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Reviews For Horse Play
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

very interesting, cant wait to read more, i have to admit i waited for you to complete it before i would read it, it looked so good i didnt want to have to wait for one delicous drop of ranch hand edward ... hmmmm!~

LOVE MAC!

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 22: Tripped Up by Deja Vu

aww. Edwards is being a little overprotective though, and not very trusting obviousley. I'd be mad to.

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

babies! ok sorry I'm done now. I know what that panic is like, something similar happened to me and my hubby before we got married, the two week wait was definitely stressful. Bring on the drama!


 

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 16: Happy Birthday, Indeed

uh oh!

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 15: Mending a Bridge I Thought I'd Burned

oh boy...

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: Going Back to Move Forward

I was surprised to see Edwards pov I dident think it would be in this story sence its all been Bella up to this point. I loved it I kinda missed seeing his side of things I hope theres more from his side. this is one of those times I"m glad I dont have to wait for the next chapter to come out.

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide

loved the lemon.

Charlie was so funny in this chapter I laughed so hard that was great.

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

I'm sorry but I think she's a bit to afrade of what her dad will think I mean shes a grown woman, I think Charlie will surprise them though.

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: This is Me

sounds like Bella's a bit of a daddys girl. so am I though so I can totaly relate.

the little scene between her and edward was hot. cant wait to read more. oh and I love Alice. She's one of my favorate characters

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Playing House

hot, and sweet at the same time. loved it.

Reviewer: chantiemaya (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

I've been caught up in reading this lovely story for a few days now. I am actually at chapter 14, but i'm copying the text to my email account so i can read it on the train - yeah that's how addicted i am ;) LOVE the story, love horses too so that is all very interesting to read. love the lemons. love the characters, well basically, it's totall awesome :) thanks so much for this great story!!

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Grounded

I love this story so far, makes me laugh (especially the star trek comment) and I love the snarck and the obvious attraction. I'm sad she's hurt though.


 

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Agree to Disagree

holy mother of god....ooook next chapter

Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

love this so far! Its not like anything that I have read before. cant wait to read more. I can deffanatley understand why Bellas acting the way she is but I think she needs to lighten up a bit... cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

I loved the start, this should be fun!

Reviewer: MiZpamier (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

really really good story.. I really enjoyed reading it:D

thankyou!

byee

Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 09:00 AM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

Iloved your story so much; this E/B was great; it will be a favorite for a long time but I will start to watch for the other stories you have. 

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 03:49 PM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

Great story!

Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 21: Campfire Tales

Dr. Reid is AWESOME!!!!!

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

i think they should do it ,they can always have a party later

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

Alice Esme and Rose are gonna kill her! i can't believe its over. Amazing job on this! you should be so proud! i can't wait for the sequel!!!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas


Thank you!

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 02:11 PM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

Thats the way you do it. Sometimes. Thanks.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

So sweet! I'm glad they didn't get married dressed like Trekkies! Can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: Deaconess (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

Great read! Can't wait for the sequel!

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