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Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Prologue
Poor Bella, she really needs to get laid
Reviewer: vampyspecial (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
i feel so bad for bella this story is so good cant wait to see what happens next please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Update to come soon
Reviewer: edwardcrazy (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Prologue
Hi. I just came across your story and it took me like about an hour to read all the 5 chapters. Let's just say that i know very well how Bella feels about being lonely and it's just beautiful how you manage to express those feelings without making it be too overpowering. It's a great story and I look forward to the next update and hopefully Edward can make an apearance soon.
Delia
Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
I really like this story. This is definitely different from canon Bella who described herself as plain, but was admired by quite a few boys (and mythical creatures).
I feel sorry for Bella. For instance when she was presenting her maid-of-honour-dress in chapter three and everybody praised Alice’s design instead of praising how Bella looked in it (or maybe they did and Bella doesn’t even recognize a compliment, since she doesn’t except to get any?).
I wonder why Bella hesitated before she said Jacob’s name in the previous chapter…maybe he is one of the two boyfriends Bella had. Or maybe she feels her father is more interested in him then in his own daughter. I guess, we’ll see, we’ll see…
I am glad you haven’t included Edward yet. This feels like a story about “Bella” and not like one about “Bella and Edward” (if you know what I mean), although I, of course, am looking forward to meeting him.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm soooo glad that you noticed the little details how Bella is being looked over (ie. the dress fitting). As for the Jacob pause, unfortunately, I can't expand on that, you'll have to wait. Good eye though.
Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Hi I really like this chapter because even when she feels bad she still tries to make her students feel good about themselves and their writing. I can't beleive that Alice is so selfish now that she knows how Bella is feeling. You really don't need a best friend like that. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. We'll get to see the Alice/Bella development more a bit later. Hopefully, it'll shed some light on things.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Poor Bella :( I really felt for her and the emptiness she feels in her life, literally at every other moment than when she's with her students. I hope life changes around for her really soon because she deserves some happiness.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And trust in the fact that I'm a 'happy ending' writer. I'm not that mean to make you all read about Bella's solitude and lonliness and have her fail at the end.
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
*chin wibble* Working from the end of the chapter to the top.... being such a foodie I know EXACTLY how Bella feels. Craving that home cooked goodness or a certain taste and having to budget manage to eat the cheap stuff absolutely sucks. *eyes own cupboards* Now for Alice and ring.. I think I'm hearing the early warning that something might happen with the ring? I thought it was the hall and the caterers but now I'm not sure. I love how you're working the fanfiction/creative writing idea into this story. I alway have such a time trying to explain it to non-readers when I'm asked how I spend my comp time.
No need to reply if you don't have the time. Reviews may but warm fuzzies in your heart but replying to them all can kill your fingers that would be put to better use typing out the next chapter darn it!
Author's Response: LOL...thanks for the review and I will always try and respond to them (I have a guilt complex...enough said). And I totally get what you're saying about explaining this to non=readers, i've just taken to telling people I'm reading email, as technically the updates do come into my email. A lot of times, non-readers just don't get the appeal of fanfic. Sadly, I used to be just like that...oh how the times have changed.
Reviewer: Booma (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
great story so far. i cant wait to see where this ends up going
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Reviewer: walshiee143 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
I LOVE this story!!!! please update soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much. Update to come soon, don't worry.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
I feel so utterly depressed right now. Believe it or not, it feels weird to have feelings and thoughts of one's self in someone else's words. I can totally relate to how this character feels. I am gonna keep this story as a favorite and follow it, but I can't help but empathize with your Bella. Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and for the favorite. That means a lot. And I know the feeling and how strange it is to get caught up and relate to what someone else is writing, especially about a fictional character, but find solice in the fact that you're not the only one.
Reviewer: EBP (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Thank you for writing this story. I feel like a lot of my life and the situation I'm in is being displayed with your words, no joke. I look forward to another update.
Trisha
Author's Response: Thank you for reading the story. A lot of readers are asking if I'm following them. It's nice to know that you're not the only one.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Seriously I am a college student and I don't eat that badly. Good chapter and looking forward to Edward coming in.
Author's Response: LOL...you're so lucky. When I was in college, it was pasta, soup and tuna. Thanks for the review
Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
to be alone is really depressing! wondering what happens next....hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Update to come...really soon.
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Thats definitly true, good food costs money. Poor Bella, I hope something happens soon, cuz im starting to get depressed :(
Author's Response: Sorry for the depression, but remember, each chapter is only a day, so you've only seen Bella for 4 days. And trust me, it will be a happy ending. I'm not that evil.
Reviewer: Nyla Sparks (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
I totally remember watching that episode of "Cake Boss"!! I remember screaming at the television and saying to myself- "If I were Buddy, I'd deliver the cake that she just ruined!" Embarass her on her wedding day- hell yes!
=]
Author's Response: I was literally screaming at the TV when I saw that "Cake Boss" episode too!!! That bride was aweful.
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
dangit...it was much too short. gotta admit that when i 'm reading i never pay attention to the length i just want it to keep going on and on lol. we've all had that stage in life where having little to no food was the best we could do but it happens. makes us so much stronger. anyways, i'm assuming she meets a man at the wedding and maybe something will transpire. i know you cant give anything away so i'm just stating my own theory. kudos on the story...
Author's Response: Sorry...I know it was really short, but I didn't want to drag out details that didn't need to be in there or just add random stuff to make it longer. Not everyone's day is memorable so I just think of it that way ;) Thanks so much for the review
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Alice's unselfishness was certainly short lived. It's back to treating Bella as slave labor again.
Author's Response: LOL...so very true. She doesn't do it on purpose though. She just knows that Bella's the type of person that she can rely on and will do anything she asks. Bella just has to learn how to say 'NO'.
Reviewer: axd3258 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
i am absolutely inlove with this story!!! :D ah!
its so heartbreaking, but beautifully written and i can see some hope in there too.
and i love how you are making each chapter a day.
cant wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm really happy that you're enjoying it and actually don't mind the chapter/day format. I sometimes get the feeling that the readers are getting annoyed because the story is moving slowly. It's nice to have some encouragement on that front. Thanks :D
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
The teaching part was nice! (I would like to see a student POV, to see that how she is appreciated by them. Anyway, it's just a suggestion, )
Is Alice inventing reasons to make Bella feel needed?
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And unfortunately, no, Alice isn't inventing things for Bella to do. Alice really is just that absent minded and stressed. But she also knows that Bella would never say no to her and she can basically get Bella to do anything she needs.
Reviewer: Rachel000 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Great chapter. I can't comment on your blog (nice blog too, btw), so leaving a comment here. Just wanted to say this story is great and can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. The blog (as well as the story I guess) is a work in progress, but I'm really glad that you're liking both.
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
=( so..when does it start to get better? i know it's 60 chapters..but some reassurance and things will start to get better for bella?
Author's Response: I promise...things will get better. I know that it's a long and depressing ride, but things will start to look up. I'm a 'happy ending' type of girl.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th
Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks...more to come soon.
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Monday, July 5th
so..no one punched those guys?! boo.
glad to see them mending their friendship though
Author's Response: LOL...I know, but I thought the non-violent approach would be more appropriate. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Sunday, July 4th
bet it felt good to scream at someone and get it off her chest. even if she feels like crap now, at least her feelings are out in the open.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: april93 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Monday, July 5th
God, Alice is a scream! Way to shut the boys up! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Next chapter is getting edited as we speak so will hopefully be posted soon.
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