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Reviewer: suebee1948 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
Didn't like this at all!
Reviewer: AJTheWriter (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
LOL, awesome story :D
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
wow- I've never read evil esme before- but your story was great!
Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
lol poor edward!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
Oh...my...
And I thought that my MIL had the corner on passive/aggressive behaviour...!!!!
Whoa...
Scary...
Thanks for sharing!
Kathie
Reviewer: Arabella Montego (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
T_T I am so upset with you. I cannot believe how you ended this story! I want MORE. Do find it in your heart to continue this story. It would be entirely appropriate, in my opinion. GOOD JOB.
Author's Response: I'm sorrrry. xD I was trying to think of the best way to end it and really bring home how infuriating Esme is to them. I might write at least one or two more chapters to describe the wedding and the honeymoon. I think that it could definitely be a fun thing to follow them to the island named after the gigantic thorn in their sides. xD Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
slightly ooc interesting about how edward and bella coped but storyline and finally bite really ooc
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
*LMAO* Oh my god...seriously, that ending nearly made me cry I was laughing so hard.
Author's Response: Yay! =) I'm glad that it served its purpose to be silly and amusing. <3 Thanks very much for taking the time to read my exploration into Esme's very annoying side!
Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
Ah. A touch of real life . Nice. M
Author's Response: Thank you! =) I tried hard to make Esme believable, though I had a pretty decent MIL to model her after, so it wasn't too difficult in the end. xD Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
I really liked this! I have never read this side of Esme before. It cracked me up, I definitely could see this happening (in Twi world, of course). This would be alot of fun to continue. I bet Bella will be interesting once she woke up :) Great job, you should have won first :)
Author's Response: It WAS very strange to make Esme so...annoyingly evil. xD When I saw the contest description, though, I knew a MIL that fit the description, and so I tried to take Esme's character there. I'm glad that you found it amusing. =) The story was pretty fun to write as a one shot, so I'm sure it would be amusing to continue. Thanks for your vote for first. ;) And for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Mushroom Ravioli
LOL OH NO!!!!
Oh my. OH MY. This is... just... YES.
I even knew a MIL very very very much like Esme in your story.
Brilliant. Just... I hate her. LOL
And poor EDWARD, being "blue in the pants." CRACKED ME UP.
And Bella...! "We were supposed to have sex first! You promised!"
Ahhh... Heck of a way to begin married life. That really does SUCK.
Author's Response: Unfortuantely, this MIL was based off of one in real life as well. xD I think that was why it was easy to make Esme so infuriating, even though it's hard to picture Esme Cullen as such a troll. I'm glad that you enjoyed the portrayal though, and that you hated her, because that was what I wanted to accomplish. It was my first crack at a Bella/Edward fic in a long time, so I'm glad that it has some fans. :3 Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating! <3
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