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Reviewer: Ryssa (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 25
Ha. Silly naive Bella. Well, I suppose it's not her fault Edward is a prude. Gah, it's weird. I love Edward so much but I can't help but pull for Jasper in this story. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 25
DAMN! It just gets better and better! I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE! When are you posting again? It's too damn good! WOO-HOO!
Reviewer: elisa (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Your story is amazing. I've been reading twilighted stories, but never joined until just now, because I had to let you know that I can't wait for the rest of your story! It is so well written, you seem like a very mature author. I am curious to see if there will be any exciting action, like drama with the return of Edward, or maybe something with Victoria (you elluded to the Laurent incident earlier, but there has been no mention of Victoria). Anyway, I am truly enjoying your fan fiction, please keep writing!
Reviewer: wannabriter (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 24
Oh my goodness....There are no words!! I am so happy that his feelings finally came out! Keep up the AMAZING work!!!
Reviewer: valeri29 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 24
Janna, you have no idea what your Jasper does to me. I feel exactly like Bella does in this chapter...I want Jasper. I need him. I desire and long for him and him only. Only, please, don't tell my husband. Seriously, this is one of my very favorite stories, and I never want it to end!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 24
You are SO CRUEL! Damn, you can write heat! Whew! Please don't wait so long to post more! I can't wait to see where you're gonna go with this! I need to calm down now. Yikes!
Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 24
oops. haha. gald things have finally come to a head. been anxious to see how that turned out. poor logan. maybe he can get his own girl someday. lol. update soon!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 24
ooo....hot sexy times with Jasper coming soon?
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 24
That was exciting! I am glad they are finally getting together. And the way it happened was just so sensual! Loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 24
OMG!!!!! Awesome looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 24
Now onboard here at Twlighted.net just in time to revisit Chapter 24 one of my absolute favourties, so much goodness where to start. I am more than happy to revist each one of your wonderful chapters. Thanks to SM for the characters so you as one of my favourite FF authors can take them to places a little more exotic.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 24
Nice cliffie. Glad Bella and Jasper finally figured everything out. It was hot!
Reviewer: ahnyx (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 24
*cheers* *dances* YIPPEE... I'm so glad Jasper finally claimed her!!! The moment was perfect. Love the story, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Chelsea (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 24
It's about time someone takes the lead in that relationship. Jasper is wonderful, as is this story. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Ryssa (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 24
Ack! Yay! The moment I've been waiting 24 chapters for! That was fab and I can't wait to see how it all plays out
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 24
Hmm very interesting. methinks Be;;a's thoughts for Jasper aren't very innocent.
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 24
DAMN! I love Jasper! He is so damn hot. I love how you described the emotions enveloping her, it is exactly how I imagine it would feel when Jasper lets loose with his power... VERY HOT!
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 24
thank you thank you thank you for that chapter!! Please continue!! :)
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
please tell me jasper and bella dont get 2 gether?
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
i want logan and bella to date. i like him. but i really hope edward and bella mean again.
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
wait, wat was alice wrong about?
Reviewer: wannabriter (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 23
I keep yelling at the screen "Bella!! HE LIKES YOU TOO!! Don't you see..." but then i realize " oh its a story" :( lol Keep up the AWESOME work!!!
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
love it =]
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 2
aw, i thought it was in edward`s point of view. =[ but its still really good.
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
love it. =]
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