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Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

I could smell the food and hear the fun of the party; sure wish I could have been one of their friends! I visualized all the "fireworks" too ---both kinds were some incendiary goodness, LOL! Well done!



Author's Response:

Ah, yay!  I'm glad it was a sensory experience for you. 

Thank you for reading and letting me know that it worked. :)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: jacknblacknwhite (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

Hi there,

first time leaving a review,
absolutely loved this, I can just imagine rob lifting kristen up on the island
I've read almost all of your stories, you're an exellent writer. keep 'm coming :-)

grz jbl



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  And leaving a review.  It's really helpful, and I appreciate it greatly. Please feel free to leave any thoughts, questions, concerns, etc.  I appreciate it all.

Thank you for the compliments.  I keep working on getting better, and I ADORE writing Robsten. Actually had two new ideas hit me yesterday.  Will be getting around to them asap. :D

the shrew

Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

OMG, I totally forgot to leave you a review to this incrediby, sexy and so totally hot story!!

I love it, it´s so "them", I was looking at the pics of the house Rob rented or still is renting and as I read your story I could totally picture them there, it was so cool!!

I still think that that was an invasion of privacy from the paparazzi taking pictures of there license plates and other stuff, but still cool to see how they lived, they are way too interesting for there own good!!

Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts on this beautiful couple

Melissa



Author's Response:

I didn't see those pics.  Yeah, it's pretty heinous what the paparazzi do. 

Thanks for reading, sweetie.  <3 from the shrew

Reviewer: aratto (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

Ummm! Where do I begin? That was unbelievable! One of the best one-shots ever. Your writing is so amazing, I absolutely love it. The emotion, the heat between them, everything is captured perfectly. Thanks so much for this!



Author's Response:

Ah, lovely! Thank you!  I appreciate so much that you read these stories!  Thank you for letting me share these characters with you.  Thank you for being a Robsten supporter and lover! <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

loved it!  so hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  :D

Reviewer: bbericka (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

That was so sweet. I love your stories. You should write more R/K stories. There great.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I will keep writing them as long as they keep talking to me.  I have more stuff that will post in the next few months.  Including more WUC, and jakeward has a chapter of EA almost finished. 

Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

I really enjoyed it.

A fun, sweet, and very sexy one-shot. Just how I picture Robsten being.

Loved, LOVED it!! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  I had a lot of fun writing this, and I am happy to share with my fellow Robsten supporters.  They are so beautiful, aren't they? *happy sigh*

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

“Your dessert is tucked away at the back of the fridge. Ruminate on that one, Flippy.”   Haha...I loved this line!

And to answer your question....I definitely had fun.   *fans myself*    

I will also never look at apple pie quite the same ever again =)



Author's Response:

SQUEE!  I loved that line too!  She cracked me up when I was writing it.

I am SO GLAD you had fun. 

Writing this made me hungry for apple pie.  And whipped cream. Maybe I should put a warning that you need a pie on hand for afterwards?  ;-)

Thank you for reading, sweetpea! <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: Aiti (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

exactly what I needed - thanks a lot!



Author's Response:

Happy to oblige!  Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: alba girl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

Great one shot.

I think you have them just right, they love their friends and family but when they are together they struggle to see anyone else in the room :)

Keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! 

I am in awe of how they look at each other.  I have never seen anything like it. 

Thanks for letting me share this with you!  <3

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

wow! I am seriously craving some homemade whipped cream and pie right now.

That was awesome! I love how the words made their emotions so tangible. It was realistic yet the stuff of happily ever afters.

I always squee when I see you in my inbox because you never disappoint!

 



Author's Response:

No shit, me too! :D

Thank you for the lovely compliments.  Yeah, the goal is always to have realistic teatment and elements, but, as you know, their story is an HEA.  This was an absolute pleasure to write.  Well, except when it went silent and could have gone in two directions and I pondered that decision for two weeks.  lol.  It was still fabulous because I just loved these versions of them. :)

Thanks for continuing to read.  I appreciate it greatly! <3

Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

HOT

Author's Response:

*high-fives the air*  YES!  That was part of the plan!  Thank you for reading. <3

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 04:00 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

Love it



Author's Response:

YAY!  Thanks for reading, bb! <3

Reviewer: Libertysfic (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

Well Hello Morningsexytimes!!!

Second best part of waking up. I loved it, the sweetness with the flirting. So wonderful.

I love your stores and this is another great one.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!  There was originally no lemon to this story.  BUT as soon as I had finished the first part and thought it was all complete, THEN the next morning started talking to me.  Hot damn, I was a happy shrew! <3

Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

*gasps*

 

hot and romantic = you're my hero!



Author's Response:

This one felt uber-romantic to me, but I just adored them this way.  I was surprised how much of that became part of the story, but I was so happy to write this.   Thanks so much for reading!  <3

Reviewer: lins1918 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Happy Fourth of July - One Shot

This story is making me hungry ! LoL
Love the BBQ scene and the sex wth whipped cream! Yum! Yum!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, sweetie.  I had a lot of fun writing this one.  Glad you enjoyed it! <3

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