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Reviewer: Georgi (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 47

Thank you for writng and posting this.  I enjoyed it a lot.  I won't forgive you for killing off Carlisle and Esme, but you have a great deal of talent and i look forward to reading any other works that you choose to share.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 47

Congrats!   You finished.  Cute ending.   I enjoyed your story.

Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 47

I have loved this story so much.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 23

When you write "excretions", I think you must be referring to "secretions." If you think of the word "excrement" as in feces, it takes on a whole different...flavor, doesn't it? DJ



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha!  You could be right.

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 11

How about cur, fleabag, mongrel of questionable pedigree, mutt, butt-sniffer, ass-licker? DJ

Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 47

I will miss this story.  So well written.  So funny at times, so very sad at others.  I wish you well forever or at least this lifetime.  Next one.....well maybe Edward will wait for us!   Thank you for sharing this with us!  I'll keep my eye out for the epi.  It truly was an awesome journey.

Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 47

Thank you so very much for sharing this story and you humour and wit with us for all of these months.  

I'm sorry it's over.  Great ending though.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 47

Exceptional story, artfully told. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Reviewer: lineli (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 47

Thank you for your wonderfull story.

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 47

a very beautiful ending! luv it!!!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 47

outtakes r a must!

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 47

Oh great muse.... the end it cometh. And cometh and cometh. A nightmare of a wet dream.well at least shecdidnt get a uti. Those are a pain and then some amd all that action withbyour average dirty boy.... well any Way she died but went back to the bookshop?. Maybe its a diferent shop. Loved your twists and turns. Mwjwwaa. Say goodnight Gracie.

Reviewer: trixie cullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 47

So sad the journey is over, but what a ride!   Thanks!

Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 47

Loved it.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 47

Excellent story!  Thanks for the journey.

Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 47

THANK YOU FOR FINISHING THIS STORY!   I loved it and it was a great ending----but I am alittle confused the first part of the last chapter Bella was mad at Edward, why did I miss something?  But anyhow i am glad I got to read to last chapter.  Good job!!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 47

I can't believe that this is the end...well almost.

Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 47

Nice. It says what needs to be said, and not too much. Very much in tone with the rest of this really lovely story.

Reviewer: JacksonRobKellan (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 47

I loved the way you ended it. Damn it, I might have to kill him after all. That was great. I'm confused about why she was upset, though, care to explain?

 

This story was great. Beautiful! I'd love to see an epilogue and see how Bella turns out. I'm sure she'll be lovely, or maybe she'll be all snarling and snappy and...newborn-y! lol

 

- Anabeth

Reviewer: Froggy (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 47

this was a wonderful story. thank you for writing it. i'll be waiting for your next one. :)

Reviewer: atina10 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 47

I'm crying! I can not believe I finish this beautiful story !!!... Thank you for sharing ... you are a genius writing :) I hope to hear more from you and thanks again for the outtake you give us! I wish you the best ... xo
Anita

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 47

Great ending

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 47

I love that you ended with a letter!  Did you plan that from the beginning?  It was a brilliant way to show the outcome of their plane crash!  As for feisty annoyed Bella..very fun!

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 47

Excellent story.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 47

Oh no, I can't believe this story is over! I've loved every minute of it, it's been amazing. I loved the plot and the characters. Can't wait for a few outtakes, like how Edward wins Bella back. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.1

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