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Reviews For A Ray in the Dark
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

looking forward to more

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

Squeee OMG OMG I just started this story and I love it I think T is gay and I am so hoping thats the case..  LOL  I can't wait for more and for Edward to WAKE UP!  lol

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

Glad to see this story back in action :) Loved the dinner :)

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, I loved the interaction between Esme/Carlsle/Edward, and haha, Emmett being super nosey, so funny. And I agree, that Bella just needs someone there for her, nothing more than that. Loving it so far, and feel free to call me that, Nemo works as well. ^-^

Can't wait for the next update! <3

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

Good to hear from Edward :)

Reviewer: luvtwilightff (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 2

It was nice to see Edwards POV and learn a little about his background as well.

I hope Bella comes alive alittlemore before things start to heat up between Edward and Tanya.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Rainbow Twilight (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hey I liked this story from Bella's point of view, but I think that Edward's POV was kinda repetitive, it took away the intrigue and wonder I got from Bella's...

I loved chapter 1 but this one wasn't as good for me. No offense or anything, just saying what I feel. 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

I feel bad for Bella but things look like they are starting to look up :)



Author's Response:

HockeyChick,

I think you liked it? You cared enough to send a review, so that's a good sign for me. ;)

Let me tell you she's not out of the woods yet; grief can take a while. But yes, things are *starting* to look up. Hope you're along for the whole ride!

~ ladyrip

Reviewer: luvtwilightff (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

I told myself I would not fave any more stories, byt then I read yours and all of my resolve went out the window! 

Even though I love a good snarky Edward or Bella, I sometimes find myself falling for a sweet love story, one with a great backstory and good plot and resembles real life!

Great job on the first chapter...cant wait to see where you take this story and looking forward to the update...please make it soon!!!

 



Author's Response:

luvtwilightff,

I just love breaking a reader's resolve--at least this way! We are so glad that you have joined us. We've just gotten chapter 2 back from our beta, so hopefully it will be updated this week. :)

I consider it a great compliment to be told that my fiction resembles real life, so thank you very much! I consider it a huge success!

Hope you like what we've got cooked up next. Let us know, okay?

~ ladyrip (& wuogkat)

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, I thought that it was a great start! Keep up the good work, definately have me sticking around waiting for more! ^-^



Author's Response:

E_L_B_88 (can I call you that?),

Yay! Another one hooked! That always makes me happy. Just wait until you see what wuogkat has cooked up with Edward...

~ ladyrip

Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter, I look forward to the next.



Author's Response:

foxster,

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The second chapter is with the beta. We hope to have it up soon!

~ ladyrip

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