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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

So Edward is a vamp! Awesome story!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loving it! Sorry, I should know this, but is Edward a vampire here? Either way, he sounds fascinating!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Prologue

Interesting story! The owner of the shop seems very eccentric by his shop hours! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 2

I truly enjoy your writing.   More please!  Oh yeah, I won't be reading Pride and Prejudice and Zombies (the title alone is disturbing) any time soon.  HA!



Author's Response:

Yeah, P&P&Z is kind of a love-it-or-hate-it thing.  There's also Sense and Sensibility and Sea Monsters, and something about Abraham Lincoln that the guy wrote.  I need to pick those up.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very, very promising. I seldom try a new story with a short prologue and one short chapter, because I risk to be left like a beached fish. I hope you are a fast updater and start unraveling the mistery.



Author's Response:

Working on it.  Chapter 2 is in the queue.

Reviewer: CyraBear (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Prologue

Dude, I SO totally suck.  I accidentally erased one of my reviews.  It was a nice long one, and I had replied to it, but then I realized I wanted to reword my reply and hit delete...apparently the delete button means what it says.

 

Whoever posted the review talking about the third person POV and the books I cite, I'm sorry and I didn't mean to!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

I won't comment on my reading habits, but I'll comment on this chapter. I like the way you have pictured the layout of the books. I can only imagine Edward cataloguing the books, throughout the years first in a private library, then in the shop. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

I want more and longer chapters.  Of course Bella has her quick mind and sees things no ordinary person would - who is our mystery guy behind the counter?  He's odd/quirky/mysterious/sexy voice.  Is he good looking?  Will Bella come back to the book store to learn more about this man?  Will they bump into one another somewhere besides the bookstore?



Author's Response:

Gotcha.  I realized after I started posting that the chapters are too short.  Will be rectified!

Reviewer: birdwoman (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

try some Timothy Ferris instead - science is just as good but much more approachable.

 

(I made it through ABHoT, but only because I felt like I had to. Science major and all that.)



Author's Response:

Cool, thanks!  I just may do that!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting first encounter! I really like this so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

More Please?



Author's Response:

Sure.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like mysterious Edward!  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

He wears it well.

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Prologue

Fascinating premise, and beautifully written. OK, I'm hooked!

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. Really great start to the story. I wish I could visit this book store. =)



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

I read the book and after drawing diagrams and thinking until my head hurt, I had brief flashes of understanding.  My brain, however, was just not big enough to retain any of it.  Like I said, brief flashes.  The same thing happened when I read The Relativity Explosion.  Now I'm struggling trying to undersand a documentary I saw on "M" Theory. 

Interesting conversation.  I hope he sees her again sometime soon also.

 



Author's Response:

LoL.  You get full points for continuing your quest to understand relativity.

Reviewer: linder08 (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fresh story, you writing is captivating!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Prologue

I like your writing style and the atmosphere of this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Edward A Masen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Prologue

Such stylish and atmospheric prose- even the disclaimer is posh. Very promising start! This could turn into one of my favorites.

 

 



Author's Response:

Why, thanks!  I worked on that disclaimer for a while. :)

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Prologue

Intriguing start...

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Prologue

This sounds like a really interesting start to a great story! Eager for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Prologue

Ooh.  I love it!



Author's Response:

Cool, thank you!

Reviewer: linder08 (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Prologue

Intriguing preface. Will look forward to updates.

Author's Response:

Just uploaded chapter 1...thank you!

Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Prologue

Well now you have me intrigued.  I like the mystery already.  Please post soon.



Author's Response:

It's done!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Prologue

That's quite the mysterious opening. Not sure if you meant it that way, but I'm hooked.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was the plan.  Glad I pulled it off. :)

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Prologue

looking forward to more

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