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Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Perspective
I'm not sure if I missed it or something, but I was wondering what the age diference between Edward and Bella is? And I'm also loving it so far. :)
Author's Response: When they married, Edward was 23 and Bella was 15. Now he is 25 and she is 18. Does that help?
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Really great chapter. I am glad that they keep making a little progress each day. I just hope there isn't something that will take it back. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Each day brings a little more for them.
Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I am glad that Bella and Edward are finally communicating...to bad that they couldn't have done this all along. Of course James is up to something and I wonder if Tanya is somehow involved with any scheme that he has cooked up. Hmm I can't wait to see the other ramifications from the affair.
Author's Response: They are finally forming the relationship they should have had all along. There's so much more to come! Thank you.
Here's the teaser I promised:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Awe how sweet. Tanya and James are up to no good.
Author's Response: They are up to no good! Thank you so much! Here's a teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
awesome story love how they are progressing thanks so much :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! They are finally getting it together.
Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Loved it. they are getting closer. this is good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
Here's the teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
oh FINALLY! Looooove it:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Here's the teaser I promised:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
They are making some headway at least.
Author's Response: They are finally getting it together. Thank you! Here's the teaser I promised:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: MadV7 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I love this story! I just found this story a couple of weeks ago and I'm hooked! Everytime i see that you updated, I let out a sqeek of joy!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try not to leave you hanging too long and update every week. Here's the teaser I promised:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
well its a step in the right direction! keep the chapters comming ...
Author's Response: Thank you! Here's the teaser I promised:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
hey they are working on it
Author's Response: They are! Thank you for reading and reviewing. Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Ok, what was that. You're going to tease us. Let her move on and let them become the couple they should be and fight the evils of Tanya and James. I really are waitng for them to really hook up.
Author's Response: LOL! There's so much more to come and they are getting there. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: Meghaja (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I really enjoy this story. I amxiously await every update. I am happy that they are starting to communicate more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. They really are starting to get closer from here on out.
Here's a teaser on the next chapter:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I think that Bella is just leading him on a bit too long. I mean, I get that he cheated, but he told her what he did, he's doing everything he can to avoid Tanya, and he's truly making an effort. I think Bella's just being a naive little girl and punishing him a bit too much.
Nonetheless, I really liked this chapter. I'm just glad that Bella is making an effort to fix their marriage.
Author's Response: There's a lot of pain involved with cheating and it doesn't just go away with "sorry, I screwed up." That said, they have to start somewhere if she's serious about having a real relationship. It will move on from here.
Thank you! Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Great chapter loved all the stuff that happened...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Here's a teaser for the next chapter:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: amyat (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Excellent chapter. Loved the burning of the offensive couch and poor Esme's reaction to it. I don't know how I'd react if my kids burned the furniture.
Can't wait to read more.
A
Author's Response: Especially not my steadfast kid! It had to throw her for a loop! Thank you!
Here's a teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Edward set the couch on fire! I just love his cheating ass! :-)
Author's Response: LOL! He's good for something isn't he? Thank you!
Here's your teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: oneillf4 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Loving this story...finally Bella is letting Edward in!!
Author's Response: Thank you! She is finally letting him and he is letting her in too.
Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I like the pace but at the same time I want the smexin to happen soon.
Author's Response: We still have a little bit to go for that! LOL! Baby steps for these two.
Thanks and here's your teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
nice to see some progress in the mending of the relationship. Plus Bella is coming off as slightly more mature and less emo.
Author's Response: Bella is finally starting to come to terms with things, but she is young and she is hurt so the emo will return from time to time.
Thank you and here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!! teaser squee if its as hot as that little number you wrote here people are going to need a cold shower.... Thats was just mind blowing awesome foolery heheheh Post again soon
Author's Response: LOL! I think I already sent your teaser. Sorry it's not of the same hotness!
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I loved it....burning the couch was a bold move
Post again soon please
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll have more up this week, but in the meantime, here's a teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
Hi
I am so glad that they got the talk out of the way so that they can try to move on - I know Edward has got to take some responsibility for what happened, but at least we now know that the interaction between him and Tanya wasnt started by him.
I loved that he burnt the couch and that other than Bella (at the moment) no one else knows why he did it - I thought it was very touching.
I hope that they can move their relationship to the next stage soon - I think that they both need that connection to see them through what I think is going to be a very stressful time for both of them.
I know that Edward likes to become protectward on occasions and hope that he doesnt over do it otherwise he will just p*** Bella off and be back to square one.
Cant wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you! That was a very insightful review and spot on. While they are moving forward, these two will take things as baby steps.
Here's a teaser:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
i liked this chapter im glad that they are getting closer while i dont condone what edward did she was only 15 and it would have been mega creepy if they did anything love your writing
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, mega creepy, and just plain wrong! LOL!
Here's a teaser for the next chapter:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
Reviewer: peculiar_warrior (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears
I loved this chapter! I'm so happy that him and Bella are trying.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Here's a teaser for you:
“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”
“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”
Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.
“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”
I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.
“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”
Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”
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