Oooooo I can't wait for this conversation! Please update soon! Loved this chap by the way :)

oh  some horse shit is going to hit the fan now buddy!  Poor Edward keeps having to clean up other people's messes.

Great chapter, enjoyed it like always.  Hope you have a great Turkey day if you celebrate it.

Secrets such , and this big one is comming back to bite esme and Carlisle on the arse, why does Edward get to clean up the mess?

OOO that hoochie better watch her self. Bella knows how to use a gun! I can't wait for the next one!

Have you First & Ten by Nolebucgrl or Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls by Bannerday. Both of those stories at really really good.

Can't wait for the next. Keep'em Coming Sugar Brithces!

Stephanie

So, did Estaban give up now? Did Bella and Tanya bond? Why is Esme so stubborn? I can't wait to see what happens next!

I hope Edward is smart enough not to fall for Paloma's trick. Can't wait for more baby making! :)

Wow awesome chapter!

So if you're looking for a great fanfiction I've got a few to name for you. 

Morphing Games by Orringtonrose- it's like a Twilight version of the Hunger Games and it's spectacular! The author even has her own wordpress where she does commentary on the chapters. The girl knows her stuff too. Themes, foreshadowing, the works. It's on Twilighted, fanfiction.net and her own wordpress. 

Bad Boy Cullen by HeartOfDarkness- This one is pretty awesome with the characters. Bella is a grade a B**** and boy does she know it. Works for a bigger B****, Rosalie. She's told to do an article on a popular romance novelist, Alice Cullen. Cue Edward the pretty much recovered Cancer patient with a bad reputation. Insert tons of manipulation and ta-da! You have a highly dynamic and deceitful group that just doesn't give up. It's on Twilighted.

Arms by Virginia May- Outstanding story. Bella is an Olympic gold medalist that has to go under protection services. Big mob guys wanna kill her for sendin the mob boss to prison for muder. Changes her identity and even age and moves in with the Cullens. Then comes school... and with school, teachers. Here's where Edward comes in first. He's her math teacher. Instant connection and the story continues. Mad emotion and some crazy happenings. Twilighted.

Confidential by wandb- Spectacular story. Bella moves to wine country and opens a restaurant. Angry betrayed past life Edward shows up and hates her for reasons later revealed. Edward is a wine-smith (not sure what that's really called) and owns the best vinyard (I think thats it) in Napa. The two slowly connect and ton's of drama pursues. Chef Bella and Master Wine Dealer Edward come to play. Twilighted.

Fan Fictions, Sex Gods and Single girls by bannerday- Can't the title explain it all? Bella is a teacher that just moved in to this neighborhood, also a fanfiction writer for a totally construed story, lol you'll see. In comes Edward sporting a boner on move in day (he lives across the street). Words are exchanged and the fun begins. Just saying, Bells thinks he's a jerk, he thinks she's odd, the two have a mutual attraction that neither have acted on.. so far. This one is Hilarious. Class A comedy! Just read it to find out more :) Also on Twilighted.

 

Okay so there's a few that I'm ga-ga over :) I guarantee you'll love them! If you don't like one go back to the list and try another. At least make it through chapter 1 on each. Well worth the time. 

 

Carry on and have fun! I cannot wait for more! Great job with this story, if someone else were to ask for some story suggestions, I'd reccommend this one first. Keep up the great work!

ha! Esteban and Paloma were shot down! now maybe he'll get it thru his thick skull that Bella is OFF LIMITS! i think Edward is gonna be very happy with Jenks :)

These two together are just too adorable.   I had to laugh when Bella's dad, along with the rest of the company, caught Bella and Edward in the hay...er sleeping in the hay.   Too much for Edward to handle, until he took a cold shower.   It was so sweet to see Bella making breakfast for the boys and they were so happy and helpful  cleaning up.   I can;t wait for Bella and Edward to have a real night together...Hmmmm.   Love it!

Big Jims going down!  I can't wait!  Man I hope Lauren and Mike spend some time in Jail also!

It doesn't look like Esteban's plan has a chance...smart man that Edward! lol

Is it wrong of me to like Esteban and want him to find someone he can love, besides Tanya?  But who......Maybe Paloma can get together with Embry?  But then we still have to find a Claire for Quil......

I wonder if Alice will find out that Carlisle isn't her biological father...

I love this story keep up the updates!  Take care, Dixie

Well, Thank God Edward realized that Paloma bitch was coming on to him big time! It made me laugh when he told her she could talk to Emmett!

I'm still worried about that asshole, Esteban.

Kinda proud of Edward for not being squeemish about having sex during that time of the month...

 

Arrghh!  Give me MORE, more more!!  :)  I'm loving this story -- Thanks fgor sharing your talent!

oh I love it...  I was getting a liitle tinsy bit concerned for just a few Nano Seconds there...about dearest Cowboy Edward... Bella is a smart girl and even when she has self esteem issues she is woman enough to say well perhaos he would be better with someoen else rather than create a huge ruckus... now with that being said I don't think Edward will cheat and I don't think that Bella would give him up easily...I think our girl has grit.....  Praise be that they are finally getting the low down on swarmy Jim Banner......    

Anything by SexiLexyCullen Quite Storm & Weather the Storm; littlecat358 Demons in my Dreams; anything by tufano79  she has numerous stories and a wonderful blogspot she's very talented not unlike yourself...  those are just three but so many more fabulous writers...

Take care till next update take care....Kathy