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Reviews For I'm Not the One
Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Awww, I loved this chapter! Edward and Jasper make good BFF's. That was a sweet scene about Charlie. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Edward and Jasper are quite a pair! :)

Reviewer: Readr1 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

cute.... : )



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :D

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

They do have a great friendship!  I like the way you integrate the flashbacks too.  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!! :D

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

Good stuff!  I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your great reviews! Chapter 6 is complete & should be up very soon! :D

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

I think I am giddy for Jasper as well :)  I knwo there is a long road ahead, but this is definitely a start :)  I also think that Edward is really good for Jasper to ahve in his life too...

 

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 3

Well, well, well...Alice seems to know just what to do for Jasper to help him out.  Hope she's strong enough to hang on...

 

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

I know Jasper has a past and it's pretty bad and all, but his commentary is cracking me up!

Onto the next chapter after I favorite this one!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well, this is certainly an attention grabber :)

I like it so far and I have to say that part of me would totally be attracted to this bad boy...



Author's Response:

IKR? There's something so appealing about this Jasper! Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

AWWWWWWW. Huh? What? Anyway, good chapter. Poor Renee! :( Update Soon! More Jasper is good Jasper!



Author's Response:

There's more to come very soon! :D

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

Aww poor Jasper. I like that Alice is getting through to him but what else did we expect. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story develops.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! :D

Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

Awww, sweet Jasper. That's always good to see. Uh-oh. I wonder what happened with Charlie and Renee. Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! There's more to come very soon! :D

Reviewer: FonziesGirl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great, great start! I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

More to come very soon! :D Thanks for your review!



Author's Response:

More to come very soon! :D Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Whooo, I like badass Jasper. He's much more fun. Poor Jazz, he's been through Hell. Edward cracks me up too. Like your story, update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I love writing both Jasper and Edward. They are so funny! A new chapter will be up by the end of the week! :D

Reviewer: deltagirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

I read this over on FF and I've been looking forward to another chapter.



Author's Response:

It's coming! i had to wrap up my other story, but now I can concentrate on this one a lot more! :)

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