Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Well some angst makes it more interesting. When they eat at Cattlemen's remember that down here we have quail on some menu's and some steak houses offer calf fries.
Love my Texas Edward.
Author's Response: I do realize about the quail, but the calf fries scare me. I know what they are, but I don't think I'd have the guts to try 'em. Have you? My hubs goes to Dallas about once a month. Should I tell him to try them?
Reviewer: DDL2928 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
I really like this story. I am glad there won't be much angst cause I hate that! You are not updateing fast enough :)
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
I loved how edward surprised her in the bathroom. Too funny. As for their love session, I give you kudos. Always love the way you write lemons.
Hmmm, I wonder what Charlie wants??
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Bow-chicka-bow-wow is right! These two are very good together. :) I can't wait for more!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
I think you did a great job with it. :)
Reviewer: seadragon (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
well-written smut just makes my day better. very hot and very much appreciated.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Loved it! I'm waiting for Bella to ride Edward like Seabiscuit :)
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
*happy sigh* I'm so glad i read this chapter! I'm sooo happy that they finally did it! And it was so... real. I simply loved it, but i'm not surprised at all because i've loved every chapter! I promise i'll read the next one for sure :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Well now I just want to see him lose control and take her in a place he has no business taking her in!
Reviewer: gris2001 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
I've read all ur stories they are great, this one is amazing!
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
I love this story to and you did a wonderful job. I am starting to think I might like to find me a cowboy. Till then I guess I have to settle for yours. Till next time.
Lilly
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Ooooo....nice! Think I need a smoke and a quiet, dark room to lie down in now. And a cowboy like him!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
My goodness! *fanning myself* that was a juicy lemon. I love these two. Such a fun story to read. thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: bluedove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
what happening with jacob?? bella did not get a chance to talk to him yet did she?
i feel like he is gonna cause some kind of trouble
such a lovely story, love the southern
Author's Response: Take a deep breath. She's gonna talk to Jacob next chapter, I promise. Glad you like it. I love the souther as well!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
awesome!!!! loved it!
Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Hell. Yes.
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
that was fun. :)-
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Now that was fuckin worth the wait very good sex time can't wait for morelike what does Charlie wanna talk about and how the diner is gonna go @ the Cattleman Club
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
It was perfect and I loved it... Looking forward to more
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
Uh, yeah. Why the heck is my husband at work right now?
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
there's no tearing these two apart now...lol hope that meeting goes well!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow
will jake be bugging her the next day? they are really good together! im sure that bella will be a huge hit with the guys from italy!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Rascally Rabbit
I love the progress they're making. Now she really needs to make it clear to jacob she is not interested and is in a exclusive relationship.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Rascally Rabbit
Love the story. Glad she got rid of Heidi. I knew she would. Perhaps Heidi will come back around, but I think Bella can handle her. Now.. She needs to tell Jacob straight up...... I am in a relationship that is exclusive. PERIOD.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Miss Congeniality, She Ain't
Thank goodness Rose was there to talk some sense into Bella and supplied her with the liqiud courage because she wasn't really listening to Edward when he was telling her that they were never engaged. So yeah heidi is a complete whore and had some nerve coming back into Edward's life. Oh and jacob needs to take a hint and find someone new to stalk. :D
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