Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
I laughed when B&E told them what their theam for the wedding would be... That was a good one. Bella took the death of her mother pretty much the way I had thought... But I feel for Charlie when Bella talks to him next. Glad there is a ways to go with your story. Loved it
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
im so glad we are far from done! i always look forward to an update!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
The fallout from Edward having kept yet another secret was smaller than I anticipated. Bella took it fairly well, probably because there is so much else going on. Liked Edward helping with the writer's block and his hands-on demonstration for the make-up-scene ;). As for Newton: he had it coming. Seems like cheating is his foremost character-trait, be it on his boss or his girlfriend, followed closely by arrogance. I hope he's out of the picture for good and Jessica will not prove Edward's uneasy feelings regarding her right. I'm pretty sure Lauren will be harder to deal with.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
i thought Bella would have freaked over another thing he kinda kept from her, but i'm glad all she needed to do was walk away for a bit. loved the Cullen/Newton showdown
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
I'm glad Charlie finally told Bella about Renee.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
Nice to see that some things are being sorted out. I'm wondering what Jenks is going to find out about Renee.
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
Well, poor Bella really has had a lot piling up on her, and poor Edward seems to be the one who has to deliver the blow! I'm glad he was able to knock out her list of woes! And oy, do I hear you about the quake and hurricane! Listening to my house make strange noises as I write in southern New Jersey!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
You have done such a great job keeping Edward a Texan! Love this story more with every chapter!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Secrets Bite Back
Excellent chapter!I loved it!
I'm glad some things got out in the open and cleared.
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: peorialuvstwilight (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
WAsn't this posted before?
Reviewer: sanglin (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
It's actually Texas WomAn's University...
Reviewer: cmv88 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Good so far I am from Dallas and you seem pretty clear so far...but I don't know if some one that is not from here would know what the west end is... also a mention of the pedestrian network would be good...if you have ever spent time in down town you will notice that there are very few people walking the Streets... that's because Dallas has a series of underground walkway and sky bridges connecting most of downtown there are even shops and restaurants that have their main entrances there
Reviewer: cmv88 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Good so far I am from Dallas and you seem pretty clear so far...but I don't know if some one that is not from here would know what the west end is... also a mention of the pedestrian network would be good...if you have ever spent time in down town you will notice that there are very few people walking the Streets... that's because Dallas has a series of underground walkway and sky bridges connecting most of downtown there are even shops and restaurants that have their main entrances there
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
loved it!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Heidi is causing trouble even post mortem. Too bad for her she couldn't enjoy what Edward planned to give her if she backed off. Alice disguised like the ladies in old black-and-white-detective-movies made me smile.
So - will we see Mike going down with the help of his girlfriend? Edward thinks shes disloyal but I can understand her being pissed at him for banging Lauren.
Reviewer: KitsuShel (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Whoa! I'm thinking Jane & Alec had Heidi killed. Can't wait to find out who it was!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Someone better call Scooby Doo to figure out this mystery
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
I am so glad that it wasn't Alice and Jasper that went to see Heidi! I kepy praying that it wasn't them.
But now i'm curious to find out who did kill Heidi even though my money is on the Devereaux Twins. ;)
I can't wait until the wedding :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Whew! That was an exciting chapter! Can Bella pull off a wedding suited to them both?
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
i loved it.....all the mystery and happenings going on great!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
It Is quite a mystery... Could it be Jim and Vicky. Who knows just glad she is gone.
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Your chapters NEVER dissappoint!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Aack! Can things get even worse? Bella is going to start to wonder how much she knows Edward!
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