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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Another awsome chapter! 

I'm happy for Charlie and Sue...it's nice to know Charlie still has it...twice even! lol  Twins would be a hoot!  Then Charlie would really have something to crow about! lol

Esteban...Esteban....WTF?  Does he really want to tangle with Edward again?  I hope the sister card backfires and she ends up taking a shine to Tyler! lol

Edward really can be a selfish ass.  It's only two weeks!

I love all the twists and turns, keep up the good work!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Lovin it. I love how Bella can hold her own. I cant wait to see the ass whippin she lays down on Paloma. cowgirl up ya'll!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

I sure hope that Paloma is not able to get Edward into a compromising position. or anything that will screw things up with Bella

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Still with you!!!

So Esteban is STILL pushing his nose into the hen house! I would have thought the fist would have taught him a lesson, but apparently not.

Well I hope they don't fall for his scheme.

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Boy, some people are just 'scum of the earth'...Esteban for one!  Still one of my favorite stories! 

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

I really enjoy your story. I like this Edward and Bella a lot. But I'll be honest. It's beginning to look like there will never be a HEA. I mean, they're married and living their life. But it seems to be one thing after another with them. The company, the ranch, outside forces....it's starting to be too much. I mean, we got rid of Esteban and now we get him back again and his sister? They are married, you moron. Why the need to revisit this? I don't like the idea of another plan to break them up. Been there, done that. The real life situations (work, babies, etc.) are really interesting and show how they deal with them. But at some point, can't they be happy? 

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

 Good chapter.....

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Someone is always trying to hurt them, I wonder how Bella is going to react to Charlie and Sue having a baby.

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

oh no! i don't know if i'll be able to take esteban's plan!! i hope bella killz him this time!!!

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Please don't let anything come between Bella and Edward , no misunderstandings or anything like that , their stronger than that , we've been here before with the Heidi episode , we need something clever to be rid of Sanchez for good

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

man this is all really getting to him now.....i hope he can put it behind him soon

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

I think I'm getting paranoid more and more, suspecting everyone and everything conspiring against Edward. Is Taylor really a cowboy looking for employment? RB seems to be a weak link in operation bring Cullen down, he's doing it just for the money and now he is full of remorse for injuring people. Esme's idea of bying stock would cause them to get more expensive and thus counteracting the effects of the attac on the fertilizer plant. Can't wait to find out more.

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Awesome update, thank you!  Nice to see a vulerable side to our strong, confident Cowboy.  Update soon, please!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Great chapter, I loved it!  So much is going on!  I'm sad to see Quill and Embry leave.  I'm happy for Emmett and Rose.  I'm sure she's happy to be in their house.  Seth is just the cutest thing!

I have an idea who's behind the plant explosion....

I can't wait to see what happens next!  Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Poor Edward! He doesn't like to lose, or quit and he can't get a handle on things. I'm not sure what Bella can do but support him, maybe his priorities have just shifted and his work just isn't it anymore?

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Great chapter! I loved it!

I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Is Crowley going to be a problem? I hated to see quil and embry leave the ranch. Maybe they will come back? Oh Edward does it take estaban to call to see that you have been neglecting your bride. Love the sisters they are such great characters.

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Great Chapter! They're going to find Riley's lighter, totally. 

Can't wait for more.

I'd comment more but its early in the morning and I'd like nothin better than to go back to sleep. 

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Hmmmm... where to start....So many unanswered questions!

Riley finding out that there were people in the factory... his lighter missing... will he cave and spill his guts about everything....

Is Tyler really Tyler? You seem to like to throw kinks in your stories sometimes...hahaha!!!!!!

I think I know who is behind everything... but then again sometimes I get thrown for a loop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 35 - "Once I say I do, you start sayin' I don't"

AWWWWWWW...... :')

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives

is Big Jim buying up the stocks? i hope they can't pull a fast one on Edward....

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives

So I'm guessin' that Big Jim is gonna show up again? That all that is happenin' is because of him? can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 35 - "Once I say I do, you start sayin' I don't"

That was too sweet of Edward...He can be a smart man when he puts his mind to it!!!!!!! on to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

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