Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
I also lover this chapter. Love the entire story. Always looking forward to more.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
I think they have enough to keep them warm over the winter! As always, waiting for more!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
Lovely chapter...happy, sweet and hot. Don't think you've ever written a mediocre or bad chapter!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
That was an awesome chapter :) Loved the proposal from Jasper!
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
Yayyy Jasper proposed!
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
God I know that drive from Tyler to Dallas sucks big time. I made it like 4 times this weekend alone. With bad weather it makes it even worse. Yuck.
Update soon ^ ^
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
I loved this chapter too!!! Alice surprised me but she always gets her Jasper in the end!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Holiday Magic
I loved this chapter! Everything about it was wonderful!
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
I loved the filler. It answered alot of questions that I had about what happened to Lauren. I also love the budding bromance between Edward and Jasper and the look into J&A relationship. Can't wait to see more of that. So, what's up next? Christmas? I love a Cullen Christmas!! Maybe a ring for Alice or an unexpected blessing for her to make her see the light? Can't wait for more!
Keep'em coming Sugar Britches!
Stephanie
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
"the shitith hath hitith the fanith" bad quote from a good Heath Ledger movie, but it works
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
oh boy, hopefully she didn't hear the combo to her daddy's gun safe she just might shoot him herself!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
I love that Esme and Bella are getting closer. I feel so bad for Jasper, I hope Alice takes what he says seriously
Reviewer: JensDreams (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
When did Edward talk to Rose about her treatment of Bella? I must have missed it and it's something I've been looking forward to reading. I mean when she kicked her out of the livingroom complaining about the noise.
Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Fluffy and deep goody! U should have let Bella kick tanya's a$&! Jimmy is getting on my nerves and poor Jasper not sure Alice is going to take this news too well and who shot jr(Heidi)? Sweet thanksgiving dinner with Bella and Esme! Great chap more please!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
this was a very busy chapter. Gosh, I wish someone would've given Big Jim and Tanya a shiner. I teally love combative Bella. And sexy Cowboyward just makes my heart melt. Also, thank you for the Esme/Bella interaction. Just heartfelt & lovely. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
i think Edward is right, just put it all out there for her and see where it goes
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Poor Jazz, but I believe that Alice will see reason when he tells her what bothers him. As to the ball: it could have gone worse but was still unpleasant enough with Tanay spreading poison and gossip and Banner trying to get a rise out of Edward. Pulling Bella's chair was completely unacceptable. I gather his blaming Esme for the death of his brother is part of his motivation to destroy Edward's company and he seems to have something else up his sleeve that includes Lauren. I really hope these two will take each other out somehow.
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Loving them, I wish Bella would have ran into Tanya again and knocked the hell out of her!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Can't wait to see what happens! I hope they find where Lauren is hiding!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Excellent chapter!
I loved the moment between Bella and Esme.
I can't wait to see the Banner's get what they deserve.
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Love fierce Bella. Edward should have let her knock Tanya's teeth out :)
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
I wonder what Lauren and Uncle Jim are upto... lets hope they undermine each other.
I hope Jasper approaching Alice with his needs doesn't blow up in his face... and I think Edward should speak to her and then stay out of it!
I'm happy Bella and Esme are forming a tight and pleasant relationship.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
Glad there wasn't too much angst where Bella and Edward was concerned at the party. Well at least Edward didn't make the same mistake as before. Course he didn't wan esteban any where near Bella. So what's with angela's replacement. Is she going to be ok or trouble. James and lauren are just unbelievable. I'd like to see Jasper shake Alice's world.
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Masks of Many Colors
AWW no! don't you dare split up Jasper and Alice! not after all of this! I'll seriously cry. Great chapter. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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