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Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 10

Hello there, indeed!  Rawr!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 10

Amazing chapter!! Please hurry with the next, I can't wait to see how Edward will react!! My heart is beating so fast!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 10

Amazing chapter!! Please hurry with the next, I can't wait to see how Edward will react!! My heart is beating so fast!

Reviewer: momtokyle (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great storyline! I've wanting to read your story and just did - all 11 chapters at once. Looking forward to reading more. So cool that Esme is so level headed to see clearly the immense love and bond between Bella and Jack.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 10

Yay!!! I've been waiting for this chapter, but Edward's reaction is really the one I can't wait to get to. Please don't keep me waiting long.  I love your story BTW:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG!!!  Great chapter!!!  Please, please, please update again soon!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 10

well hello there indeed!!!

Anxious to see how this will evolve! Hope Edward doesn't react the same way as emmett..



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 10

FIRST OFF THAT WAS JUST SO MEAN                                                           TO STOP THERE OMG                                                                                        NEXT I LOVE EVERY WORD OF THIS STORY I TOOK IT TO WORK WITH ME AND NOW I HAVE EVERYONE HOOKED  DYING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE SO YOU HAVE YOUR OWN LITTLE FAN CLUB   OUT HERE

THE EDITION OF THE PHOTOS WAS A BEAUTIFUL TOUCH AND THE SONG PARACHUTE WAS JUST PERFECT   I HAVE BEEN WAITING ALL WEEK FOR THIS UPDATE          I THINK SHE HANDLED HERSELF VERY WELL AT THE CULLENS

NEXT I LIVED THE NIGHTMEAR OF HAVING MY GRANDCHILD ABDUCTED  I WANTED TO CRY FOR HER PAIN BUT SHE WAS THE FIRST TO STAND UP FOR BELLA AS JACKS MOTHER I WAS  SO GLAD SHE SAW THE BOND THERE AND NOT JUST DEMAND HE BE TAKEN FROM HER BY BLOOD REALIVITES

SHE IS THE ONLY MOTHER HE KNOWS   BUT I AM DYING TO SEE WHAT REACTION HE HAS WHEN HE SEES HIS FATHER FOR THE FIRST TIME IN  5 YEARS AND HOW EDWARD WILL REACT TO SEE JACK 

WE ARE WILLING  TO BEG AND PLEAD FOR A PEEK INTO THE NEXT CHAPTER OR EVEN BETTER A WHOLE NEW CHAPTER THIS WEEKEND  ANYTHING WASH YOUR CAR BAKE COOKIES GIFT CARD  MY RPATZ SIGNED COPY OF PEOPLE OR VANITY FAIR   BEGGING HERE PLEADING TOO   I DONT KNOW IF I WILL LAST A WHOLE WEEK   TO SAY ITS OUR FAVORITE IS SUCH AN UNDERSTATEMENT    YOU ARE A VERY TALANTED STORY TELLER AND I AM HOOKED



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great cliff hanger!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: cupcake123 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 10

LOVEEEE this story!!! any teasers?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: ImCurious (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Argh! I've been reading this chap with my breath in my throat - fantastic! Cannot, cannot wait to read the next! Hope you update very soon...

 

Curious x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh my goodness. This chapter made me so excited! I wonder how Edward is going to react?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well hello there indeed. I think my mouth just went dry too! :) Love the introduction. You touch on a lot of difficult drama that is sure to come really well...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 10

just read your story - most excellent!  i like the way that its kind of calm, but that it doesn't wait too long to get to the good part.  i can't wait for the next chapter!!!  personally i thot that jack is not childish enough for his age, but i've hardly ever read a story that was able to do that well.  i have 3 kids u see, i'm not saying i could write it better, and i think he's a great character, just al little too grown up.  i like charlie and bella together, its very warm.  i loved the emmet  and jack reunion!  keep up the good work =)



Author's Response:

(LOL! I have a 6 year old son and a 7 year old niece who lives with me, so trust me, I know how kids act, lol. I've made Jack little bit more mature than his age to reflect the crap that's he been through because of Victoria. I fully plan on having him be more carefree and childish in future chapters. It's one of my little plot points in my outline, hehe!}

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 10

ohhh cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: capcalawrence (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

great chapter. I just wish that it was longer. Can not wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 10

i really hope for a quick update on the next chapter.... i really want to see edwards reaction. because seriously if em acted that way i seriously wonder about edwards.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 10

OOOOH! Holy Cow, this is getting good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: matilda34 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 10

Need more now!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

Arghh you evil evil person for leaving it like that!! lol. You made me cry!! 

Please can we have the next one asap!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

I don't think a story has ever made me so nervous....I'll be biting my nails until update..



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

Damn...let's see how Edward reacts to seeing Jack!

 

Thanks for the update-Kate



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 10

you left a cliffy there! i'm so curious what happens the next chap. please, please don't make  us wait longer. please do update. i'm so edgy on this next chap.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 10

oh god i can't believe you left it there. love how esme is sticking up for bella and how edward like the look of bella straight away. update soon please

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: vampiyahhhhh (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

Another cliffy? NOT COOL YO.

This chapter was sooo amazing. I really hope you update VERY SOON. Holy fuck, i'm so anxious.

GAHHH.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

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