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Reviews For There Goes My Life
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Glad Edward kicked Tanya's slutty ass to the curb. The road to redemption for Edward is going to be a long one.

Had a blast with you during your old school music binge on twitter :)



Author's Response:

A very long one.  and Old School music binge was crazy fun!

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

good she needs to have some pregnant sex! It is good for her and for the future delivery!!! Trust me I am a mom of 4!



Author's Response:

Huh.  Never thought of that.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

ugh i hope she doesnt forgive him right away he doesnt deserve it he is a creep lol but a well written interesting creep in in a great story  



Author's Response:

Don't worry, she won't. I mean, yes, she's forgiven him, but not completely.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

Totally loving this story:)  Can't wait to see how Edward is going to be making it up..because he has a lot to make up for!!!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

Totally loving this story:)  Can't wait to see how Edward is going to be making it up..because he has a lot to make up for!!!



Author's Response:

Yes he does! A lot.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

WHAT?!?! I want to talk some sense into Bella myself, please let her make him jump through hoops, I mean he was dipping into Tanya while Bella was home carrying his children!!!



Author's Response:

Trust me, it's not going to be a quick and easy forgive.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: Niques (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

It feels soooooooooooooo good to be back on twilight after a looooooooooooong  break and it feels even better cause this was the first book i read. This a truly amazing book and i encourage u 2 continue 2 write :-)

Reviewer: eclipsy84 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is like an episode of 16 and Pregnant.  Hopefully Edward can grow up, and not be a douche like all the guys on that show.



Author's Response:

I have to admit, I do love that show. I'm trying to keep it as real as possible, so I hope you're enjoying it.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 4

About time he mans up, now we just have to wait and see if he can keep his word.  can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, we'll have to wait and see.  Lets hope he does.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: kristaa19 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

i literally cry every chapter.. your writing is very good and real.i cant wait for the next chapter. and im really happy that edward kicked tanya to the curb--finally! and im happy that bella is keeping the babies



Author's Response:

You're sweet. I'm trying to keep it as real as possible.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Please tell me he never slept with Tanya. Because if he has that will break Bella, she's already showed that. 

I hate him right now, and I will really hate him if he cheated on Bella. I don't care if they were 'broken up' she was pregnant with his babies. 



Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see, but the answers will come, I promise.

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

I liked this chapter.  I hope these crazy kids can make it work!  Can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

Good chapter......



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 teaser is up on the blog: http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: TeamKellan (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

OH MY GOD! keep writing your amazing! make tanya away!!!!!!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

My review copied from ff.net.  Yes I like this story that much!


James started the rumors? James? That bastard. And to think I defended him. *grumble*

Tanya is lucky she got by with nothing more than a broken nose. Witch needs to be taken down. And our Alice was a true heroine in all of this. Yes, thank you Emmett for showing her how to throw a right hook. I sure hope you can find a way to keep her (T) from calling Edward. That nonsense is beginning to get on my nerves, not to mention what it is doing to Bella.

Yeah, and just why is Edward with Tanya to begin with? Because she was there? Will you do me a favor and ask Edward what kind of excuse is that? Certainly he can't have feeling for her. I can't help but wonder if he is seeing her to hurt Bella because of the James rumors. I could understand that. It doesn't mean I like it but I do understand it.

Thank you for taking good care of Bella while we wait for Edward to come to his senses. And please tell me I have not upset you by yelling at your characters. It is not many characters that spark my ire like this. Just know if I did not love the story I would not do it. :)

Sandra

Author's Response:

LOL!!  You're too funny.  Chap 4 is in the queue, so hopefully it'll be up here soon :)

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh Edward you are soooooooooo stupid!!! :)

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

What is Edward's deal? Does he think that they'll be better off without him? That's the only logical explanation. To push her away. That or his just a total ass.

Oooh, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Rox

 

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really don't understand why he is such a fucking asshole. And why Tanya? I can't believe he actually said to Bella he wanted Tanya, that is so disgusting. The way I see it, Edward should get his ass kicked several times by a lot of people. Starting Esme because she must be so disappointed that her son is such a bastard, then Carlisle because he must be disappointed in his cruelty and then Alice because it's disgusting that he went to Tanya. And he is accusing Bella of cheating when he saw how much Bella loves him? I can't see how he will get better. Then Charlie just because of all the pain Edward is causing Edward, putting the babies in danger too.

Bella can do it alone, she has the support of her family and Edward's family, it doesn't matter if Edward decides to go fuck the rest of the world and have threesomes with Tanya and some other whore. Even his family accepted the baby and believe and love Bella. He obviously doesn't feel love for her. I hope she keeps the babies, to prove him she can do it alone and because I'm sure Bella will be an amazing mother. 



Author's Response:

Wow!  Quite a long review - I LOVE IT!

Bella is going to keep to the twins. She's made her mind up. Charlie's already agreed to support her and the twins as well as Renee.  As for Edward - you'll get to see in his head eventually.  A lot more is coming, I promise.

Thanks fo rreading. Teaser is up on the blog :)

Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

good story Tanya is such a whore........LOL hope Edward gets his head out of his ass soon. Thanks please keep updating  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!  Chapter 4 Teaser is up on the blog http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 3

this was much better :) i liked the changes u have made in your story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Chapter 4 Teaser is up on the blog http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

oh is Edward turning a new leaf? to be honest, I didn't expect this to start happening until later in the pregnancy- like around the time for them to pop out- so I'm a bit surprised. and hopeful. Even though I still want to kick Edward in the balls. 

until next time!



Author's Response:

a lot of people wanna kick Edward in the balls, LOL!  Thanks for reading.  Chapter 4 Teaser is up on the blog http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ust found this story and love it!!!! Go Alice!!!

Reviewer: jh1266 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

nice story! looking forward to your updates. keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Chapter 4 Teaser is up on the blog http://sweetishbubblescrazyworld.blogspot.com/

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