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Reviewer: stark (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 21: Campfire Tales

You had me until the pregnancy. It's overplayed and, while I liked your story, I won't continue reading.

Author's Response:

Sorry to hear that. Hopefully you find a story that caters more toward what you're looking for.

C'est la vie.

 

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

OMG I love the push and pull on my emotions all throughout this chapter. Is she or isn't she? Is she or isn't she? I'm assuming it's possible to have a period-like bleed in the very early stages of pregnancy?
Love love love the hot barn sex! And Edward getting caught out by Charlie when he lied about why they were late for dinner? Too cute :)
Bella getting caught chowing down on bloody steak? Priceless!!
Now what the hell did that preg test say???



Author's Response:

LOL! I've already commented on FFn, but just wanted to acknowledge you here too! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Now I'm off to review the next few chapters of Wild!!

 

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: maggieblock (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

Lol... Classic! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

she's pregnant right ?? either that or she has some crazy disease LOL

love this story so much :)



Author's Response:

LOL! A couple people thought that my mentioning cramps a few chapters back was me hinting that I was setting Bella up for a disease! LOL!

So glad you're enjoying this story! I love writing it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: puglover770 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

I love it!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

That makes me happy!!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: freedomunites626 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

oh please dont do pregnancy, its so cliche for these stories and i love this one! i want to see her compete and succeed before they bring a baby into the mix.



Author's Response:

While I know it would be cliche, I want to assure you that no matter which direction I go, I promise it's for a reason.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Nope, not gonna scream.....I'm sure you can read my mind right now....lol. I don't know, I'm kinda hoping she's not, but B&E do seem like they want a positive result. I leave it in your capable hands. ( but the meat thing did freak me out and Charlie knowing about the switcheroo was too funny)

Author's Response:

If you were thinking that I'm fucking awesome, then yes, I can totally read your mind ;-) Oh, that's NOT what you were thinking? Frick!

Glad you liked Charlie knowing about Bella's ham scam. I was really looking forward to outing her :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: acogar (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Your story is awesome I love how you keep the real characters the same but change them to fit your story. This chapter had me on my toes and the cliffhanger sucked but i guess i will have to wait to see what happens with the whole prego not prego thing next week lol keep up the writing its awesome.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far! I really enjoy writing it and it was important to keep the characters' known personalities in tact while moulding them around this new environment.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

omg!!!! i have no idea your good at leaving us hanging lol please post soon!



Author's Response:

LOL! I do tend to do a good cliffie often, huh? heh heh heh...

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: mia513 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

lovingnthis story. i still think she will be pregnant . cant wait to read and find out for sure.



Author's Response:

Well, the next chapter is just with the prereaders so it should be up n a day or so!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

I'd say preggo spotting is normal Bella eating red meat and horny prego is my vote



Author's Response:

LMAO! I know! She didn't even go for a "gateway meat" like chicken or fish! she went right for the steak!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: roxinfox23 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Ah I am loving this story!!! Keep up the good work!

 



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

You, you...you know what you are! That's all you're gonna get now!

Author's Response:

*hangs head in shame* I know...

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Awesome chapter. Horrible cliffe though! Can't wait for more!

 



Author's Response:

Horribly AWESOME, you mean ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: kimmyg (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

PREGGERS!! :)



Author's Response:

we shall seeeeee!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

I love it.. This has been one of my fav stories to read!! Thanks for all of your hard work!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so much! I've relaly enjoyed writing it so far!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: MonkeyStar (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Duh Duh Duh!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: maggieblock (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Omg! You suck! Lol! 



Author's Response:

HAHA!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

I think she's going 2 be pregnant.But u caught me by surprise with Bones when he got on 1 knee .So time will tell can't wait 4 the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

HA! I did catch you all off guard with Bones! Okay, I can see why there are so many skeptics among you all now :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Light period/spotting & early! Sounds like implantation to me!!
Great chapter.....

Author's Response:

That's a prety good guess... The next chapter is ready and with the pre-readers. so I should be able to post soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Damn!!!!   NOOOoooooo!   Gah!  OK...I had to get that out of my system.   Like I didn't expect it.   It's like a soap opera ending, just missing the "Duh Duh Duuuuuuhhhhh" sound effect.   LOL.  Wow..what a great chapter.  The intensity of the sex...WOW!  How Bella was so horny, and then almost got caught by Charlie...lol.    How Edward and Charlie find her eating that steak....Haaaa...had to laugh.   How you wrote everything was so descriptive, as usual, and I loved it.    Got to give us more.   LOL!  By the by...I too had a ton of bleeding at about two months...didn't know if I was pregnant or not...she's 16 now.....LOL!   Love it!   You rock our world!



Author's Response:

It's exactly like a soap opera! LOL! So glad you enjoyed the chapter (especially the barn lovin'--I had a lot of fun writing that one)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Jully (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Ahhhh, I hate cliffies!!! :) I think she's pregnant :) I love this story, please keep it up!



Author's Response:

Oh come on... Cliffies are AWESOME!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: writinginthemargins (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

OH YOU ARE A CRUEL CRUEL CRUEL HUMAN BEING!!!!!  AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH  I think she's pregnant, getting your period does not mean you can't be pregnant, my mom had her period for the first 3 months of her pregnancy with me, so I've never trusted that rule.  BAHHHHHHH you better post quickly or you're going to have crazy fan girls banging on your virtual door! 

PS I loved this chapter :)



Author's Response:

BAHAHA! I love the reactions from 90% of the readers after this chapter! LOL! I fully expected it and I just couldn't NOT do it! The chapter is with my pre-reader and I hope to post it in the next couple of days!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

Your'e killing us with the cliffies!!!!! she has some aweful strange behavior going on if she isn't pregnant. I guess she doesn't realize you can still have a period and be pregnant sometimes :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

HAHA! I want to say I'm sorry, but the truth is, I'm kinda not! LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

that was so wrong......well I know from personal experience i had a regular period until I went to the MD at 16 weeks   ,,,but it seems like they were botha little bummed about it when they thought she had [tarted her peroid    that still was  so wrong



Author's Response:

Yes, it is possible to spot, while it's not an actual period according to doctors, it can definitely mirror it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

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