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Reviewer: jamiesue00 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 53 - The Love of Family

YOU MAKE MY SUNDAYS! LOVE THIS STORY. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 53 - The Love of Family

Yes a tissue warning would have been nice....lol. Loved the development of the story. The preeclampsia nearly scared me to death! Great how everything turned out even for em and rose.

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

Great update, thank you!  Looks like things are wrapping up nicely.  One thing that bugged me was Rosalie disclosing to Emmett Bella's pregnancy.  In m y book at least, keeping a secret deosn't involve telling your spose. Glad it all worked out.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

I never expeced Big Jim to off himself. He was a jerk but I wouldn't want to leave a fortune to Victoria if I were in his position, she doesn't deserve it. I'm glad Emmett didn't take Edward's punch personally. So Edward to feel nedlessly insecure.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

Aww! Though Edward did deserve the fractured hand!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

this was very very good keep up the great work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

Oh Edward just thinks with the wrong head sometimes. I do love when he goes Caveward every now and then though. Can't wait for Bella to reveal she's pregnant :)

Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

That was hilarious and sweet at the same time. Why Ed would think emmett and Bella would fool around is beyond me but heh it sure was funny! Looking forward to the party and telling the Cullen's about the new edition to the family!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

No kidding, he really did jump to the wrong conclusion.... geez Edward have a little faith in the people you love! lol

I can't wait to see how Esme and Carlisle take the news!  Damn Esme might try and move in with them!  lol

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

damn, punch 1st , ask questions later...lol typical man.... Em is such a great friend

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

That was great!! I actually really loved how Edward jumped to the wrong conclusion, and punched Emmett! I thought it was very well written and was a glimpse of how Jealousward usually is about Bella! Emmett is a good man, and even though he could have really given Edward a bit of a beat down, and Edward knew this, he understood and accepted the situation, well, this time, lol. Love how excited Edward is over the baby, and prying Esme!! Can't waitforthenews to come out! I am also enjoying the story within the story that you are writing!! Well done!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

I loved this chapter! I'm glad Bella told him...now I can't wait to see everyone else's reactions!

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 52 - Extra! Extra! Real All About It...

Sorry to see this coming to an end. I've enjoyed it.

Although, it's shame Edward's practically the last to know he's going to be a father. Emmett and Rose before Edward? What a shame, and shame on Bella for waiting. Jeez Bella, why don't you wait and let the baby tell him. Glad Emmett got popped.  A nice romantic reveal down by the creek would have been nice.

 

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

Still having fun reading your lovely story!  It should have more reviews! <3

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

That was a lot, but really well done. I had a feeling Bella was expecting, and YAY! I'm also glad she went to Rosalie, and Rose was OK with helping, not uncomfortable. I really thought the part where Emmett and Rose were talking about adoption, and how much emotion was expressed there. I also had to laugh when Rose commented on how interesting it was going to be when they went to meet up with Jake, haha. I also enjoyed how Bella surprised Edward with the horseback riding on their anniversary. Perfect! Just like your story, perfect!!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

OMG!  I was pretty sure you would leave us with a cliffie!  Thank God you didnt!!!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 50 - Friendly Competition

OMG! Are you from DC?  How did I now know that?  I live in VA but work in DC.  Can you tell me the name of the Restaurant, please pretty please?

Liz

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

Great chapter - yes you did cover a lot of ground but it does help to move the story along sometimes. So glad she is finally pregnant xx

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

Yaaaaaaaay! Babies everywhere!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

I'd love to visit the sout of France with Edward (sigh)

A lot of babies in this chapter. Now that the two little Swans are here Bella and Rosalie can "practice" a little. Who would have thought that Edward would be asked for relationship-advice? - loved that.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

God I love HEA's!!!  I'm so happy for Em and Rose deciding on adoption, on Jake meeting his Ness and Edward and Bella are pregger's!!!  Life is good! lol

Take care, and thank you for making me smile! :)  Dixie

Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read Edward's reaction. Is there any possiblility that Rose could get preggers? I think it would be such a sweet twist if all these years she thought she was not capable and then she and emmett are able to do what docters said was impossible. Any buns in the oven on the A&J front? I an sitting on the edge of my seat with baited breath waiting for the next chapter

Keep'em Coming Sugar Britches!

Stephanie

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

yay! i loved it..its good to see the seconary charcters lives working out!

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