Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
damn, from the frying pan into the fire......i'd hate to be Edward right now. i really hope Bella gets to beat that bitch Heidi down
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
Edward is not going to get out of this mess easily. He just made it out without a broken dick when Heidi snuck her way into his bed. I hope Bella knees him in the balls and walks away again. This time, I hope she ends up at Alice's house.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
Heidi is one Nasty whore. It would be very hard to believe Edward if it was anyone but Heidi. Poor Edward now he has to deal with his other fuck up. Loved it
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Lovely chapter! so much going on, it crazy!!! I'm happy the Sanchez was dealed with he was starting to piss me off. And I love Emmett, I'm glad he went after Rosie, she deserves to be happy after that awfull experience.
Kisses.R.
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 16 - A Fox in the Hen House
OMG Poor Bella!!! I kept expecting Esteban Sanchez to show up at her door!!!I'm of to next chap I wanna know what happens with this two.
Kisses.R.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Well I can see it now... Edward leaves to check on the horse and Bella is told by someone slipping up or she comes across the folder. That will send bella home before her cowboy gets back. Maybe Edward can cover his ass by telling her it's a wedding present.... Either way I see some turbulance coming their way. Love this story thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
thank you for the update! hopefully there won't be too much angst coming up. texward is sexy as ever!
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
oh i can see it now .. Bella finding the files while Edward is away and freaking out shit is about to hit the fan isn't it??
love this story though and i love me a hot cowboy :)
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Loving it!!! Think it was the perfect first date too. Can't wait to read more I'm off to next chapter just wanted to congratulate you for the awesome job you do with this guys and your stories!!! you're incredible girl
Kisses.R.
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
i was so glad to see a new chapter. I love this story and the characters so keep them coming.
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Lisa! Just started reading this amazing fic and I'm having a great time. I love how you write and enjoy it very much.
Hope I can catch up soon...
Kisses.R.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Oh, he went from not telling her about buying the company to hiding evidence! Digging deeper! Can't wait to see Bella's reaction when she finds out!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Well, of course Bella is going to find out about Cornflower Press! I'm sure that's going to cause a firework or two, as well as Mike being found out!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Love the outings :)
Reviewer: KitsuShel (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Loved it! Can't wait to see what this doozy of a chapter is!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Excellent chapter!
I hope that Bella takes Edward's news well and that Mike is caught in his lie.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
that e-mail is gonna help so much, i still think she'll be pretty pissed that he bought the company without telling her
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
I'm so excited for the doozy!!
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
wahoooo loved it!
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Cowboy Up
Shame on Edward. The deal was done. He should have spoken. It's going to come back to bite him. Hurry up and update please. Love this story.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bella Knows Best
Man, I wonder how Bella will feel about Renee when she finds out. I have no idea how she will feel about Edward owning the publishing company but I think she will be happy for Jasper. Maybee if Edward dwells on the Jasper aspect and not on her book, she will take it better?
I loved the chapter so much happened! Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bella Knows Best
Great chaapter. Will Bella kick Edward when she finds out he is her new boss?
Will Yardley kick her Edward for not behaiving??? Hope to find out soon.
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bella Knows Best
I really don't see Bella being happy about Edward buying that company behind her back.
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bella Knows Best
love it, just how soon for more chapters? I love this E/B plus the southern aspect of it. soooo good!
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