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Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 24

OH CRAP!!! And I'm guessing that James was in it with her too!!

OMG!! This is just so good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Rox



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 24

Uh oh, Victoria is back! Can't wait for the next update. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 24

Eep! Told you the bitch was going to show up!

Is James close by, too? Would he recognise him as the man we all think was with Victoria on the night she decided to dump him/forget about him in the park?

Oh boy... Can't wait until - until when? Hmm, we'll see.

Spikey



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: linzbm20 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 24

oh wow...I was wondering when Victoria was gonna show up! please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 24

Wonderful chapter.  Jack's sensitivity, humor and tenderness made me cry.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 24

no! stop with the cliff hangers!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Rat_girl610 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 24

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 24

I am so looking forward to this confrontation. You have no idea. All sorts of violent thoughts are running through my head.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Prologue

I can't remember if thay asked that Voctoria not be told about JAck.  But considering what she did why would she show up?  Isn't she afraid that what really happened has come out.  It's possible that she could still be charged with a crime for abandoning Jack.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 24

=O 

*falls over* 

WHAT THE FUUUUDDGGEEEE??

KILL HER BELLA!!! 

AHHH!!!

more please :D 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 24

I don't think I am making things up ( I read a lot of FF), but I'm sure you mentioned James was with Victoria when Jack went missing - that he was her dealer? Apart from re-reading the whole thing to check, maybe you could put me right?

Either way, I had a feeling she would turn up!

Boooo!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

{PS, you're on the right track. No one was specified by name, but she did meet up with someone in Seattle. He was assumed to be her dealer.}

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 24

Ooh!  The next chappie is going to be interesting indeed.

I loved the little heart to heart between Jack and Bella.  I really hope everything works out for them.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 24

ooooohh well I suspect marcus had something to do with victoria showing back up..... we shall see.

I hate to see jack have such a reaction to her but I assumed we hadn't heard the last from her



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 24

Err... yeah. Kinda predictable. Sorry, but it really was. It was going well, not too much drama in the last chapter, something was bound to happen, and it was fairly obvious that the something would be Victoria. Well written and all, and I loved the bit between Bella and Jack, but predictable.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: lilgreen (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 24

Yes! Tanya and Demetri fin all meet! I'm hoping for a little interaction with those two--they should be a hoot together. The line "I think they have the potential to either be perfect together or murder each other. Either way it should set off fireworks", says it all ;-).

I'm looking forward to how the logistics work out. Clearly someone will have to relocate. I would think that him moving would make the most sense, or at least be the easiest for Jack.
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Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Pikapuff (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 24

Dun dun dunh!  Victoria?  Eek! Good cliffie!  I hope someone lays the smack down on her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great chap amazing teaser you are becoming one of my fav authors your story drams people in and I feel so captivated by it.....  Post again soon Victoria showing up is one of the parts I have been dieing for!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 24

My worst fear come home to roost. Poor jack, he does't seem angry he seems scared,God I am scared for him. So many emotions going on so much anger and hate, I myself statred to shake when I read the last word, he won't even say the word mom about her.  I am so wound  up in these characters, we have a bet at work that james was the man she was having the affair with behind Edwards back   oh god how I live for friday  oh wait its already thursday   yea  maybe tonight   dying here even begging ........



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great chapter. E/B are so cute together and Jack was so sweet talking to Bella about where they would go after summer. Can't believe Victoria is back! What does she want? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: gaspingforair (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 24

NOOOoooo dont end it there!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great chapter. E/B are so cute together and Jack was so sweet talking to Bella about where they would go after summer. Can't believe Victoria is back! What does she want? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 24

Did you have to leave it there? I love this and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 24

So I guess James of course is the one who left him in the park. If so I hope Jack reconizes him and Bella kicks his ass and kicks him in the balls!!!!! Thanks for updating so quickly!!!! Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 24

Oh jeah Victoria

update soon this cliffie is killing me.

I wonder what will happen



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Dillinger910 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter is in the queue here and should be up soon! I hope you enjoyed the surprise update earlier this week, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

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