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Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
James definitely has something up his sleeve. No way he laid it all out. I think there's gonna be trouble w/ Bella.
Rox
Author's Response: At least now Bella is more on her guard. Thank you!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Great job...james is creepy lol....really enjoyed the edward and bella stuff and knowing more about james..great job
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
OOooOOOoooOOh! That is Mmm, Mmm good!
~Tay
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
I think James is a sneaky asshat! Love the story, though.
Author's Response: Thank you! Asshat--what a great word and a fantastic description.
Reviewer: andias (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Yes!!!! It is coming right between them...isn't James soooo creepy.
Author's Response: They really do make a nice couple when they figure it out, don't they?! Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
im glad that he got more out of him but it still would make me nervous! keep the udpates comming
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
I just love seeing Edward and Bella doing so well. I don't think that things are perfect between them but it is so much better.
James scares me to death. He is that creepy, scary guy and that is just so unnerving.
Author's Response: James is a really creepy guy and he's not going to get any better. Bella and Edward, however, are settling into their relationship and finally finding their groove.
Thank you!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Oh I think James still has plenty up his sleeve.... I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop and Bella let her guard down for a second, just long enough for James to move in....
Loved the chapter. I've been looking forward to this chapter for what seems like forever! But we still didn't find much out. More like... suspicions confirmed.
Great job!
Author's Response: There's still a lot to come but info will trickle in until it explodes. Thank you!
Reviewer: gigion (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Hot! Like it!
Sure James didn´t tell the truth...
Maybe after all the James issue, Edward and Bella can have a place for them... kind of crazy living with so many couples in the same house. They deserve their little cottage!
;)
Author's Response: LOL! You are so intuitive! Thank you!
Reviewer: brooklynnjack (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
I think James is probably lying he would never tell his plan no true villan would.
Author's Response: You are assuming that he's sane . . . LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 4: Coming Home
You are a genius. You know how to end every chapter. I love your style of writing. Great job so far. Loved each chaps so far.
Author's Response: Um, wow. Thank you! I really appreciate that.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
AWESOME!!! For the lemony goodness I mean :-)!!!
I think James has something up his sleeve and I don't think he is the smartest in the world...he will slip up!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed the lemons. Edward kind of took over. LOL!
Thank you!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
he's still hiding something
Author's Response: Me thinks you could be right. Thank you!
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 2: Messages
The first chapter was riveting. The second chapter is gut wretching. I'm going to keep on reading. You got me glued to your story. Simply amazing find to come across your story. Keep us posted regularly. is it every week? You got our attention so please don't let the excitement of your readers go down. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I do update each Wednesday, so you don't have to wait too long between chapters. I am really glad you are enjoying and I can't wait to see what you think about how it all unfolds.
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Hi
That was awesome!. I think he pretty much laid it out There is somthing more he want for the shipping docks. This is bad.. They all could get killed! And Bella I do think James is going to try and take here soon... am I right. haha. I know your not going to tell me. A girl can hope. haha.
Have a great day :)Leona
Author's Response: You are right, Leona. I'm not going to tell you! LOL! Thank you, though!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
great chapter. Gotta love possesive edward
Author's Response: thank you! Yeah, Possessive Edward has been a big favorite!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
james is too smart to lay everything on the table! i think that edward should take their info to the cops and set up a raid!
Author's Response: That would be nice, but technically, he still hasn't done anything illegal. Trying to take over for his father is a business issue, not a legal one and other than the insinuation, telling Edward he wants his wife isn't illegal either.
Thank you!
Reviewer: prudence21 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
thanks for updating your fanfic...whaaa this chapter is intense and erotic..eventhough edward becomes agressive, i love the part when he asked if he hurt bella..such a gentleman..hmm wondering bout james though..i think its all give-away for those inforamation...i really do not know...something fishy i guess.well its up to...looking forward fo new chapter...
uhmmmm..hoping that after nerve-racking scenerios...there are also some quietness and peace/sweet moment.. as a couple.... just a suggetion...thanks
Author's Response: Thank you very much. There are some sweet times coming up for them, I promise. It won't all be drama.
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
wow and once again you didn't disappoint me I love this story. Great job.
James is creeping me out too. He is a nutjob
Author's Response: LOL! James is a nutjob. That's a great description. Thank you so much and I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
So I found this story by accident but couldn't stop reading until I was caught up. I'm a single mom of 2 and work full time but am down with the flu and this story has kept me sane, I am not one that usually just sits around but this made sitting around much easier for me....thanks for the awesome story!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you. I hope you are feeling better and that the kids let you get some rest. I've had a lot of fun writing this story and I'm glad you are enjoying it. There should be an update tomorrow!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
still not sure what the Windemere's want and plan to do now that they know Bella and Edward are happy.
Author's Response: James has his own agenda and, at this point, has no way of knowing that Bella and Edward are happy. His mole into their relationship is gone.
Thank you!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
nice job
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
great set up chp I really enjoyed it!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
hi love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. the danger is about to start..
have a great weekend Smiles Leona
Author's Response: It is starting to get really tricky with James. Thank you! Hope your weekend was great!
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