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Reviews For There Goes My Life
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

im getting...um..not so pissed off at him.....but still not happy with him...

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

still not happy with him or the stupid skank ho....I can't stand Tanya....in any format though.

 

Kudos to Bella for letting him have all her anger!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well thank GOD someone knocked that stupid bitch on her ass!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely HATE it so far!!!!!!!!

 

Not you or your ability....just Edward's asshole self and the entire situation.  I'm looking forward to reading more! :)

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

thanks good chapter as always

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 11

Well I hope Edward can continue being there for Bella. It's hard enought having one baby a lone but two.... She needs to ask for more help. Love it

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm glad Edward is starting to step up to the plate like a real man should :) And I could just kill Renee. What a fucking bitch!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

there are so many stories where she runs away never telling poor edward about the babay only for him to find out and become a wonderful daddy  this is just so different  i love it

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 11

*exhale breath* Finally. I can stop wishing ugly ugly miserable death upon Edward.



Author's Response:

thanks a lot! :)

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 8

Well for one I think james and tanya are in this together and I don't think Bella is thinking very clearly. Oh God I hope that what I am thinking is true. Bella should give Edward a chance to clear himself. But if I am wrong I will string him up by his balls and feed him to the sharks.

Lilly

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 11

I really want to hit Renee for saying that to Bella! -sigh- I'm glad that Charlie is there for Bella though and Edward is trying to make up for his past mistakes.

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yes and for now all is right with the world. Sleep in peace little ones Mon and Dad will both love your forever. I am so into this journey with you.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: sundevil (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 11

Such a great story! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

Bella still cares but is trying to protect her heart.  She has to be sure Edward is being serious, true, and real this time before she totally opens up and forgives him completely to open her heart to him again.  So much had happened to Edward that night with the revelation that Tanya had been lying through their entire senior year and the twins's lives.  Bella had always been there for him even with his mistreatment of her.  Her love for the children and his family  strong.  Her devotion to raising them and avoiding anything to do with his money.  Refusing any aid from the Cullens to raise them on her own.  Extra hours at work, lack of sleep, constant caring for twins, knowing hourly routines of twins including colic, etc....  Refusing to bother others and asking for help taking it all on herself.  Bella hurting seeing Edward so devastated.  Wanting to help him.  Allowing Edward to accompany Bella and the twins on their doctor's appointment.  Good thing too since Bella couldn't deal with the needle and shots to the babies.  Can't blame her.  It was always the hardest thing for me to do also.  Watchng them get their shots and them crying.  My peditrician used to tease me about it all the time because I would cry about it with them.  Of course he didn't give them he would leave while it was done. His nurses gave them.  Lots of mommy snuggling and loving afterwards to calm them down.  So that's what Bella and Edward had with the twins after the twins had their shots.  After that trauma they shared some time for a coffee/tea break break.  Edward found the letter from Renee. Talk about a worthless mother.  What made her think she was a good mother just because she married Charlie.  She didn't stay she left the first opportunity available to her.  Very ironic that a small check $15 bounced when Phil made the major league Yankees.  Maybe not doing as well as she is claiming.  Good that she told Charlie.  Charlie would have helped her clear the check before it blew her account so high with returned check charges.  Her comment to Edward about him not giving any support was kind of mean.  He was at the hospital every day while she was in ICU.  He was taking care of the twins every day.  He stayed in town waiting for her and the twins, Took care of her.  Doesn't have a problem babysitting when she needs help.  If she needed diapers or anything for the twins she could have asked he would have provided anything she needed.  The account was set up by his parents with the understanding it was for the needs of the twins and her needs.  She was being stubborn and not wanting to use it.  Because Edward didn't contribute.  She never told him that was her reasoning until now.  So when she checked both accounts, Edward made deposits to both accounts.  I'm sure to her account he deposited more than just $150 to bring current he gave her more.  That's what surprised her.  He wants to take care of her.  He always has wanted to take care of her.  Bella deep down has always been the girl he has wanted in his life.  Bella getting pregnant out of the blue was a shock to both of them.  Tanya used that shock to bring doubt and mistrust to Edward by filling his head with lies.  Too bad Edward took them in and let them filter into his mind and began to believe them.  Tanya has a lot on her shoulder as to the pain she has inflected on a lot of people's lives.  Amazing that Edward and Charlie actually agree on a topic in regards to Bella.  Never thought those two would agree on anything when it came to Bella ever again.  There is hope.



Author's Response:

You've hit the nail on the head with all three of them. Bella and edward have a lot of work to do if they want a relationship again.  they've both made mistakes, and will make mistakes in the future - but how they deal with them is how they will define their relationship.  there is hope for them.

thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh poor Edward I feel really bad for him most of us just want somebody to love and believe in us and when the person you expect to do it doesn't your open to believe lies and ruin what you had in the begining.Hopefully he will get his act together and be a good father and maybe a good husband I just hope that Tanya has fallen off the face of the earth



Author's Response:

Yeah, tanya's gone for good.  You may see a mention of her later on, but dont' wory - no more from her :)

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 11

im sure that edward will show he can be a real man and a good dad! they can work together to take care of the babies!

Reviewer: Cansano2009 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

I hope it's not too late for them. I hope that Edward can earn Bella's trust and Bella can find her love for him again. They really do belong together.

I have a bad feeling that this is not the last anybody has heard from Tanya. Here's to hoping I'm wrong and Bella and Edward can work on their relationship!



Author's Response:

Nah, Tanya's gone. You may see a mention of here at some point, but she's gone.  Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved the chapter.  i loved the honesty between Bella and Edward.  My fingers are crossed for them.  Can't what for an update!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

WTF was Edward even doing with Tanya at all?  Why would he tell Bella he wants to be there for her and still spend time with the skank?  This whole situation is just too frustrating for me.

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

4/18/11

Chapter 10

I don't understand, if E is so heartbroken and in love with B, why was he still with Tanya? He treated B like shit when she was pregnant and he's not really winning any ribbons for his behavior now.

B's willingness to allow E to be a part of the twins life just goes to show how kind and mature she is. Maybe she'd be better off without an irresponsible E, go on with her plans then someday fall in love with someone that will respect & love her & the kids the way they deserve.



Author's Response: Hi! A lot more will come out next chapter. Edward has some explaining to do, doesn't he? Thanks for reading

Reviewer: blueeyez (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 10

update soon i need to know what happens next

Reviewer: brandid (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew that bitch had to be lying.  SO glad she was.  If I was edward I would have blew my head off knowing I had to be tied to that heffer with a kid!  Poor bella.

Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 10

I had a feeling that Tanya was lying.

Good chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 10

Mama Esme is a bad ass. So glad she called Tanya on her shit. That girl needs to be put away. Loved the update thank you

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!  :)

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