Oh please update soon. I was wondering if you were going to bring Edward into the story. I hope she stays with Jasper though. Love, love, love this story. Very beautifully written.

ugh... Please update soon, I don't know how long I can wait.  I really hope this doesn't change Bella's feelings for Jasper.  I also think it would be quite funny, after Bella is changed, they run into Edward.  Just to see the look on Edward's face, or to hear his thoughts.  It would be a nice kick in the ass.  Sorry, as you can tell I'm a big Jasper fan.  I love your story, it's too bad this wasn't what really happened.  Please keep the updates coming.

PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!  I AM SO ANXIOUS TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NOW THAT JASPER HAS CONFESSED. 

I loved this chapter - the conversation with Jake was so moving... I really love your version of the Jake-Bella relationship and how she is releasing him to be with Raven.  Beautiful and so moving!

This is such a great story :) 

oooooohhhh myyyyyyy!!

my first review for this story - I've been reading it all afternoon... but had to review this chapter.

I love the whole story - great, wonderful reading a different pairing.  Your Jasper is divine... I love the way you've filled in the gaps for the last 4 years.

This chapter just rocked - the sexual tension nearly sent me through the roof :)  and the kiss *sighs dreamily*

wonderful!!!  thank you

x

 You are the Queen of all evil with the Cliffies, ya know?  Good Chapter...but please write more soon!

OMG! That was just mean to end the chapter there! ARGH! Talk about torture and pain! Oh please write fast. You already write well. ; )  I love Jasper to death but I love Edward a tad bit more? So do bring the next chapter to light soon!!

Thanks!

Joan

OMG! I have a knot in my throat that wont go away. Jacob and Bella's conversation made me cry. 

This is one of the few stories that I'm glad Jasper and Bella get together!  Love the story.  I'm hoping for a sequel.  THX

Can't wait 4 more!

I must tell you that I have been so completely addicted to this series, that since I started reading it, I felt it would be doing the story a disservice to stop and review until I was completely done with what was posted. The emotions, the suspense and romance woven into this that build up and let down like a grand symphony performing one of Puccini's famous operas is amazing and beautiful. I have read and been captivated by every word, every scene, and I can't wait for more. The way you write, not only Bella and Jasper, but Felix as well has left me thirsty for more and I simply cannot wait for your next update. You have a beautiful talent my dear, and someday soon, I'm certain you will be among the famous names along with Stephanie Meyers and Dorothy Garlock. I will be waiting patiently for your next chapter. Thank you for sharing this lovely talent with us all.

~Wolf

oh man.. my heart just kind of did this thing, where it fell into my stomach. poor bella. jasper is her everything, but what will it do to her knowing edward lied to keep her safe?