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Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
Until Bella becomes a permenant fixture in Edward's life, I don't think she has any right to tell the Cullen women to back off. They are his family. I certainly wouldn't ask permission from a girlfriend, no matter how nice she was.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
The tangled web that was woven has now be unrevelled :)
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
I was not expecting newton to up chuck right there in Edwards office. Great update... Love your story
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
Imagine my delight as I'm reading through my favorite story yet once again and suddenly get a notice that the new chapter is up! What a wonderful 4th of July present! Thank you.
Just keeps on gettin' better and better!
Have a wonderful 4th!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
Great chapter!
I didn't expect Newton to throw up all over the floor...wow.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
I was LMAO about Newton. What a freaking pansey. *shakes head*
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
Goood Chapter when is he going to ask her,and I sure the shit's not done with Banner
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
Do we have a party next chapter? I can't wait!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
Poor Edward! His soon to be father in-law trumped his proposal! As for Mike, well doesn't seem like business is his thing! I hope Bella let's her presence be known this weekend!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
That newton boy was not cut out for espionage work....lol. I smell a showdown between 3 women during the weekend. Edward was about to propose to Bella before Charlie gummed it all up ... Right???
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Springing a Trap
i loved the whole outing of lauren and jim and newton puking everywhere ...awesome thank heavens it wasn't projectile that would of been nasty
i can't shake the feeling there's a chink in the armour of B&E 's relationship ,i dont know if its because edward wants everything now and bella is holding off so she won't get hurt but something gotta give ,maybe they need to get on the same page and what with the cullen women descending for the weekend i there might be some fireworks
Reviewer: Sapphire2011 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
Edward as a cowboy...yum!
Reviewer: Sapphire2011 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Great! Gotta love Edward layin' sprawl-ass! ;-)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
So nice that they can't get enough of each other and that Edward wants to banish the problems of the world when he's with her. Now, let's see how they handle Dallas!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
Love your cowboy too. Love your story that was a great update
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
Bella and Edward need all the good-times they can get cosidering what is going on around them. Apart from company-trobles there is Alice's exuberance waiting to be reigned in and a novel to be finished.
It's hard to stay patient about what's going on with the anti-Edward-conspiracy. I don't think Angela and Peter are involved (I really hope I'm right with that) but the e-mail must have been planted from someoene a bit smarter than Lauren and Newton, so I'm dying to find out who else is behind it.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
The lemons were quite juicy. I am still caught up with all the corporate espionage. I hope our cowboy isn't betrayed by someone he really trusts.
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
Ahh! It would suck so bad if Angela and Peter actually were behind the whole spying thing, but I can't see Angela doing something like that. Absolutely LOVED the lemon(s) because.... WOW. I can't wait to see who really is behind everything, or if Edward proposes anytime soon. This was magnificent!
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
You have made me love cowboys to. This weekend is the 4th one of my favorite Holidays. I think I will have my own BBQ and dance under the fire worlks with my own cowboy. I sure hope he lets me dress him up as one and call him Edward, well see and I let you know how it turns out. I love Bella and Edward time. Thanks for sharing.
Lilly
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
Another wonderful chapter, man these two are hot!
Will you do an outtake of what Sam and Emily were doing in the barn????? lol
I can't wait to see what happens Monday!
Reviewer: ear906 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
As always, love your update. The new bump in the road for Edward's business is very intriguing. I love that her older books are based on your previous stories. Can't wait to see what Peter and Angela have to say about the email.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
theres no way Angela is in on it, right??? please no! I hope Bella has a talk with Alice soon about her just steppin in whenever, if she keeps letting it go without saying something, it'll just get worse.....
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
Hmmmm...... Not to sure what to think about that email. It seems a little too convenient showing up when it did and somewhat vague. Though that would be an interesting twist for it to be Angela. :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
when will edward propose? and who sent the email? i think that eward should have some cameras in his office right? im totally on the edge of my seat!!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
You brightened up my morning with this new chapter! What a lovely way to start my morning. Thank you!
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