Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
Oh cowboy!
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."
Hmmm, okay - gotta say, that was a fu-un date! Go Bella go ... the ranch is waiting!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
i hope the foal is ok, how embarrassing to be caught with you new boyfriend sleeping in the barn by your dad....lol
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...
still reading ...
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
She's perfect for Edward, but daddy probably isn't very happy right now! I wonder how edward is going to look him in the eye when something less innocent happens!
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block
Hmm ... so far, pretyy interesting.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
I love animales of any kind, I only rode a horse once and he took of with me on him and I didn't know how to stop him. He did stop and I haven't been on a horse since. But I still love them. But if I had Cowboy Edward I get on that horse so fast it would make your head spin. Love your story.
Lilly
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
Busted... by Charlie! Embarrassing. Nice of her to make breakfast for the mob. Great chapter, what do you have in store for the cute couple? I can't wait to find out!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
I am just loving your story. Edward as a cowboy... Yummy. Thanks for a great update
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
hmm...for some reason i have an overwhekming desire to sleep in a barn. great update.
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
I knew Charlie was going to give her shit for staying over night. I just can't believe that they got caught sleeping together the next morning.
What kind of trouble could these 2 get into while riding a horse??? Is there a hospital visit coming up?
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! More please?!!?
Reviewer: timide (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
Awww, so loving this Bella and Edward. Now how about posting, say....., 10-15 chapters at a time? Sounds great right? lol.... Thank you for posting.!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
I would love to roll in the hay all night with Edward!!! I'd even cook him breakfast afterwards!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
:)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
It was all good!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
i wonder if shes actually going to stay on the horse?
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
Hey it's a great story I remember being up all night cause Buckshot got colic from sour feed you can't be lazy with a horse cause you'll pay in more ways than one.I love that they spent the night in the barn together.Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
I don't know much about sick fillies, but your description seemed pretty accurate to me.
I loved the night in the hay!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay
Oh, daddy Swan is protective of his baby. But lovin Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
Yay she went! Smart girl! :) Hmmm.. wondering what Charlie will think if he finds Bella there. Oh well it really shouldn't matter because she's an adult plus he's having his own sleepover.
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
Loving this story. But you shouldn't be surprised. I love the others too. After "Gateway", I do hope that this is not as angsty. But I'm down for the ride regardless.
Author's Response: I can promise you it won't be anything like "Gateway"...that took it out of me. i wanna have a little fun, and hell, how bout them cowboys... Thanks!
Reviewer: displacement (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
great story!! (im)patiently waiting for the next chapter!
Reviewer: seadragon (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
charlie's reaction when he sees bella there is going to be fun. he can't actually lecture bella thugh. he was bonding with sue's kids and planning marriage before he even told bella he was seeing someone. if anyone should be pissed it's her. please update soon.
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
God I remember being up all night cause of a horse with colic thise were the days
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