forgive Edward...it's ok!!



Author's Response:

We're getting to that part...the forgiveness. Baby steps for now. ;)

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Wake Up to The Truth

I hate misunderstandings!  Gah!  Now I wanna hear what really happened with T/E

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Pickles and Peanut Butter

I liked Aro...but now I think James just needed citizenship...yea, that's it!  lol

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Forever scarred

Hmm....denial much Bella?

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Vacation and Surprises

Hmm....it was a lie...James is her gay friend.  lol

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Infamous Grandfather

Douche comes to mind! lol

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

Uhhhh ohhhhh....ok, trusting you!!  ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews bb. I appreciate it. =)

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Wow....awesome start! Can't wait to read more!  So, I'll be better at reviewing for you...as a writer, I know how much it means to hear the feedback!  Very catching start!!



Author's Response:

Glad to see you here. ;) Thanks for this review. 

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 11 - White Blank Canvases

Well....I was hoping James was more of a friend, and from his comment to Bella about not really being interested in her legs...I'm a thinkin...he's most likely gay.    I was thinking that Jake and James are doin the freaky freak togther....hmmm???   Jake is probably right...Bella is way too stubborn, and should probably give Edward a second chance since he only kissed that Skankaroo.     At least leave the window open a crack to the possibility of forgiveness.      Bella's painting a picture of her old house, was it her old house with Edward???   That's a tell tale sign of her connection to her past...hmmm?   Love the story.   Always excited to see an update.    You've slithered into our brains....lol.   Write soon...please!



Author's Response:

A lot of things coming together...hmmm Maybe Bella could squeeze Edward in, after or while she worked out some stuff in her life. Let's see. she might listen to what Jake had told her.

Anyway, thank you. I love that you always review. Muahz! =)

 



Author's Response:

A lot of things coming together...hmmm Maybe Bella could squeeze Edward in, after or while she worked out some stuff in her life. Let's see. she might listen to what Jake had told her.

Anyway, thank you. I love that you always review. Muahz! =)

 



Author's Response:

A lot of things coming together...hmmm Maybe Bella could squeeze Edward in, after or while she worked out some stuff in her life. Let's see. she might listen to what Jake had told her.

Anyway, thank you. I love that you always review. Muahz! =)

 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - White Blank Canvases

I see James's relationship with Bella now :) Poor Jake. He's breaking my heart.



Author's Response:

Glad you can see what James is to Bella. ;)

Thanks.

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