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Reviews For There Goes My Life
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

The sign of a young parent accepting you cant. always take help but when it comes to kids never accept can't Twins require a Lot of attention but they keep eachother company. Wheel chair time could be fun for all three!

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 16

the image of Edward holding a sleepy maddy in her pink blanket is so unbelievably precious, I almost can't stand it. :P

And maybe Edward taking care of Bella now will work in Edwards favor- in terms of Charlie.

Keep it coming!

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Bella. Loved the Christmas tree outing even if it ended with Bella hurting herself. Loved the kiss...so sweet. Edward acting as a Daddyward...swoon moment. Little Carla was adorable...hope she makes an appearance again with Alec :) Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks!! the kiss wasn't planned, but I like it :)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 16

Good chapter.....

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 16

I have to say I understand Charlie. I had this happen in my family, not exactly the same but my son in law and step daughter. He abused her and left her with 3 children and no money. Long story short after 20 some odd years of heartbreak she finally left him when the kids were 17 and older.  She stays out of this marriage for a year then she goes right back just like always.  We have bailed her out with our money helped her and she won't help herself.  This caused her and her father to be estranged for the last 3 years.  I told her when she called to tell us they were back together " your forgiving him will be easier than your father.  The things that you told us he did are hard to just forget!" 

I understand how Charlie feels, but in this instance Edward was a teenager and since then he has been trying. So you have to let him earn this back.



Author's Response:

I totally understand him, too. Somethings are too hard to just forgive and forget and i think for him, this will take a while for Charlie to get over. He wants what's best for his daughter and it's going to take some tme to accept the fact that Edward makes her happy. It'll take some time, and a lot of effort on Edward's part, but it'll take time.  thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

He acts like an irresponsible kid.  Not a kid that had two great parents. Alice acts like that, he acts priveledged.  All about what I want. He believed Tanya because it made this situation NOT HIS FAULT. 

Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 16

wonderful. I'm glad Alice gave Edward such a hsrd time. Some people just need that extra push over the edge.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 16

I'm glad Edward is making fixing relationships a priority

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 16

I liked this chapter a lot.  I like where things are heading for Bella and Edward.  I'm hoping they don't get messed up again.  Mayeb charlie will come around eventually (although I don't blaim him for being hesitant with Edward). 

Funny thing, I'm about to get off the computer to make some chicken and rice soup myself!

Can't wait unti lthe next chapter.  Take care!

 



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing here and on ff.net. :)

Reviewer: Leibeezer (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 16

Bella should really tell her father how she really feels about him getting married.  It's not good to keep stuff in.  I'm glad that Edward and Bella are slowly working their way back together.  Sucks that she broke her ankle.  So is she going to be staying with Edward now? I think Alice is being a bitch, and I don't think he owes her an apology.  She see's that Bella has forgiven him.  I just wanted to smack Alice.

Reviewer: madimommie (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

thank you i am really enjoying this story so much

 

Reviewer: madimommie (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

wow

 

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 15

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 15

Did B inform E of Tanya's plans & her sleeping with other guys during their conversations?

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 15

i really hope that edward has changed and that renee stays away and that bella can really trust edward to do the right thing!

Reviewer: madidumas (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 15

This was an interesting story but now I'm finding it unrealistic and cheesy



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you feel that way. Is there a specific reason why you're finding it unrealistic and cheesy?

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 15

Edward and Bella finally had the long talk between them about what happened between them. He left because he was scared.  All that responsibility thrown at him all at once.  A teenage boy having to face being an adult in a moment.  He had to watch all his dreams and youth go up into flames knowing that he had to become a man.  Learn to make his way in the world.  Need to  take care of more than just himself.  Need to think of their needs before his own.  But their heart to heart talk along with his treatment of Bella and the twins has improved greatly.  He is doing everything he can to take care of them all.  He has told Bella anything that she needs all she needs to do is ask.  After her mother messed up her checking account with an insufficient check, he put funds in to cover the deficit and more to cover expenses for her.  He also placed funds into the twins maintenance account. His parents bought him the house to allow him some privacy with the twins and Bella.  In order to work through their difficulties without interferences from members of the family.  Their long weekend due to the snowstorms gave them extra time together to talk more things out and spend time as a family with the twins.  Alice being upset really has no business getting into it.  Yes Edward did abandon her when she needed him the most, but he has made a tremendous effort to correct that.  He has tried to prove to her that he will be there for her and the children.  He has told Tanya off and to take a hike.  Whether they get back together or not if Bella and Edward's decision.  If Bella can forgive all Edward has done to hurt her and accept him back in her life, then Alice as his sister will need to also accept that.  She has to forgive her brother eventually as well. The man can only say he's sorry so much.  He can't change the past only change himself and the future.



Author's Response:

Well first off, thank you for the wonderful review :)  You're right - Edward has grown, although there's still a lot of room for improvement. And alice will need to back off and let them figure out what works for them.  Thank you so much for reading :)

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 15

Yes they are getting closer. As for Renee good ridden.

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 15

yay! edwardsmanning up!  i liked that they got snowed in together. and imagining a silly edward with the twins is just too adorable. until next time!

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

good for bella! kick renee out! hope all goes well with bella and edward!! :) 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 15

Aww. On the mend now :) I'm just like Edward. I sleep with 5 blankets in the winter too, though, if I slept with Edward every night, I doubt I would need all those :) I'm so proud of Bella for standing up to Renee.

Praying for your friend!



Author's Response:

I am too - winter and summer - i need blankets.

thanks for readng and for the prayers.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 15

Well, he does not want her to move in yet. Is he still going to keep sleeping around?

 

He is not exactly trust worthy.

 



Author's Response:

No, he's not. Thanks for rreadig

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great job!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 15

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

thanks!

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