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Reviews For Shotgun Charlie
Reviewer: BreeCullen (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)

This was one of the funniest chapters ever. I was laughing out loud for real. You did a really great job of telling the story from different characters points of view. You're greatatstaying in character. Have always loved this story, will always love this story. Fantastic :) ! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)

Le sigh...I love this story...and Emmett....yeah cause he rocks! MWUAH!!! love love LOVED it!!!

Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)

Mike's POV was amazing.

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)

end??? *pouts*

 

will be sad to see this light hearted bit of fun end....

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)

Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Mmm...zebras (V to the J)

Just because I happened to bring up a petting zoo that could double as a buffet once

LOL

 

I can't tell you how much I love this story!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Get Out Now!

Haha, typical getting caught after doing something! Priceless! Great intro chapter!



Author's Response:

I know, they finally do something and can't really enjoy the afterglow.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  HOpe you have enjoyed the rest.

Jaime

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Oh I love this story - it's just so much fun and I love seeing them so HAPPY!!! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I like the happy factor every now and then, it's nice for them to just enjoy being together like a normal couple.  I'm working on the next chapter so hopefully in the next few days.

Thank you again for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Let's Go to the Mall

so how are the bars on her window holding up or has edward had to replace them?



Author's Response:

They are getting a little weak but Charlie hasn't thought to check them because he figures bars on the windows is a pretty good deterrant!

Hehe...thanks for the review.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Damn Manic Depressive Vampire

i'd love, love, love to see esme pick up jasper. great image. i love esme.



Author's Response:

I know, wouldn't that be great to see her just lose it!!  Thank you so much for leaving a review.  Hope you have enjoyed the rest of the story.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Think You Can Catch Anything This Time?

monkey time he he



Author's Response:

Everyone needs a little monkey time!  LOL

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun

emoward ha ha



Author's Response:

If the name fits right?  He doesn't stick around for long.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Um...we were just having sex.

oh so funny! the bet, ordering the bed..



Author's Response:

hehe...a bed is essential to any healthy relationship.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Haleylauren (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

:) Nice engagement night, LOL.



Author's Response:

Haha...thanks!

Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Good News Travels Fast

hehe...still laughing my head off about the whole scrabble thing.. ;D Please update again soon, can't wait for the reaction at school.



Author's Response:

I'm working on the update now and trying to get all the proper reactions in place.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Good News Travels Fast

I so love this!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

This story is always all kinds of awesome. I just effing love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I appreciate the review!

 

Jaime

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:04 PM · On: What's Behind The Door

Loved this chapter. I'm heading on to the next one now. Lol.

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Vampires Don't Get Nervous Part II (V to the J)

Oh goodness, I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Edward did. Hehehe

Reviewer: cupcake4711 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

I love that this story skips all of the filler and gets right to the good stuff ;)

The proposal scene was so beautifully written and actually brought tears to my eyes.  I can't wait to see the reaction at school, I hope to get Mike's POV for this, and maybe even the lunch lady again! 

Another scene that I've been really wanting to read is the vampires in gym class I just think it would be so funny...  anyway,keep up the good work, I read your whole story thus far in 2 days, I'm really hooked and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

LOL...this story would be endlessly long if I didn't fast forward occassionally. Happy that it doesn't bother you.

Thank you for the compliment on the proposal.  I really wanted to make it a bit different and am so happy it was well received.  I just finished up the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon.  There is some Mike but no lunch lady this time. I forgot about her :(

Hmmm..the gym class isn't a bad idea.  It may be an outtake one day since the rest of this is pretty much plotted out. Thank you for the review and I'm happy that you have found this story and that you are enjoying it!  More coming soon.

Thanks again.

 

Jaime

Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Get Out Now!

OMG... That was amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. HOpe you have enjoyed the rest of it.

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Loved it i cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thank you and I'm finishinig up the next chapter so hopefully it won't take too long!

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

very nice chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: jennde (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

Nice Jaime. I loved this:

“I know Bella, I know.  Mr. Perfect over there asked me first so I know what you are going to tell me.” He looked at me finally and he looked lost.

 

Mr. Perfect. Ha. I loved that. That is so how Edward comes off to the world, and often, how he's written.

Love this story like I love candy. And I really love candy.

 



Author's Response:

Mmmmm.....now I want candy.  I love candy too!

Thanks for the review.  Edward really does seem like Mr. Perfect to everyone which I would think would get a bit annoying after some time but what do I know? 

Thank you again and I finally did finish the next chapter so there will be more coming very soon.

Jaime

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Good News Travels Fast

This chapter was very good. Charlie's reaction showed how happy that he was for her but how much he will miss her. Edward getting lost in his sexual daydream while Bella was in panic was funny.



Author's Response:

Charlie just wants her to be happy and if that means he will lose her then he accepts that.  He figures that Edward loves her and will take good care of her. 

Poor Edward is easily distracted where Bella is concerned...LOL

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