this stroy keeps getting better and better i cant wait for the next update i loved chapter 13 on your blog it was awsome

I hope Jasper didn't hire Edward or something. I'm so happy for Bella right now.

This is so sweet, I love the progress they're making :)

Also, I think you're doing a great job with the blog, although it seems that you don't like having more chapters on the blog than on twilighted since the updates have become quite further apart lately... it would be really nice if you could update a bit faster there, we'll still review here anyway so I don't see the point of waiting...

I'm sorry if I sound rude, I honestly appreciate your work, I'm just too excited about this story...

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Hi Maya,

Thanks for the review. As for the blog, it's been taking longer to post because it has taken longer for them to to get edited. As soon as I get them back from my beta, I put them on my blog, that same night. I know it seems like FOREVER between chapters because my updates have been less frequent, but it's because of RL taking up so much time and my beta not being able to edit as fast.

Aww :) I'm so happy for Bella.

OMG I love Edward!!! He is so freaking sweet and Bella deserves a good man and hopefully soon she will realize that she deserves to be happy and to be loved.

He is doign everything right by her.  He is endearing!

Bella clearly has a very long way to go.  Jake must have done a horrendous number on her.  Thankfully, Edward seems very patient, loyal, loving and needful of her.  That should give a wonderful foundation for Bella to start believing in herself, in Edward and in their relationship.

i really loved that!! just so sweet and simple its things like that -that will convince bella edward is here to stay

well at least hes consistant with her! cant wait till the next chatper 

Aww so freaking cute!!  I also like how she wasnt perfectly fixed after Edward talked to her.  That is more realistic to still have the doubts and fears.  Yeah very good job for you!!  So excited for the next chapter!!

damnnn  yawninggggg...mmmmhh, this was so sweet, and Bella overthink to much, yeah , yeah i know, but hey i hope Edward is nice enough to wait for her to catch up  lol

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I really want Bella to be my teacher.  She is simply amazing as an educator.  I wish she could take her confidence in teaching and with her students and channel it into other parts of her life.  Also, I would love for Edward to be able to see her teach her classes.  I think she would surprise him -- and he would love it.

I'm glad that Edward asked about her past.  I could understand Bella's feelings and reaction to Jake.  She clearly has had self-esteem issues for awhile if he was allowed to get away with treating her like that.  Jake was selfish and inconsiderate and treated her terribly.  I think combined with everything else ...what he did would continue to affect her.

I just love how patient Edward is with her.  Also, it was wonderful that Bella is opening herself up more and giving into some of her passion for Edward. 

Again, great chapter.  I can't wait for more!