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Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

Love the line about the boy having sweaty hands!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

*raises hand* I do, I do! That was such a cute Thanksgiving :) Love the Black Friday celebration too. You can't get that at any sale lol



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Imagine the long lines if you could! LOL Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 23

holy.........i will never look at apple pie the same way again....lol. that was smokin hot! great family Thanksgiving though :)

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ThankS!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 23

Good Chapter....



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Thanks

Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 23

such a delicious dessert for Edward! when will Bella have hers?!



Author's Response:

Hey, he shared the pie with her! :) It would be hard for Bella to top that, I think.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wow...that was a great chapter.    Thanksgiving with the Cullens is freakin amazing.    The whole experience is wonderful, from eating through the pool and guitar hero.   Thanksgiving is always big in my house, and I love it.    I think everyone looks through those sale flyers on Thanksgiving...looking for a computer for $5.00....lol.    Love it!    Hate the shopping in the dark, and I only do it, if I need to, but it is always an experience.   Just looking can be fun!   I hope next year Edward can go with her.  Love it!    Love your Emmett, and how he wants his own pie...lol.   Gah...so so funny.   Edward's cousin seems nice, and I hope she isn't jealous of Edward spending time with his new girlfriend.    She seems awesome.   Of course, I absolutely freakin love your Bethy.   She is just so so perfect, and the way your write her dialogue....love it, completely.   "Daddy can kiss her anytime now"   ROFL.   Love the innocence of kids.     How Edward now has a picture of Bella and Bethy as his screensaver.   Absolutely perfect!    Now...for the best part.....having dessert with Edward in bed....DAMMMMNNNNNNN.   I could you some time like this.    Man...where is that pie I had...and where is my husband.   Got me thinking.   Thanksgiving may not be the same for me this year....lol.   I need to keep a pie tucked under my bed this year.    ROFL!     I see a very sweet holiday for me this year.    Thanks for the ideas.   Keep writing your yummy story, and we'll keep devouring it!   Yes...Yes...Yes.



Author's Response:

Thanksgiving has always been my favorite.  My husband read this chapter and wanted to buy an apple pie at the grocery the next day.  LOL

Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

“No, baby. Don’t go. You’ll get trampled out there. It’s a madhouse. People die trying to get a laptop for fifty dollars,”  Funniest thing I've ever read. 

The mental image of Emmett hanging himself just to enhance the meaning! Ahahahaa! Update soon! xo



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LOL Thanks!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 23

Thank you!

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 23

NOT SHARE, I want the whole pie with him.  LOL



Author's Response:

LOL Sounds like a good plan!

Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 23

Holy shit apple pie lovin was hot!



Author's Response:

:) Glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 23

bring on the bump & grind!!!



Author's Response:

patience :)

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 23

Ok sexy times and yum. Now please wash the sheets and Bella. I can just imagine the middle of the night issue. so sweet what he said to her. New job and soonnew living arrangements, yes?



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LOL thanks for reviewing.  We'll get Bella washed up soon

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 23

Pie please Edward!



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:) Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 23

Me!  I also make a chocolate chip pecan pie.....maybe we could eat that too!  HAHA!  I like how you 'showed' him falling in love with her!  Hopefully the next chapter can be all kinds of sexy hot!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: mimikoulaki (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really really like your story , 

And it's been a long time since the last update , please don't give up this wonderfull story !!!! 

Thank you 



Author's Response:

No, I haven't given up.  I was sick for a week and wasn't up to posting anything.  The next chapter is already in the cue to be validated.  I was hoping it would have been done this past weekend, but I didn't give my beta much time, so hopefully it will be posted by the weekend.  Thanks for checking in!

Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow - this story is really hot and I like what you've done with the characters.  Thanks so much 



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Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 22

very very good keep up the graet work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2011 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 22

Sweet!  hum.....

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 21

That was a really good chapter considering the events that took place.  They both finally got closure!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 22

Bethy stole the chapter. Her sweetness and pure innocence are just so adorable. So happy for Bella :)



Author's Response:

I guess you're right...Bethy did rule the chapter.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 22

Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 22

Jealousward cracks me up!.... i knew Bethy would be totally ok with them dating and she was so cute about it. she got me all choked up though talking to Bella in the playroom. I hope she likes her new job, that Jasper is a smart man :)

Author's Response:

There was no way Edward was making it through this story without exhibiting some kind of jealousy!  Bethy and Bella do have a very strong bond, they're really good for each other.  Jasper...always the voice of reason.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 22

Your chapters really make me smile.    The bit of jealousy that Edward exhibited when he saw Bella with Jake, was so so funny.    I was wondering what Bella was saying to Jake when they were in the restaurant, but I had an idea that it had to do with Edward.   She is completely loyal to him and to Bethy.   Speaking of Bethy,  she is so so so sweet.  Sweeter than any ice cream sundae I can imagine.   It was perfect.    How Bella gave Bethy back her stuffed animal, with the candy...absolutely adorable.   How Edward wanted to make Bella and his relationship public now....gah...so great.   I was laughing my butt off when Emmett decided to take a piece of the apple pie before dinner.   LOL!   I was thinking of Remember Me!   So so great.    The whole story of Bethy talking about how a boy asked her to be his girlfriend, hysterical.   Bethy's idea of what a boyfriend is....LMAO.   Loved it all!    How Bethy told her dad to kiss Bella.....ha ha ha.   Absofreakinlutely cute.   You have such a great story here, and it always makes my night.   Keep up the great work!   



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I always love reading your reviews.  Jealous Edward had to happen...nobody's perfect, not even the wonderful and sweet Edward.  Funny you caught the Remember Me reference.  I wondered if anyone would notice.  I love the innocent perception children have of things.  They make everything so simple.  I had to show that with Bethy.  Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 22

ha ... great chapter ... loved the ending!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 22

looking fowrad to the next  chapter 



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