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Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh yes, please. But, while I am totally team Edward you did give to poor Jacob tenderness and a capability for love, emerging even in Edward's prejudiced mind. Edward is praying to Carlisle. Heartbreaking.
Reviewer: DeJean Smith (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
Fabulous chapter! Just fantastic. The depth of emotions for both Edward & Jacob you portrayed really sucked me in. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you're awesome for the rec. I got a review from Sebastien Robichaud (wrote U of Edward Masen and in my opinion the most well-read person on the planet) and he said he saw your rec. Yay!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 7
I just started this yesterday and I love it. You've managed to capture Edward's loneliness and emo-ness so well in his actions, in the description of the bookstore, in his letters to Carlisle. I'm so intrigued as to why he is separated from the rest of the Cullens. I also like how you've interwoven (interweaved?) some literature in there without making it awkward or pretentious. Can't wait to read more!
-melanie/april09
Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow. You're a genius writer. I think you captured Jacob's throughts perfectly and so realistic. And I am loving this story so much.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was hoping I didn't make him sound like too much of a tool...but then, he was drunk and wasn't really expecting a telepath to be hiding in the closet.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
I feel so sorry for Jake.
I can't believe they killed Carlisle. Which of the wolves did such a horrible thing? Poor Esme.
Author's Response: It would have been one of the three great-grandfathers: Ephriam Black, Old Quil Atera, or Levi Uley. I didn't really pin it on one of them - more like a group effort. Yeah, Esme's take on the whole thing will be coming up in later chapters.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
WTF?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
Will she be mad. If the Cullens are in Forks (are they there, what happened there?), why haven't the boys morphed yet?
Author's Response: Excellent questions...hmmm.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
She's having an ah ha moment. What is she gonna do with it?
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 12
Doing my happy dance..Yay, you updated early!! I am so excited to see what happens next; will Bella smell Edward in her apartment? I can't wait for them to meet again. I am so enjoying this story!!!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 7
Yeah, the begat chapters nearly ended my quest to read the Bible from cover to cover. Jeez.
Poor Bella. The sting of rejection can harden a heart.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 12
Poor Bella. She has a wolf having drunken sex thoughts about her as he's trying to get into her pants while a vampire is spying on her from her closet. Good stuff.
Author's Response: Kind of having a bad day, isn't she?
Reviewer: linder08 (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 12
Love this story!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
Teen wolf is very fitting for Jake.
I loved the way Edward said, "I warned you". Very...uhm...promising. Can't believe Edward wasn't being all prudish on the steps in the book store. I like an Edward with a little less control.
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
Yes, poor Jacob. Thats something I dont say often!
With all the fanfic reading I do and of course with reading the original books, I feel a real closeness to Carlisle, so whenever you mention his death, or when edward writes to him it just stabs me in the heart. as a writer, good job, as a person, oh no how could you!! It's nice that edward has this connection to him still though.
Really enjoying this story, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Sorry. :( Carlisle does have a unique place in our hearts, doesn't he?
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
Ahhh so Edward was in the closet all the time... Thought it so sweet of him to turn out the light and take her trainers off. Looking forward to the Edward and Bella action. Not sure if he needs much help in 'how to seduce a woman' but I can't wait nonetheless. Great update
Author's Response: Yeah, he's kinda a natural at that. But he's going to screw it up anyway. :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 5
Aw. What happened in Forks? I get the impression that maybe something happend to Esme? What could it be? I'm intrigued.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow. It just crackles around them, doesn't it?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
Go ahead, drink her (just a little)
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 12
I had wondered if Edward had heard Bella and Jake although he took it MUCH better than I thought he would. And he's ready to fight for Bella. YAY!!! I'm curious how Bella is going to handle this...if she is going to ask him about what she knows or wait for him to tell her. And I wonder if he will. I LOVE your plot. The dynamics and history you have created between the Cullens and Wolves is very original and I'm so curious what all you have planned between them. And Bella in the middle of this situation ought to make things VERY interesting. I like how the Cullens don't really know anything about the wolves, that they are shape shifters, that they can smell them. Its fascinating watching them figure everything out. Loved the chapter and very much enjoying your story. Excited to see what you have planned next! Jodi
Author's Response: Thanks. I was hoping that I didn't strain your credulity by having Edward stay quiet in the closet while that travesty was going down. Hoping that the threat of Bella being hurt or killed would keep him at bay, at least for the present.
Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 12
I'm not a big fan of Jakob, so I really enjoyed this chapter. Ups I know it's mean. ;-)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great chapter. I was wondering how much Edward stayed for.
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
Terrific chapter!! I love the Cullen new dynamic...without Carlisle.
And I don't hate Jacob; I just strongly dislike him...
Anyway, continue!!
Reviewer: Sebastien Robichaud (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Prologue
This is quite the beginning.
I came here at the recommendation of Miss DeJean Smith in her own story.
Thank you for writing.
To the next chapter ...
SR
Author's Response: I'm so flattered to get a review from the UoEM guy...thanks!!
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Well, I don't hate Jake (unless he's written as an asshole, then I do!) so I won't stop reading. I love this story far too much :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Incognito Burrito (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 11
Love this story. Your writing style is wonderfully descriptive and it's an interesting idea you've written about. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thank you. And I LOVE your screen name. :)
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