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Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:37 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
i love it you have to update soon
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:37 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
i love it you have to update soon
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:37 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
i love it you have to update soon
Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:36 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
i love it you have to update soon
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Painful Memories
Okay, once agani, Alice to the fuckin rescue. God, I hate her.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:48 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
Well done!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:03 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
I love Bella's support system (Big Charlie, Jacob, Riley). I love that she has depended on these people adn they have taken care of her (although I'm a little uneasy about Riley a little bit...hope I'm wrong).
I'm loving how the Cullens are supporting her and want to be in her and little Charlie's life. They seem like they all think Edward was wrong (well, duh).
I'm afraid of this gathering at the Cullens and Edward seeing little Charlie (I might be scared, however I still can't wait to read about it!).
Love your story and can;t wait to read what's up next! can't wait for Edward's POV!!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Introductions and Explanations
I am speechless, but in a good way!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
yay!!!! more please and soon!!!!!
Reviewer: kgostorm (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 02:33 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
type fast baby!!!!!!:)
Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
I just found your story and I love it! Very different how you had Edward and Bella not even friends then having the one night stand. I also love Riley...so glad Bella has a good guy that is behind her and good to her. So many stories just have her on her own and being miserable. At least she has a guy in her life. I am so excited to read more and see what happens with Edward and Bella! Love triangle maybe?? I love angst. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm not a huge fan of different point of views but i am interested to read Edward's next. Great job!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 01:21 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
Edward isn't what I thought he would be like. I was expecting 007 but I picture James Dean...not that that's a bad thing.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:55 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
i wonder how edward is going to respond to charlie? and bellafor that matter when he finds out! i hope that they can run interference for bella! will he try to take charlie away?
Author's Response: There's all sorts of ups and downs coming up. The next chapter is with the validating beta right now. Hopefully will post soon. :o)
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~lc~
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:17 AM · On: Introductions and Explanations
You made my cry, I love your story.
Author's Response: :oD Thank you. The next chapter is already with the validating beta. Hopefully it will be up in the next couple of days.
~lc~
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:56 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
All I can say is Edward Fuckin Cullen OMG she's in trouble I do hope for HEA for these 2 and charlie
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
and bella scores for the shut down
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
Well it looks like Edward is, in fact, an ass. But I still think Bella should have told him.
Esme and Carlisle's reaction was perfect. They were hurt and angry and everything as they should be.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Parks and Recreation
Noooooo. Love the story and want to hear more. What will Edward say when he actually is able to see little Charlie? What is his real story? Was he actually such a big jerk when he was in high school, or was he secretly in love with Bella the whole time and that is why he avoided her? Obviously he grew up a little since he is now going to be attending medical school. I love how she stood her ground and told him to get lost! Love it! I wonder if accident prone Little Charlie gets sick or slighly injured and needs to go to the hospital where Carlisle is working and maybe Edward is visiting. No mistaking those eyes I guess. Post soon.
Author's Response: There are definitely a lot of questions. And they will continue throughout the story. Grown up? Well. . . we'll see. LOL.
Thanks for R &R
~lc~
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Painful Memories
Unless the father is a criminal or actually abusive I don't think it is ever okay to hide a pregnancy from him. Even if he isn't going to be involved at all, it is completely unfair to not tell someone they have a child and give them that option. In essense you are kidnapping someone from their parent. It is cruel and unjust. And regardless of whether or not your Edward is a complete and total ass hole or not, unless he poses an actual threat to the child I will not change my opinion that Bella should have told him.
Of course, had it been me I would have sent a letter by snail mail, coward that I am. But I still would have told him.
Author's Response: It's very interesting for me to see how different people respond to the situation. People really are all over the map. In all honesty, I don't know what I would have done. Unfortunately this happens far too often in RL too. I know several people who have never met their fathers. In this case, Bella did what she thought was best, but was it????
Thank you for R & R
~lc~
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Introductions and Explanations
Wow....that was an honest meeting with Esme and Carlisle. It didn't sound fake, but extremely emotional and real, and bravo to Bella for standing her ground. I'm so excited for the next chapter and then sad. I know it's the last one available right now. Maybe by the time I'm done reading it, you'll have an update, lol.
Author's Response: Don't worry, the first ten or so chapters will be kind of slow, but after that, hopefully they will speed up. I did have the next chapter up fairly quick thought, LOL.
Thank you for R & R
~lc~
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:32 AM · On: Painful Memories
I wouldn't have been running to tell Edward either I believe in fate. If it's meant to be, then it will be. Bella had to protect herself from the the slutty Mr. Edward.
Author's Response: Hiya, sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I'm a technotard and the Twi'd review system confuses me. LOL. Bella really did make what she thought was the best decision with the information that she had.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~lc~
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 11:40 PM · On: Painful Memories
Not the Edward I imagined! Wow this is going to be a bumpy ride!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 11:11 PM · On: Prologue (Strider)
To have to do this alone is going to be a challenge for Bella!
Reviewer: LELEBaba (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
update soon, plz!!!
Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Parks and Recreation
Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!
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