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Reviewer: pie2moon2 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 07:34 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
i wonder what really happened...
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:49 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
I guess things never work out the way Edward's mind pictures they will! I wonder if he's starting to get an inkling of what is going on with Jasper. Will Bella ever find out what his story is? At this moment, I'm sure she doesn't care!
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:36 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Well that was uncomfortable! Glad Bella got some stuff off her chest- just wish she would have told off the RIGHT guy! What is Jasper up to anyway? This felt like a set-up to me. Weird. He seems to have a hard time making up his mind- maybe he's just gay. I'm guessing that maybe Edward knew the waitress?
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 05:09 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
hahahaha - what a kerfuffle
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:44 PM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me
Oh God. She is really an idiot.
::slaps forehead::
Poor Edward. I would totally be giving up by now. She's terrible to him. And an idiot. Doesn't this Edward like smart women? LOL. Poor man...
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:32 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me
Wow....again.
::shaking my head at this delusional girl::
I want to shake her. Edward or no Edward, just shake her.
Excellent chapter! I lover your Rose and Emmett!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:18 PM · On: He Apologized to Me
Wow...just started this. Your Bella is pretty pathetic. [Sorry, but getting mad at an old buddy & client for going to lunch with Jasper? Holy shit, pathetic.] Hoping she gets a life soon...
Loving everything else about this story so far. Great imagery and plot. Edward and your secondary characters have me intrigued. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 08:59 PM · On: He Met Me
loved it!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:40 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
She needs to stop taking it out on clumsy Edward. It's Jasper she should be upset with. I'm sure Edward wasn't flirting just being polite.
Reviewer: arian134 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:20 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
oh geez seriously? thats what happens and thats where you end it?? NOOO i hate cliffies =( update sooon pleaseee!!!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:14 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
i really like this story ,but i have to agree with other reviewers bella does come off as a snobby bitch who feels like she's slumming when she's with edward (i just hope he's a secret millionaire....lol) but i will say something glad she vented about jasper maybe saying it out loud may help her to see what's going on a little bit clearer.the waitress whats that about i think we're getting bella's take on things through dripping wine and scolding soup..lol
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 05:17 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Bella comes off as a bit of a snob. I understand if she has no interest in Edward. She should have left as soon as she found out Jasper wasn't coming. She acted like she didn't really want to be there anyway. Hopefully he can get a piece from the waitress to make up for having to deal with her.
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 04:46 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Don't get it. What was with the waitress? Good other than that. I like it!
Reviewer: pencilitout (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 04:34 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me
i hate her. that needy, uptight, spineless little......
good story!!
Reviewer: daniw (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 03:32 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Wow, Bella's kind-of a bitch. I hope you take the stick out of her ass soon! I'm really enjoying the story, but she is just a smidge insufferable.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:23 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Hahahaha, that is what she gets for being a moody bitch.
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:19 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me
jasper is a tool and Bella deserves the bull shit she gets that was really rude.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:03 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me
Bella is so stupid...sorry I have no love for her at the moment.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 01:42 PM · On: He Disliked Me
I hate to say it, but Bella is a bit pathetic.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 01:38 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
These two just don't mix well! At least not yet!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 01:00 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
This is so sad! Jasper keeps dicking her around, and now Edward is flirting with some random HO right there in front of her? AND she has wine and soup on her? How much misery does she have to endure? Her self esteem must be in the toilet....
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:31 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
he's an ass
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:43 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Bella is such a snob! Too good for beer, whatever...
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:24 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Hm... So Bella finally showed some anger towards Jasper and everything he did to her. That's good.
But I wonder what the hell is going through Edward's head. At first I thought he was trying to find out if Bella was available but then he starts flirting with the waitress.
I'm also really curious to know what Jasper told Edward. I'm guessing he only said they had dated, and that's it. I doubt he would have said anything about Bella not being "the one", and of course he would never say he was leading her on.
And, I have to say, what an awkward situation, Jasper asking Bella to find Edward a woman. REALLY weird!
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:18 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
Holy jeebus that is the clusterfuck to end all clusterfucks. Edward, your luck is shite, mate.
This story is fantastic.
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