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Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Finally al little lemonaide!  When is the full pitcher coming??  lol!  Awesome chap..loved the burning of the couch, just perfect!



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm glad you liked the couch burning. It was my favorite! We have a while before we get the whole pitcher. Thank you and here's that teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Jeebus.... I would say that was rather sudden, but um I think that it was well deserved for both of them.  I don't think that sex will come easy to them at all, especially for Bella, but she was right, he never touched or revered Tanya the way he does / did Bella.  It was very sweet.  As for the whole James thing, something is definatly up and I really hope that they just smack down him and that wa-whore Tayna.  Great writting as always, see ya next week!



Author's Response:

It will be difficult for Bella and will take her some time to get there. Thank you so much!

Here's a little teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: RiesePieces (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

so good! I'm glad the cockblocking has ceased to a degree ;) I like that you are having them still work thru their issues...its good to see that she is sticking with him and hopefully going to forgive him. and burning the couch was brilliant :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! They still have some things to work through, but they have to start somewhere right?

I know it's late, but here's a teaser;

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I was happy to see some progression in their feelings and actions.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. They still have a long way to go, but they will get there.

Here's a teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: Chmiller (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I love this story. I start looking early on Wensday mornings for it. I'm glad that Bella still wants to be his wife, and i know that Edward is upset, remorseful but I feel like he hasn't really experienced any issues or ramifications of his affair.  I feel like other than just the past two chapters and his fear of loosing Bella Edward hasn't really had any moment of true sorrow or thoughts about what he has done and how he really has hurt Bella. I also would like to see his family a little more disappointed in him. Also i think Bella is letting him off the hook just a little to easy. She shouldn't be so trusting of him yet.



Author's Response:

Those are all fair points, but there are also a lot of conflicting emotions. They still have a long way to go. Thank you. Here's a little more coming your way:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: muldrowda (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I really loved this chapter. Its great that they are working things out. Thank you for the mini lemon. I hope we get some good ones in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it . You do have more to look forward to. Here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Yikes! Great chapter. Nice to see the thickening plot line.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! There's a lot more coming and here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Very nice. I love it. I hate cheating of any sort, but it really wasn't as bad as it at first seemed. Still sucked though.



Author's Response:

It does still suck but it wasn't as bad as Bella thought either. Thank you!

Here's a teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Perspective

I'm not sure if I missed it or something, but I was wondering what the age diference between Edward and Bella is? And I'm also loving it so far. :)



Author's Response:

When they married, Edward was 23 and Bella was 15. Now he is 25 and she is 18. Does that help?

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Really great chapter. I am glad that they keep making a little progress each day. I just hope there isn't something that will take it back. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Each day brings a little more for them.

Here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I am glad that Bella and Edward are finally communicating...to bad that they couldn't have done this all along. Of course James is up to something and I wonder if Tanya is somehow involved with any scheme that he has cooked up. Hmm I can't wait to see the other ramifications from the affair.



Author's Response:

They are finally forming the relationship they should have had all along. There's so much more to come! Thank you.

Here's the teaser I promised:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Awe how sweet.  Tanya and James are up to no good.



Author's Response:

They are up to no good! Thank you so much! Here's a teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

awesome story love how they are progressing thanks so much :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! They are finally getting it together.

Here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Loved it. they are getting closer. this is good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Here's the teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

oh FINALLY! Looooove it:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Here's the teaser I promised:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

They are making some headway at least.



Author's Response:

They are finally getting it together. Thank you! Here's the teaser I promised:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: MadV7 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I love this story! I just found this story a couple of weeks ago and I'm hooked! Everytime i see that you updated, I let out a sqeek of joy!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I try not to leave you hanging too long and update every week. Here's the teaser I promised:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

well its a step in the right direction! keep the chapters comming ... 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Here's the teaser I promised:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

hey they are working on it



Author's Response:

They are! Thank you for reading and reviewing. Here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Ok, what was that. You're going to tease us. Let her move on and let them become the couple they should be and fight the evils of Tanya and James. I really are waitng for them to really hook up.



Author's Response:

LOL! There's so much more to come and they are getting there. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

Here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: Meghaja (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I really enjoy this story. I amxiously await every update. I am happy that they are starting to communicate more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. They really are starting to get closer from here on out.

Here's a teaser on the next chapter:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

I think that Bella is just leading him on a bit too long. I mean, I get that he cheated, but he told her what he did, he's doing everything he can to avoid Tanya, and he's truly making an effort. I think Bella's just being a naive little girl and punishing him a bit too much. 

Nonetheless, I really liked this chapter. I'm just glad that Bella is making an effort to fix their marriage.



Author's Response:

There's a lot of pain involved with cheating and it doesn't just go away with "sorry, I screwed up." That said, they have to start somewhere if she's serious about having a real relationship. It will move on from here.

Thank you! Here's a teaser for you:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Great chapter loved all the stuff that happened...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Here's a teaser for the next chapter:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: amyat (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Excellent chapter. Loved the burning of the offensive couch and poor Esme's reaction to it. I don't know how I'd react if my kids burned the furniture.

 

Can't wait to read more.

 

A



Author's Response:

Especially not my steadfast kid! It had to throw her for a loop! Thank you!

Here's a teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Flames and Fears

Edward set the couch on fire! I just love his cheating ass! :-)



Author's Response:

LOL! He's good for something isn't he? Thank you!

Here's your teaser:

“No kidding,” Emmett said under his breath but loud enough for all of us to hear. “You all are actually speaking.”

 

“Ha, ha, Emmett,” Edward muttered sarcastically. “The situation is kind of serious, and I, well, we need you to be aware.”

 

Alice’s and Esme’s eyes grew round, and the boys stilled. Rosalie just leaned back in her chair and waited for the explanation.

 

“Before our trip to the Spencers’, someone dropped off an envelope of pictures for me. They were of Bella at a night club, and could have been taken very negatively.”

 

I patted his leg and rolled my eyes, remembering all too well how negatively they had been taken.

 

“I asked Demetri to look into the matter, and it appears that someone close to the Windemere family has been following Bella. This isn’t the first time that James Windemere has attempted to interfere with our marriage, and I am concerned that he is going to escalate his . . . actions.”

 

Emmett gave Edward a look clearly meant to display what he thought of Edward’s accusations. And knowing how Emmett felt about Edward’s own behavior, I was sure that whatever came out of his mouth wasn’t going to be kind. “First of all, what would James do to interfere with your marriage that’s worse that what you managed on your own, and second, why would he care?”

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