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Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 12
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMG.... Perfect... Truly.
Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
I'm hating your cliffhangers but loving this story. Please update again soon.
Reviewer: DearlyBeloved (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 12
I like that Bella didn't hurry to reveal herself to the Cullens. She waited until it was absolutely necessary which is in line with the other chapters. I do sort of feel like each chapter is taking things really slow so I'm not sure if that's intentional or if maybe you're not sure where you're taking the story so you're giving yourself extra time. In any case, I like this plot, I like the development of their relationship and I'm super curious about how Alice views Jasper/how she reacts to being near him again (etc.).
Also wondering what Charlie's up to =]
And also, great dialogue.
Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
loved it and cant wait to see what happens i tried to get to the teaser but i couldnt get it to work so cant wait to see more im hangin on a thread till then
Reviewer: zannesg (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 12
EEP. Wow what a chapter. Jasper was thinking that Alice would not see them together becouse she no longer looked for him but that did not guarantee that Alice would not see both of them if she was looking for visions of Bella. I would really love if you could update tomorrow but I do not think that will happen. :) I will be on tenderhooks until you do. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
oooooh! dun dun dun! can't wait for the next chappie!
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
That is so totally not fair!!!! Really great chapter leaving me wanting more! :)
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 12
Still love you and your story. I was wondering how long it would take her to get off of the roof and i knew that it would be right where you ended it. I REALLY can't wait until the next chapter to see what they all think!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
Well damn. What an entrance. Can't wait to see how the other Cullens handle her change.
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMFG!!!! that was awesome edward was goin all crazy ass on jasper lol
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
OH MY GOD! Can't believe it's finally happening! Yippee. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Alice1290 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome chapter! I cannot wait to read what happens next! I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 12
Good chapter........Bella and newborn strength. Hmmm.....Her and Edwards moodswings.....hmmmmmm. Bella beat shit out of Edward? Possible fun! And I read the teaser and say I am glad this is your dirty secret. I like your stories. :)
Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 12
Ahhhh!!!!! Update soon please!!
Reviewer: mara west (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
the link is not working!!!
Author's Response: Try the link again, just to double check: http://alexisdanaan.tumblr.com/post/1341492622/teaser-ch-13-of-lessons-unexpected
Here's the teaser anyway!
“You’re telling me that you left because you thought you were doing the right thing by me?” she asked, her calm mask broken by incredulity as she turned around to stare at him.
“Yes,” Edward sighed, sounding defeated.
Bella was silent for the span of a heartbeat before she exploded, “Are you fucking retarded?”
Edward’s mouth dropped open but he was, for once, at a loss for words.
Reviewer: mara west (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 12
Really your going to end now????
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh my! I can only imagine what's going to happen next. Edward is going to explode. Bella is going to defend Jasper and she will leave with him. The Cullens will be in shock. Am I right?
Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
hurry hurry hurry .... I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
ugh cliffy!! LOL
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 12
Uh yeah that was too short. Meanie puppet master! :P I can't comment yet because I NEED the next chapter. I have to see if Edward screws it up or not. I'll be waiting.
Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 12
This is so exciting!
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 12
Have i mentioned lately that i love this story? :) Post quickly, please....
Reviewer: budtrixjake (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
Yay!! Let the showdown begin!!
I so was not expecting this to happen in this chapter but I'm SO glad it did!
Update soon. Like NOW!!
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 12
WHAT???????????????????? You're leaving it there?!?!?!?!?!?! :) OMG! Super great cliffy... I'll be sitting here patiently waiting for the next update.. still waiting.... :D
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