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Reviews For Sweet Tooth
Reviewer: Megnamole (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

HAHAHA! oh my GOD that pair are biggest spaz couple I have EVER read about! they are sooo funny but completely perfect for one another. Lord I can't wait till the next chappie! I think these young'uns need to get on with the wooing and foreplay!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! I'll upload the chapter... um, now!

Reviewer: michelledale (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

*still imagining the bowling ball vs Edward's Holiday balls*  Huh?


Author's Response:

We just liked typing the word "balls" as much as possible.

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 4


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Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

How in the hell did she not scream at first when she dropped a 10 pound bowling ball on her foot?  Seriously, that's like, superhuman.  Poor Bella.  And poor Edward.  At this rate he's going to be banned from every public venue available in a few months if he doesn't heal quickly.

Thanks for the update!  And yes, we're all sick fucks.  The world would be a happier and sexually satisfied place if we'd all just admit it.

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ouch ouch ouch! I can't stop laughing... And now I'm picturing Emmett, who doesn't believe his eyes watching the scene in front of him and then throwing them out...

Author's Response:

Fat Emmett was too ridiculous not to include. Both he and Rosalie are round in this fic.

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Edward really had a hard time - LOL... This is just too funny!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is just hilarious. I'm on the floor, tears streaming down my face, and everything hurts, I laughed so hard. Especially at the tiny hidden sentence "was bleeding through my pants AGAIN" *giggles*

Reviewer: Kyvak (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

^_^ wait, so if we're sick fucks for reading this...what does that make you for writing it?? lol

I love your story. I seriously can't stop laughing! The characters are delitefully messed up! Can't wait for an update!


Author's Response:

Thanks so much! We had a blast writing it :)

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

just adore this crazy story:)  it make me smile

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh my god...... can't stop laughing at the asshole cake. Lmao. Great job, thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh goodness, everybody is curious about Edward's piercing! He's getting more interest in his dick than ever, too bad it is from other dicks. His taking strip aerobics classes, um. Do they have those for guys too or is Edward finding himself trying to learn how to grind up on a chair with a bunch of women? Wow, that is such a bizarre mental image. Speaking of bizarre, Bella's dentalphilia has me confused. Now I feel the urge to Google it. Is Bella attracted to sweets because the cause cavities? Weird. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: tawxil (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

HAHAHAHAHAHAA!! Oh God, I can honestly say that has been the funniest, most refreshing fic I have read in a while. I would gladly lose my job if it meant receiving a bouquet of erotic pastries. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 3

As a cake decorator (and a rather depraved on at that), this story totally rocks my demented toe-socks.  Keep the sweetness cuming.

Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

poor Edward and his poor damaged dick. If he keeps going around rubbing it in front of everybody, he's bound to get in some trouble.  I adore Edwards description of Alice- emanciated porcupine.. :) Now for the date.. bowling, with Bellas very own ball and Edward smelling of buttercream. What could happen? Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

so goodly wierd

Reviewer: sekoehler (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

I laugh every time I read this fic.  Hysterical.  Poor Edward.  I hope he heals soon.  AND another fetish for Bella?  Damn!

Reviewer: Megnamole (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 3

hahahaha love the asian speech in japanese! priceless. But oh my god this is such a funny story, i can't get enough of it!! looking forward to the next chapter, especially after the ending of this one! i swear to god, those two are made for each other!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 2

OMG ladies...I think we need a serious update here!  Totally left us hanging here:)  Please dont give up on this fic...its like nothing else out there!

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1


i love sweets and work at a"sex shop" so you captured my attention right away.

i agree with carlisle - edward is a freak. i don't see anything wrong with that.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 2

Evil Twin, you are a fondant SLUT!   Seriously, this story is deliciously raunchy!!  Poor Peenward - I can't imagine getting my junk pierced. EEOUCH!  he's got to wait 4 long, hard weeks to feel Bella's tongue tonguing his Albert....poor dude. 

Amusingly enough, I have long held a fantasy of licking something delicious off the flat plane of RPats' delicious tummy. Buttercream sounds very doable....but it would have to be room temp so it' spreadable...hmmm....and what I'd let him do to me with a piping bag full of the stuff... it hot in here???  YUMMMMMMMMMMMM!

Reviewer: Megnamole (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

hahahhahahah that ending was absolutely hilarious!! oh please that was so cruel to omit his reaction to that! I would pay good money to see that!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 2


Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

Well damn doesn't that "beat" all. It would seem like Bella and Edward are a match make in buttercream heavan. Damn that was just great! I loved it and can't wait to see where this goes...

Damn that receptionist was getting a bit annoying...poor Edward having to hight tail it out of there.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh hell what a way to and he named his tit cake Isabella...LMAO

If she sees that in the book I wonder if she would spaz out as well...

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