I hope Nessie & Baby Sarah are alright. :)

I wonder if Alice has sensed that Sarah may be about to put in an appearence? Jake seems to think that something is afoot! He has done such a great job making Nessie's dreams come true, with Paris, and Disneyland. What  honeymoon!

Really awesome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter and Sarah to arrive!! Great great story!! 

That was a very nice flight attendant! How sweet that she gave them the privacy to do that! I'm also struck by the fact that hunting first allows Nessie to eat human food. Must have something to do with Sarah.

Author's Response:

Hunting just seems to settle Nessie's stomach. I'm still not sure whether the attendant's last comment was funny or perverted.

 

Sounds like a typical upscale European honeymoon to me! Aside from the bloodplay, of course. The magically appearing food basket and rental car drop off were a really nice touch, though!

Author's Response:

You can thank Alice and the pack for the goodies. They figured the newlyweds would prefer not to have a little walk of shame back to Volterra to get their things.

looks like there may be a problem with some codes. But otherwise, this is a very good chapter! 

Author's Response:

Thank you! But what do you mean about the codes?

 

another amazing chapter! Major Kudos to you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!

Wow, Jake actually wants to stay there longer? Giving up his Pack and home (for the time being anyway)?? What has gotten into that boy..? I'm as shocked as Nessie was, though I do have to agree on her conditions.

Loved the parties! And it does sound like Jake had it worse than Nessie did, which also very much surprised me. Well, all except being thoroughly embarrassed by the stories of the other's sexcapades. Lol! Poor Nessie. The photo album was a very sweet touch! Loved it!

I do have a question though... at the biginning of Nessies POV, she mentions she did remember parts of Isle Esme. How is that even possible? For one, she was only a little "nudger" at the time, barely even starting to develope still. And two, her gift doesn't work that way; she's only able to project through touch her own thoughts onto other people not the other way around.

Nahuel getting a mouth guard! Lol! That's practical, yet very hilarious at the same time! It is true, he is the venomous one in that scenario, whereas Nessie is not... Jake sure got lucky there! And at least Nessie doesn't need a mouth guard either... :P I am also very curious what could possible be in Jake's box!

Can't wait until the next update!!!

Author's Response:

I think I phrased it badly. She remembers parts having heard such vivid stories. After all, the first time her father even heard her was when Bella was thinking about feathers and Isle Esme. Then you would have Emmett's cracks through the years. So I probably should have said almost remembered, but she has way more of a mental picture of her parents' honeymoon than any teenager should have to. The next chapter is up, and you're going to see the contents of Jake's box come into play in the next chapter.

Nessie's party is a pretty staid and sedate affair, compared to Jake's. Can't wait to find out what is in his present! Nahuel's mouth guard was sure practical, at least!

Author's Response:

Jake's present is something that will help Nessie keep him under control when she wants. And keeps up the whole mutt joke. Can you guess what it is?

Hmm.. very interesting indeed, and quite a little mess you've got going on (and I thought my multi-chap story had a lot of chatacters in one place to keep track of). Wow.

Aw Nessie and Jake.. so happy for them, and congrats are certainly in order for those two! Finally, a wedding, and a daughter all in one! Woo hoo!

And certainly surprised by Leah and Nahuel. Shocker there. So, um, I take it then neither of them caught sight of the other, or at least felt that pull, the first time they met in the forest in Forks about 7 years previous?? All it would take is one look, the first look, to imprint if it's going to happen at all. :P Still though, this is going to get very inteteresting real quick!

Finding this story today, and reading the description, I'm very surprised to find only 2 chapters updated so far, as well as how much time has past between these two chapters and updates. I really hope the rest will come soon, and fast like the story before this one, considering it sounds to me like you have it already written, or at least completely thought out!

Oh, and by the way, looking at the character list... you do remember Irina is already dead, right... killed in Breaking Dawn...? Just thought I should point that out before you write her into the story... :P

 

Can't wait for more!!! :D

Author's Response:

very good so far, excited to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for the kind review. I'm working on Chapter 3 right now. Poor Nessie and Bella really aren't looking forward to this but are going to find themselves having a surprising amount of fun.

Gasp! How dare no one else has reviewed! Stupid lazy readers, this stories deserves tons of reviews plus a gold star! It totally captured my interested and has just enough suspencd and fluffy romance to leave me happy! I'm not really an angsty type of girl and love good old happy endings! :]

Excellent job and keep up the great work! And I swear if no one else reviews soon I will post severial more reviews myself, because this story is worth it!

<3 Mimi

Author's Response:

No, my feelings are that people should review if they wish to. As far as fluff is concerned, just wait until you see the surprise imprint and a little girls' time out.