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Reviews For There Goes My Life
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

I dont know why Bella would believe James or Tanya over Edward-especially now. Although that is what happens when trust is destroyed

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Its about time Edward came around

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

I knew I had made a huge mistake tonight by not pushing Tanya away from me. ...Geez, ya think?

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

That boy better make good on that promise!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

This made me cry: ""You know where I should be, Edward? I should be with you, in your bed, with your hands on my belly feeling our children move inside me."

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Well, if he doesn't love Tanya, he better cut her loose now

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

How could Edward go fron a great girl like Bella to a slut like Tanya?

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Edward is a complete dick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 9

So disapointed by Edward's actions with tanya (even if she isn't really preggers which I don't think she is) he was stupid to go back to her again.

Glad she's getting the support from the Cullens.  Also glad she is gong back to school/

Can't wait to read what is next!

Reviewer: SweetAngl1604 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

My heart breaks for Bella even more with each chapter. What that poor girl has had to endure with Edward is just down right sad. I pray that she will be able to go to college and make a better life for her and the twins, she deserves it. I hope she meets a nice boy while she is there (Maybe a Jacob) who can brighten her sprits and show Edward that Bella is not going to keep letting him walk all over her forever. She deserves so much more then the way Edward is treating her and has done to her. I really hope for Edwards sake that the whore is not bearing his child because if she is, Bella will never forgive him or take him back and I wont blame her. I dont like the way you have portrayed Edward in this story. I positively hate him and if my son ever treated a girl the way Edward has and is treating Bella, I would certainly not tollerate it. He is 18 Esme, throw his ass out and make him grow the hell up! Tanya can take care of him, if he really wants her dirty ass! I am glad that the rest of the Cullens are giving Edward shit for what he has done to Bella and I'm glad they are all being there for her. If he's not going to be there for her and the twins, thank god his family is! I certainly hope this story gets better and Bella gets treated with more respect because I can't continue to read about her beaing treated this way! Until next time!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 9

i don't think that tanyas baby is edwards! and i hopet hat it isn''t! will they ever be able to get back together? will it ever get easier for bella? maybe a nice guy that doesn't care that she has kids. maybe that will get edwards jealous juices working and he'll try harder for bella and the twins

Reviewer: pcdogmom (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 9

Such a brave girl. Good for her not letting Edwards ho intimidate her. As for Edward, nothing short of a Converse high top up his butt is good enough!

Reviewer: pcdogmom (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

No! No! He has not suffered enough! That was abusive and she just took him back. She needs to protect herself and her babies! He needs to earn them!

Reviewer: clp1234 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ohh I just love it :) Keep them coming!.

Reviewer: clp1234 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ohh I just love it :) Keep them coming!.

Reviewer: pcdogmom (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

Why is he even there? He shouldn't be allowed within 50 feet? Go play with Tanya.

Reviewer: monicaloin (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 9

WTF is all I can say......

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

I've never wanted to punch a "pregnant" woman in the face as much as I do Tanya. The fucking homewrecker! Get off Bella's kool-aid and let her and Edward be happy, you spiteful bitch! Rant done :)

Reviewer: Sheaden (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 9

I like the story, I think its great. I just the only thing I findwrong is sometimes the dialogue, I dont know how to explain it. It just, when bella talks about her babies...it sounds kind of immature trashy. Like when she screams at tanya...its almost like Jerry Springer dialogue. Which, I know you have drama going on but you can do it alittle classier like a soap opera or you can keep it like Jerry Springer. But, I could be wrong. Just my opinion

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

Chapter 9

UGH! I am so pissed at Edward right now. Don't even get me started on Tanya. Edward has his head so far up his ass, it's unbelievable. He thinks HIS life is ruined, HA! I have no pity for him at this point.

Bella is far more deserving than the shit he's throwing at her and putting her through. Yet she's still willing to include him in the twins lives, along with his family. She has continually proven who;s the responsible, mature person.

I am so on edge with the things going on with Tanya right now, I'd be glad to beat the shit out of her for Bella and castrate Edward too.

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter!!!! Maybe when Bella starts college she'll meet someone and make Edward a little jealous and realize he needs to change .

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

Tanya is such a witch! Edward is an ass, plain and simple. Go Emmett for punching him! Bella seems to be like a responsible adult, which the twins so badly need! Great job!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

I still think Tanya pushed Bella down the stairs.  That she was hoping Bella wouldn't be a problem for her getting to Edward.  Tanya knew Edward was pulling away from her and didn't really want her.  She knew Edward was still in love with Bella.  Since he really didn't pursue her physical while they were going together during the end of high school.  It was a set up when Tanya talked Edward into the motel room.  Granted Edward was stupid about calling Tanya after a fight with Bella.  He just ruined his chance to have her trust him again.  Then the things she was spurting out of her mouth about Edward never wanting the babies or would ever accept them.  That Edward hated that Bella was so naive and didn't know what to do with and for him.  Only a tramp would have the nerve to express their expertise to someone else.  Bella has her number she's a gold digger, wanting some Cullen money.  She isn't pregnant and if she is then it's not Edward's.  Probably James.  That's my guess.  Tanya couldn't get more evil than what she is doing now.  For the pictures to be taken it was a set up.  She had everything ready to seduce Edward after his call.  With James as photography to get the evidence to ruin Edward having any chance to be with Bella.  The fact she feels she belongs to the Cullens is a joke.  Edward hasn't been dating her that long.  Edward is a jerk.  If he truly wants Bella and his children he's not acting like it.  The talk with Carlisle and Esme was sweet. They are both so afraid Bella will take the children away from them as well.  If Edward was stupid enough to marry Tanya, Bella would just up and leave in hiding to avoid her nightmare of Edward taking them away to live with him and Tanya.  I hate Tanya and James.



Author's Response:

you're not the only one who hates Tanya and James - but I can tell you that James had a realization and got out. I truly believe he gave Bella the pictures so she could see that Edward was not the man he was pretending to be - not because he was in it with Tanya. As for Bella and Edward - some interesting things are coming.  Thanks so much for readng :)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 9

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