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Reviews For Shotgun Charlie
Reviewer: teamswitzxox (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Damn...he was just getting fun

ha ha i love emmett =]



Author's Response:

I never realized how much fun he was until I wrote this story. I hope that you are enjoying the rest of it.  Thank you for taking the time to review.

 

Jaime

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Wow, that was amazing, especially the romantic meal on the dock, even though she only got one bite of it, lol.  Shame it's coming to an end but I know it has to.  I love the pictures too, it's just how I imagined it to be.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the honeymoon.  I'm sad that it is coming to an end but it must.

I had to find the pictures before I could write it and now I want to go there although 65,000 a week is a it steep.

Thank you for taking the time to review and the next chapter should be coming sometime this week.

Jaime

Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:42 PM · On: What's Behind The Door

awww. I almost cry.

Reviewer: jennde (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

I loved the playfulness they diaplayed in this chapter. Just being together, enjoying each other, blocking the rest of the world out. That's what a honeymoon should be.

I know reality has to come back, and it will be painful, especially the goodbye to Charlie, but I felt that the honeymoon ws almost perfect.

I'm sad it's wrapping up, but glad to se them so happy and in love.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Bebo (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

why must you end it... it seems soo soon. it seems weird to end at the transformation... i don't want it to end..

Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Charlie's Dream

haha my boyfriend and I blew up a bunch of condoms into balloons once. lmao

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

You described the honeymoon the exact way it should've gone. I loved every second of this!!

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Thank you so very much, it was wonderful!

Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Beautiful Chapter!!!  Thanks for the pictures, it is exactly as I saw it in my head :)

Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Fab!  This was a fantastic honeymoon chapter; thanks for the pics.  I think you did a good job with them discussing the change and how they felt about it.  On to the next chapter; I am going to miss this story.

Reviewer: blondie9779 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

I'm looking forward to the next chapter but a little sad it'll be the last. I've really enjoyed your story!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

 Thanks for updating this very sexy honeymoon. It was a blast. I am so sad that there is only one chappie left in this story. 

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Amazing writing! I enjoyed this chapter so much!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Great chapter

For the millionth time..why can't he be real~!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

what a beautiful island!! I've really enjoyed this story!

Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

I want that island for my honeymoon, maybe I'll spend all of my cash on lottery tickets! I'm sad this fic is coming to an end, it has given me so much enjoyment. I just hope the ending is a happy one (hint hint!). Best wishes as ever.

Nina xxx

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

The honeymoon fantastic and thanks for the pics to go with it. I can't wait to see how her change goes.

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

good honeymoon.

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

My husband and I will be celebrating our 23rd Anniversary this Sunday.  Do you think Carlisle and Esme will loan us the Island?  Thanks for a sexy, romantic Chapter.

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Dear Lord that's a pretty island! :-)

 

Thanks for updating, awesome as always!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

The island sounds WONDERFUL!!!! What a fabulous honeymoon! I am a bit sad that this is winding down, it's been a blast.

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Hey as long as every chapter is as good as this, I can keep on reading forever  :-)

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

LOL...I loved that you apologized for this NOT being the last chapter!  Seriously, that's not something to apologize about, because I was happy to hear we were gonna get one more!

Loved it...damn, I wanna go to that island with my own Edward!  Looking forward to the final chapter, even though I'll be sad for it to be over.

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

Great Chapter!  The island sounds great!

Reviewer: lovnsomecullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Complete and Utter Privacy

I have loved every chapter of this story.  When you finish, I'm going to read it all over again!

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