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Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 13

I loved Bella's reaction!

Bella was silent for the span of a heartbeat before she exploded, “Are you fucking retarded?”

The best line ever! This chapter was pure awesomeness.

Reviewer: songster51 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm finding this curiously intriguing although I have never been a Bella/Jasper fan. I have read a total of 3 fics with that pairing that I have been able to enjoy and actually finish. I am E and B all the way. I'm gonna be brave and give this a try.  You may have to hold my hand though. JS>



Author's Response:

I shall definitely hold your hand but I must say, I've converted quite a few of you E/B shippers! *puffs out her chest a bit* ;)

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

alll right! let 'im have it, Bella! I CHEERED when i read this! WOOHOO!

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is really getting good. I really wish that Bella had to rip Edward or one of the Cullen's arms off. hehehehehe Update soon. ;)

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 13

well i'm glad you posted early! I was anxious to see how it would play out:)

Reviewer: samantha0078 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

I loved how Bella actually has a backbone, and she stood up for herself. Awww and she sorta chose Jasper, I cant wait for them to actually be together.

There was a space in the URL you gave us, and I bet that it didnt work cause they didnt take it out 

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 13

Whoa! Good conflict interaction. I honestly think Bella does need to go off by herself to figure everything out. She needs to go to a disinterested 3rd party and distance herself from Jasper and Edward. She's too emotional and being a newborn doesn't help. They say time heals all wounds and in this case it would be best for her to have some time to understand herself as a vampire before she makes any kind of decision about Edward or Jasper.

Author's Response:

You just gave me a brilliant idea.

 

I fucking love you.

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

Damn talk about harsh.  They are all trying to intentionally hurt each other aren't they.  Can't wait until Edward and Alice realize that Bella and Jasper have feelings for each other.  Until then.

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

SWEET ASS SWEET CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I love this Bella, so strong and awesome. Jasper is a putz for lying but it happens. Edwards a whiney bitch. More please.

Reviewer: tallgirl677 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

Yay!!! It's finally here. Loved the update and can't with till the next one.

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great.  More please.

Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 12

Second review...

The link works of you take off the last part and just look up alexisdanaan.tumblr.com

While I was at your blog, I shamefully read the teaser for ch 14 too...I know, I tried not to, but it called out to me and I caved into the tempation and read it anyway. My question: Does that mean that ch.13 and 14 are written and ready to go? *smiles hopefully*

Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 12

Love? *pouts* You can't say that after leaving us there! LOL JK I am waiting for the next update on pins and needles! I cannot wait to see Edward's reaction...all of their reactions really. Ohh!! I would LOVE an EPOV!! I still like the J/B relationship but I can go back to E/B if you write it that way. Love you and this awesome story!!

Reviewer: shailienieves (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 12

OMG!! I EFFIN' LOVE YOU!!!! lmbo!!!! what better way toput this story? i swear i've been dieing tosee this but i havent been on here for a fewdays...its the first one i read!! u[date soon please!!(i know you are tho...cause your freaking awsome!!)

Reviewer: Twilightfreaktasha (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 12

this is reall reallly good please update soon and btw the link dosent work it might be written wrong

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 12

OMFG!!! I loved it... I was suprised when the Cullens arrived especially when I was enjoying Bella and Jasper together and I'm hoping their time isn't up just yet, which is weird because I'm 100% team Edward but your Jasper I just love.  Looking forward to seeing how your Edward is.

I am so looking forward to the next update. T x

Reviewer: kgwh (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

I have been reading at this site for sometime, and this is my first review, well its not really a review, per se.  I really just want to say, this is bullshit!!!! I want to know what happens-right now!  I can't stand to wait.  I love this story. You know, sometimes a girl needs a break from Edward.  Well done. 

Reviewer: Sundrop (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 12

I really really really really hate cliffhangers ALOT! I had been wondering when the Cullens would return and what a way did they return! totally awesome and crazy chapter! Update soon Im dying to know thier reactions!

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 12

come on...  *as you duck... you could have went more!  :) 

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 12

First of all, GAH!!! STUPID. EDWARD. CULLEN.

Wow, never thought I'd say that.

STUPID. CULLENS. GAH. Leave the not so happy couple alone!

Also, the link you posted? Yeah, just for other people to know, there's a space after the .com bit, and therefore makes the link unusable. Just to let ya know.

Reviewer: Dydyme (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 12

WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!

Just read the teaser and now I love you twice as much as before. IS he fucking retarded????? hahaha I have nothing (well, not much) against Edward but he is a bit of a tool sometimes and Jasper is amazing in this story. Jasper FTW!!!!

Reviewer: Dydyme (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12

LOVING this story!

*whispering conspiratorially* I am rooting for Jasper!!!

Can't wait for the next one. It is so refreshing to find an author as talented as you on this site. You have me on the edge of my seat every chapter. Keep up the good work =) Thank you for sharing your gift with us!

Reviewer: Chipmunk143 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 12

You love us...omg...talk about cliff hanger !! LOL Awesome !!

Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

oooooooo  so exciting!  can't wait for next update. I'm totally fine with Bella and Jasper together. Forget Emoward! Jazz is hot, especially with blond hair, like in the first movie.  I'm not really sure what they think they were doing with his hair in New Moon and Eclipse - ???  I liked it in Twilight. Anyway, I'm rambling.

Great story! Waiting for more.

 

Reviewer: brooke_babe88 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG!!!!!!!!!! Please dont keep us waiting too long! I know you have a life also but because Im selfish I want more now! please. lol Thanks!

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