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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

Uh oh! I think the cowboy is going to lock Bella in a room that only he has the key to! With everything going wrong in Cullen Inc and now this at the ranch, he must be spinning!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

She's not really gonna leave in the morning now, is she?

Great chapter, glad there wasn't a cliffy!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

Great chapter!

I think that Tyler better leave the state (or the country) very soon because Edward will track him down and....well....I thinkwe know what he might do.

I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

I didn't want to read this chapter because I thought it was going to be about Bonny and Pally setting up Edward. I knew Tyler was going to be trouble. Tha k god Bella had a pistol. 

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

Geeeez. Didn't see that coming! Tyler's really gone off the deep end there! What the hell was he thinkin doin all that?

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

Bella, Texas Ranger!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

Wow. I know Tyler had a few screws loose. I feel bad for Emmett get all the flack for Tyler's bs.

Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 39 - A Whole New Bunch of Trouble

you have no idea how much I look forward to this updating. It's my one of my favorite stories. This story and one other are the only reasons I even visit Twilghted any more.

Reviewer: alinka (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...

Picked up my interest since the first time I read the summary, and goes on as I read the story. Wish you to not have Bella's luck, in having writer's block that is. not the meeting Edward part (who wouldn't want to right?) ;)

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

addicted to this story

Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Quid Pro Quo

i would even take the soap in my eye with my contacts in...lol guess correctly on charlie, oh and who doesn't love commandward :-)

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Perfect timing for Sanchez for pushing his sister on Edward. The other boys' suspicion of Crowly only feeds my mistrust more. With all the sh** at office and Maria leaving Edward and bella have giant dark clouds looming over their lives. At leas Charlie and Sue are happy, though I reckon Leah will not be very pleased about the new sibling.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

At least Edward and Bella made up. Edward can be such a man.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

oooh....the plot thickens.  is it bad that i dont even want to see esteban's sister make edward's head turn? he and bella are so in love that nothing needs to come between them.....this can go one of two ways.....one- in your face sanchez......or two- me bing so freakin pissed off and mad at edward and bella!   please, i don't wanna be mad at them!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

ugh! Esteban Sanchez is a delusional pig, freaking get it thru your skull, she'll never be yours, you ass. you deserve the ass whooping of a lifetime for this idiotic stunt! anyway....these 2 need serious alone time after all this drama has passed....way to much stress around here.....

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Still with ya!  Enjoyed the update as always.  The one aspect of the story I'm less interested in is Charlie/Sue baby stuff.  I think the corporate espionage, marriage & family encouters our couple faces are enough.  You may be going somewhere with C&S, but I guess am not following.  I hope there aren't too many "soap opera"moments thrown in with Bonny/Paloma plan.

 

Thanks for the update and look forward to the next one.

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Really? We're not done with Esteban Sanchez yet? He's an idiot and this particular part of the plot seems unnecessary (I'm sure you have some reason though for it to be intertwined back in there). But they've already had the potential break-up because of cheating thing with Heidi (though he didn't actually cheat, and if he did then Bella's better off without him). So either it'll be ANOTHER misunderstanding (especailly with their marriage being a little rocky currently) or he'll (or she'll) actually cheat, in which case I'm completely done with this story. So I guess we'll see.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Well, I'd say there's always Skype sex, but it doesn't look like there's much time for that! Although if Paloma comes around while Bella is gone, Bella might be home early!

Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Wow so Edwards being an ass! Love him still though! why can't Bonny just give up and leave them be, who is buying the stocks and please don't make Edward cheat! Great job and more please!

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Another great chapter, I am really looking forward to where this all goes :)

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Still around... and still reading and reviewing!!!!!!!!!! So we've got someone trying to break up the happy couple, Charlie is gonna be a daddy again, maybe and we are still trying to figure out what the hell is going on with CI!!!!

We still don't know much about Tyler but Sam isn't to sure about him so that is kinda bad!!!!!!!

Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

I really can't see any woman/man coming between our two love birds.... But I am sure their going to try. Charlie and sue are so cute can hardly wait for our other couple to get pregnant. But first they have to handle Cullen Enterprises and the book your and what ever you bestow on them. Love your thinking you come up with some great shit.

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Wow... here I thought the plot was winding down... I was totally wrong... it's winding up even more!

I'm afraid to even think about how this is going to play out, but I'll definately be reading it!

I am glad that Edward got his head out of his ass and I hope that helps to keep Pal... whatever from "turning his head".

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: dachsgirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine

Just thought you'd want to know, Princeton doesn't have a law school.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not

Great chapter!

I don't think Esteban's plan is going to work. I can't wait to see it backfire!

Hopefully Edward will survive being without Bella. I think it'll be tough, but he'll make it.

I can't wait to see what will happen next!

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