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Reviews For There Goes My Life
Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

This story has grabbed me and I can't stop reading it!!! Tanya pushed Bella down the stairs didn't she??? I can't wait for the next chapter. You have me on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

Looking forward to the meeting between Bella and her babies.  Wonder if Edward will be there too?

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow. I am glad that the babies are here and safe, but I wish that Bella could see them and Edward would talk lovingly to her. The abies don't even have names yet, so they? I am looking forward to seeing what you do next. I have no idea who the dark man is.

Author's Response:

dont worry, she'll see them next chapter. thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

So sad! But I am glad that Edward is acting like he should at this point.

Reviewer: twifansp (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Bella, those dreams are going to haunt her for a while I'm afraid.  Edward showed improvement in Chap. 6 but he needs to do some serious groveling at Bella's feet to make up for the last few months.  As much as I hope not to see Tanya again, I think he's going to have to prove to Bella he's done with the skank and for that Bella's going to have to see or hear it. 



Author's Response:

he does need to grovel for a bit to show Bella he's changed. Lets hope he does! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 4

Thank the lord for that, naughty naughty Edward, if i were Bella i would never trust him again!

Pleeeeeeeeeease don't tell me he's going to mess this up??? Arrrggghhhhh

Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

I WANNA KICK EDWARDS BUTT SO DAMN HARD...GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!

I hope to god he sees the light, and soon!

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Jacob? Someone in he future to given Edward some compatition.



Author's Response: Maybe! thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Bella and her dreams/nightmares...the first one in the meadow was cute though. I want to see her tear into Edward :) I'm a vindictive bitch ;)



Author's Response:

I think it's safe to say she will be tearing him a new one. Can't say when, though.  thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

Edward has been the biggest jerk! I hope his final comment means he does care about Bella and the twins but just doesn't know how ot handle things right now.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: monicaloin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, Bella's dream is do heart breaking~



Author's Response:

I know. But lets hope none of those things happen, right?  thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

My first guess would be Edward or Charlie. I hope Edward shapes up for good this time. I hope even more that we have seen the last of Tanya. Love your story.

Author's Response:

you think it's charlie? Huh. Maybe.  As for Tanya, she may be gone for good, but then again you never know with her. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

edward

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

That is strange that there is a figure in her dreams Ireally wonder who it is.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

While it is sad that it took all of this for Edward to realilize that his life is going to change so much!! I am happy that the babies are doing well and that They seem like they are going to be fine.

Reviewer: cofey (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

i get that edward is sorry and worried and doesnt want to lose his childhood - doesnt feel ready to change all his plans for bella and the kids but that he dangled tanya in front of her and tortured her isnt really forgiveable to me ... i love edward/bella combo but edward needs to do some serious grovelling if he wants bella back ... he shld get off his ass and show he is trying .. first step would prob b to find a med school he can attend where he can b with bella and the kids and also make sure that bella can also study ... they need to sit down and talk to work out compromises but most importantly edward needs to face reality and decide if he loves bella and if he wants to have a life with them ... and bella will need to decide if she can trust edward

xoxo



Author's Response:

you are right. On all accounts.   the time has come for them to grow up, and it isn't going to be easy.  thanks for reading.

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 7

It would have to be Edward in the room with her,I so glad the babaies are good and that Bella is awake.But now what is she going to give him another chance she loves Edward



Author's Response:

Im' not sure if she's just going to give him another chance. I think he he has quite a bit of growing up to do first, but you never know.  thanks for reading.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

thanks good ghapter

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

well... this went in a direction I didn't expect! I wasn't expecting Bella to start having seizures and to have to have an emergency c-section, thats for sure!

But Edward is starting to man up, which I like. And him interacting with the twins is too cute!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

What a sad but promising chapter.  I am a little worried about Bella and the twins.  At least Edward is maning up.  Great chapter and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

That was so heart breaking to read :( Sadly, this happens everyday. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

Okay, THIS is what you meant when you said I would need tissues. This was scary! For a minute I thought Bella was going to die and this would be one of those major character deaths... the title matches, and then I started to think it would Edward's life (Bella) and that he never knew how to appreciate it. Because he doesn't. NOW because of how scared he was, in the right way, not the immature 'I was scared so I left you pregnant and slept with the town whore' Yep, I still want to kick his balls. I wish Charlie would at least punch him once. 

Charlie and Carlisle having a discussion.. yum! But I'll get serious again. 

I never expected the babies to come now, but it makes sense and it was a huge surprise. I bet no one saw that coming. 

I can't wait for chapter seven and completely random... I don't know if I should be Team Charlie or Team Carlisle. Just saying :P



Author's Response:

I really liked the mini-pissing contest between Charlie and Carlisle. The stress from the pregnancy is taking it's toll on more than just Edward and Bella and i wanted to show that.

Next chapter, you'll REALLY need the tissues.... that's all I'm saying.

Oh - and Team Charlie - duh!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

Aww the babies are here :) but poor Bella :( That was a heartbreaking chapter to read :(



Author's Response:

it was a difficult one to write.  Thank you for reading :)

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