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Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Raise Your Glass
That was a great chapter. Loved the Bella and Alice put Angela in her place. Although I have such a hard time wrapping my brain around an evil Angela...
Loved the talk Edward and Bella had, and the kiss!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Raise Your Glass
cant wait for more! send it soon!
LOVE MAC!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: lilgreen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Raise Your Glass
I love the that you have them talking interwar of just stewing about things and coming up with the wrong conclusions. .....and Mac is great!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Raise Your Glass
Angela knows she has lost Edward as her back up man when she's home. Especially to Bella Swan the girl who used her as a back up friend when Emmett wasn't around. So she wants to make sure Bella's insecuriities will break her up with Edward. Knowing Bella will leave rather than have her heart be broken. Playing both sides against the middle. Telling Edward things he wants to hear that she's happy that he's happy, but making sure Bella sees all the affectionate moves on her part and his reactions. Then telling Bella she's just a substitute for her and now that she's back Edward will return to her. Parallel to how she felt when Bella left her to return to Emmett as playmates. As Bella said Angela never made any effort to extend their friendship by calling to have Bella come over to her house or to have herself come over to the Swan's home to continue their friendship. Never made any attempt in school either to pursue anything further. Alice told her off. Edward didn't think Angela would do that, but assured Bella of his feelings that he was all in for their relationship. Mac has fun messing with Bella and Edward when he catches them in embraces. They do need to discuss both of their careers and how they will mess together in the future. There is still the stalker situation to deal. Bella really wants to prove she's more successful than Angela just to make up for all the insults Angela passed her way. The more people who know the truth the more chances the stalker will know where she is and the stalking and danger will find her in Forks. Of course, strangers in Forks are easily detected since it is a small town and everyone knows everyone and everyone's business.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
P.S. As usual, you hit the nail on the head about Angela playing both sides against the middle! =)
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 05:20 AM · On: Raise Your Glass
Absolutely fantastic! I never thought of just ripping the hippo off... Might have felt good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 04:35 AM · On: Raise Your Glass
lmao!!!! WE had a similar incident with the blue hippo but alas he was not meant to chomp again my huband broke him real good hehhehehe. Love the game night and surprise to have Rose through a fit would have loved to of seen that!! Look forward to more as always post again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
P.S. These poor, poor abused hippos! LOL
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Raise Your Glass
I want to ring Angela's neck. Can't wait for the date!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Raise Your Glass
Uhh that was so cute!! lol I loved it and i'm so happy for edward and bella! well until next time
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The weekly teasers are up on the blog as we speak. Next up for RH, some Dashboard Confessional. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
It's been an interesting weekend, to say the least. I was accused of plagiarizing the Rabbit Heart Outtake that I've been writing for the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past and since the person hasn't replied back to me, I have no idea what story they think it was ripped from. That teaser is also up on the RH blog, so if it's familiar to any of you, please let me know, so I can see for my own eyes. My words come from my heart, so that accusation was pretty hurtful.
Thanks again and I'll see you with the next chapter soon!
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, Mr. Cullen, all I know for this date of ours is that we're heading into Seattle and spending the night. Having Alice pack my overnight bag was pretty devious, by the way. Can I at least get a few hints?"
He smiled and shook his head. "Well, I have a full day planned for us and I'm sure that we'll be beat by the time it's over, so I figure that we could spend the night at my apartment. It's a few blocks from my office and there's two bedrooms, so you don't have to worry about your virtue."
She bit her lip and turned her face towards the window so he couldn't get a glimpse of her own blush. It wasn't her virtue that she was worried about. It was his.
Taking her silence as discomfort, he started to backtrack. "But, if that's not something you're comfortable with, we can grab a hotel room downtown. It's not a problem."
She looked at him in surprise and smiled. "No, I have no problem staying with you, I know you're a perfect gentleman."
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 02:22 PM · On: Hurricane Drunk
Such a relief that Bella & Edward didn't avoid each other for an extended period there :) Even more so tha Jake's a big part of that!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
Thank you for making Jacob just helpful and Angela back off -at least for now. You had me worried here and Bella has enough problems to solve already.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Hysteria
err "uh oh", and cue the other shoe dropping? :P
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 01:34 PM · On: Hurricane Drunk
Aww, that was a very sweet way to wrap up the chapter and the Angela drama. And her talk with Jake was good. It's nice to see him become her friend and ally against the stalker.
Looking forward to more Bella and Edward!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Hysteria
Oh wow. Quite an eventful chapter! Bella got her head out of her ass and made her grand gesture. And I'm really glad to see them make some headway, but now Angela's back.
I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter to see what happens next!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Hurricane Drunk
I loved this chapter and they're finally together!!! lol Hope your back gets better! until next time
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 09:07 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
I'm glad Edward told Angela to take a hike. She had broken him more times tjan was necessary. Just using him when she was home as a distraction. Not really caring about him only now because she had learned he apparently had an interest in someone else. Jake knew both Edward and Bella both were in love with each other. The evidence was written all over their faces when they looked at each other. They just hadn't told the other how they truly felt for fear of rejection and pain. Bella couldn't watch Angela touch him, kiss him, laugh with him, and talk closely with him in a booth alone. Rosalie allowed her to leave for the night. Jake had offered her friendship. Telling her he wasn't looking for more because he already knew she was in love with Edward. Everyone knew it. So when she left he followed. Bella didn't think Edward was paying attention to her once Angela walked into the bar appears she was mistaken. He noticed her leaving and Jake following. Watching for her return thinking he had lost her. Bella's heart breaking thinking his prior feelings for Angela were renewed and she lost him forever. She mentioned writing heartbreaking songs which made Jake figure out her duo identities. Great, she opened her mouth and inserted her big foot. Jake has no intention of letting her secret out, he wants to help. His father was close to her dad. His dad wants her to come to bonfire over the weekend and bring her family. Billy, Charlie, and Mac used to be very close. Bella and Jake talked of the entire story from the beginning to the present. Jake couldn't believe Renee either. What a witch!!!!! Money hungry self centered and absorbed. Jake wants to send out feelers about the stalker not giving Bella's name or any pertinent information for clues to solve. Knows eventually Bella will need to resume her identity of Izzy and maintain her life as Bella. After their discussion at the beach Jake drives her home to someone on front porch swing. Personally I was afraid it was James and the start of the stalking again. But it was Edward and very jealous. Afraid he had lost any chance of being with Bella. She felt the same way with Angela back in town. Both confessed their feelings and kissed for the very first time. Edward called Bella his girlfriend and both are as happy as they can be together. Both can't wait for tomorrow to be together again.
Author's Response: Thanks once again for one of your awesome reviews! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 07:00 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
Whoop! Progress, in more ways than one!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
i'm not sure if the chapter was short of just went by fast. i'm always giddy when someone writes Bella and Edward, actually talking about there feelings, instead of the whole asumeing that always happens and then the angst comes for a multitude of chapters and the reader just winds up more frustrated than the characters! LOL! Love where this is going, i still have a feeling you have shown us who the stalker is, but I cant see it. I will be totally surprised, I hope!
LOVE MAC!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:27 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
I understand bad back pain I need a reduction they say its causing alot of my back pain. I hope you feel better soon and your right you post so constantly you deserve a break and no one will hold it against you <3!!!!
Ok the chap wow of wow I knew he would jump to the conclusion that bella and jacob were more then friends aos glad she killed her own demons and told him how it was!!! So proud of Bella!
Interested to see what Jacob finds out and how good things turn south look forward to more! Where in PA are you I am from PA although the military has us stationed in Canada and we are being moved to AZ in 2 months PA is still my first home!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story! As for where I am, I'm actually in Philly! Feel free to hit me up and chat some time! I'm KitsuShel on Twitter/Facebook/Gchat, etc. =)
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:14 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
I don't think i will get it with all the angela bashing. It's so wrong...she is a nice girl...well not here but in the book she is..lol
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story! As for the Angela situation, it's really a weird feeling to be making her kinda evil here. I tend to write her as sweet and kind (in my first story, Parachute), but I really didn't want to go the predictable route here. =)
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 01:12 AM · On: Hurricane Drunk
Communication is key. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much more than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself, actually. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him so much of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed. But I'm back now, so you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled another eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Hurricane Drunk
Loved it! The girlfriend part was adorably sweet :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
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Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed, but I'm back now. So you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled an eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: lilgreen (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Hurricane Drunk
I like that they are not so quick to give up on the other. They have a lot coming up and will need to be strong for each other. Thanks for the updates. I hope you get to feeling better soon
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! It means the world to me that you've stuck around and are (hopefully) enjoying the story!
Next up on our playlist, some fist-pounding P!nk. As usual, hints to our song for the chapter are part of our PicTease (provided by the lovely Mina Rivera) which is posted alongside our Fictionators tease on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
I'm working on finishing up our Rabbit Heart Outtake that will be included in the Fandom Fights Tsunami charity compilation. It's a glimpse into Scrappy & Shaggy's past, with an interesting tie-in with our upcoming chapter! I'm very excited! Thanks for sticking with me!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Angela grinned and folded her hands in front of her. "You're not at all what expected, Bella Swan."
Bella raised an eyebrow. "Do tell, Miss Weber."
"From everything I've heard around town, I thought you'd be more, hmmmm," she paused thoughtfully, "more of the girl next door type."
"Okay, I'll take the bait. What's that supposed to mean?"
"First off, you're very pretty. Not supermodel gorgeous, but much than the plain Jane I expected you to be. You also have this air of confidence that seems slightly out of place in this dingy little town."
Angela eyed her speculatively for a moment, before smirking. "You remind me a bit of myself. I guess that's understandable since you've garnered Edward's attention."
"Excuse me?" Bella replied, not quite sure if that was an insult or not.
"Well, I mean, look at the big picture. Edward loves me; he has for years. Then a girl comes to town, who reminds him of his lost love. Naturally, an attachment formed, but I'm back now. So you can go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under." She smiled an eerily sweet smile.
Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Hysteria
Can Angela go jump off a cliff please? I never thought those words would come out of my mouth because I LOVE her but makes me want to shoot her in this one. Good update. Ch.10 looks good too.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!
RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Next up for Rabbit Heart, we make a return to Florence + the Machine.
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, how long are you planning on hiding away and doing nothing to solve the problem?"
Her eyes widened and she looked over at Jacob in surprise. "What do you mean?"
He shifted on the log and scooped up some sand, making a show out of letting it flow slowly through his fingers.
"Time moves just like this sand. Sooner or later, you're going to run out of it. You're playing a dangerous game with this stalker, Bella."
He turned and looked into her face, his eyes sympathetic yet calculating. "I could help. I'm a cop, I have connections. Let me help you."
She looked down at her hands and twisted them as she thought. It was bad enough that he'd figured out her secret, but to get him involved with her drama was not something she wanted to do.
"I don't know, Jake. I don't want you to get your ho-"
He touched her lips gently with a finger and smiled ruefully. "You don't need to say it. I won't get my hopes up. Contrary to popular belief, I'm Chief of Police for several reasons, a big one being that I have good instincts. I'm also not blind. I can see you're in love with him and I don't make it a habit of going after a girl, who's head over heels for someone else."
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 03:21 PM · On: Hysteria
4/18/11 Chapter 9
SHIT! Shit, shit, shit. I knew it! That bitch was bound to show up. Now watch, B's going to bolt.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!
RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Next up for Rabbit Heart, we make a return to Florence + the Machine.
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, how long are you planning on hiding away and doing nothing to solve the problem?"
Her eyes widened and she looked over at Jacob in surprise. "What do you mean?"
He shifted on the log and scooped up some sand, making a show out of letting it flow slowly through his fingers.
"Time moves just like this sand. Sooner or later, you're going to run out of it. You're playing a dangerous game with this stalker, Bella."
He turned and looked into her face, his eyes sympathetic yet calculating. "I could help. I'm a cop, I have connections. Let me help you."
She looked down at her hands and twisted them as she thought. It was bad enough that he'd figured out her secret, but to get him involved with her drama was not something she wanted to do.
"I don't know, Jake. I don't want you to get your ho-"
He touched her lips gently with a finger and smiled ruefully. "You don't need to say it. I won't get my hopes up. Contrary to popular belief, I'm Chief of Police for several reasons, a big one being that I have good instincts. I'm also not blind. I can see you're in love with him and I don't make it a habit of going after a girl, who's head over heels for someone else."
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Hysteria
Jasper's idea is great - it really seems like Bella singing for Edward shows him that she cares. But what an ending Angela of all people showing up. I can't wait to find out how Edward reacts.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!
RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Next up for Rabbit Heart, we make a return to Florence + the Machine.
♥ Shel ♥
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"So, how long are you planning on hiding away and doing nothing to solve the problem?"
Her eyes widened and she looked over at Jacob in surprise. "What do you mean?"
He shifted on the log and scooped up some sand, making a show out of letting it flow slowly through his fingers.
"Time moves just like this sand. Sooner or later, you're going to run out of it. You're playing a dangerous game with this stalker, Bella."
He turned and looked into her face, his eyes sympathetic yet calculating. "I could help. I'm a cop, I have connections. Let me help you."
She looked down at her hands and twisted them as she thought. It was bad enough that he'd figured out her secret, but to get him involved with her drama was not something she wanted to do.
"I don't know, Jake. I don't want you to get your ho-"
He touched her lips gently with a finger and smiled ruefully. "You don't need to say it. I won't get my hopes up. Contrary to popular belief, I'm Chief of Police for several reasons, a big one being that I have good instincts. I'm also not blind. I can see you're in love with him and I don't make it a habit of going after a girl, who's head over heels for someone else."
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