Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Oh, please don't worry. I'm Southern born and bred, and I drop the g all the time. I'm not ignorant either--I just talk like that. :o)
I'm glad to find this story and love the idea of Edward in some cowboy jeans. Mmmm hmmm. I also love the idea of him living in Tyler; I have friends there and have been through many times on the way to visit family in Texas.
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
Mmmmm, I love me a cup of stemy Cowboy. Giddy Up!-Deborahlicious
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
I loved it! Bella giving her Dad the what for was funny! lol Crap is Bella going to have to hide in the house when Charlie gets there? lol
Take care, Dixie
p.s. This kiss was hot!
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
Darn! Things were going so well... The attraction between these two is electric. I look forward to more.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
i hope that they can save the foal! and that charlie doesn't ask too many questions!
Reviewer: Little71099 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I love this story just as much as the other two I've read. I'm going back now to pick up the others I haven't. If they're anything like Gateway and Georgia, I know it will be love at first read. I can't wait for more on Cowboy-ward.
Author's Response: Shucks! I'm very flattered! Hope you like them.
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Ooh la la! What the hell, go to the ranch, girl! There'll be other people around, so it's not like they'll be totally alone... but of course, there's always that meddlin' lil' sister, Alice!
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I can't wait to find out if she goes or not. And how Jacob plays out in this one!
Reviewer: Jordan Lee (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Guess Who's Coming to Dinner
Hey,
I didn't even check that I could look up your name and see the titles of your stories. I feel like a duh!! LOL I should have looked before asking you to send me your story titles. Sorry about that. Anyway, I look forward to reading your other work and continued success.
Reviewer: Jordan Lee (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...
Hello,
This story is Brilliant!!!! I love Edward and can not wait to read more. I am fairly new to reading the stories and I would love to read your other stories. Would you please email me and tell me the titles of your stories? My address is sharonlynnpage@yahoo.com. I would appreciate it so much and hope you don't mind my asking you. I hope it isn't too much trouble. Thank you for writing this amazing story...you writing is wonderful!
Best to you
Reviewer: mandyflinn (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Love it! A southern accent + Edwards= a happy me!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Dang, what a perfect first date! Edward defiantly brought his A-game!
I can't wait for more! Take care, Dixie
Author's Response: Oh, girl...just wait...this man hasn't even begun to bring his A-garme...
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...
Very nice story so far. I like the reference to the third book. Very nice way to bring "Gateway" into this one!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I hope she goes.... And as for drinks with Jacob that's one invite I hope she turns down. Thanks for a great first date. Looking forward to their week-end (hopefully).
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...
Loving this story... But I am partial to cowboys. Loved how you wrote your other stories into this chapter. Now on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: chikki (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I love your writing - so no schocker here that I am addicted to this story! Such a lovely change of pace, the characters are adorable. Your Edward is *sigh* of course she'll go - if she doesn't I will!!! I am excited to see where they go to get their HEA - just not too much drama please! :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Love the first date. I want to go on that date.
Reviewer: ParentingTipsDaily (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I hope she tells Jake when she goes for drinks that she is not intereted. And Hell Yes, she should take the invitation...for research purposes, wink, wink, nod, nod!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
she's a fool if she doesn't go! If she doesn't....can I go?????
Author's Response: I'll tell him to call you if she wimps out!
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Sizzling! I hope she turns Jake down and goes for the weekend... but that it stays friendly and flirty for now. I like the 2 of them together. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I really love your story so far!! I've been following "Gateway" too and that one I love also!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I submitted the epilogue for Gateway today, so when my beta has time out of her very busy life to validate it, it'll be there. I hope you'll like the way I end it!
Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Hi I'm enjoying this story very much so far so thanks for writing.
I just want to advise you of one thing though about horses. When a mare has a baby it is called a foal, which is non gender based but when the foal is a boy it is called a colt and when it's a girl it's a filly. It's one or the other so when you say that the mare had a colt and then say it's a filly is very confusing indeed. It's either a colt (boy) or a filly (girl) or alternatively just a foal. ;)
Author's Response: Thank your for reminding me...my stupid mistake because I know better. I was caught up in the story and didn't pay attention to my facts...sorry about that! I'll be more careful in the future. Glad you like the story!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I think she should go of course! :) I mean the man has 6 bedrooms to pick from so there's no pressure of them staying in the same bed so soon. Loved the date and I'm glad she told him about her date with the dog sorry I mean jacob. Nah I'm not really sorry about calling him that. I just hope no more hanging out with him. I liked that Edward wants to get an apartment in the city to be able to spend some more time with Bella. Esme is a smart lady. :)
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Come on, Bella! Go! Go! Go!
They don't *have* to do anything, ya know.
If that was the first date, things will get mighty fine after the third (or before, because Edward tends to want things to get out of the way, lol!), or perhaps even the weekend over. Is that considered the second date?
You know, it would be a great opportunity to see what kind of life he leads, if she could ever picture herself there, full time or part-time, or not.
I love this fic!
Spikey
Reviewer: DDL2928 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
I would definity spend the weekend with him!!!
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