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Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Liked it! Nice way to spring the impending baby *laugh*

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

damn - I'm glad I didn't stop when it said stop!  That was one HOT lemon!

Loved the wedding.  Esme is such a sap - just like me!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

I hope they talk soon, Bella really needs to clear the air!

And preggers! AWESOME!!

Please update again soon!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

wow what a chapter i laughed and cried great job

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

love it

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Wow, I've lived in Stl for 6 yrs and never found a hot guy like Edward! Where should I look? He he. :)

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

im so excited for bella and edward!! how many kids are there in the future for them?! and what will carlie think?

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Loved it...  Can't wait for them to tell Carlie and the rest of the family about the baby.  Keep up the great writing

Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

So glad the wedding went off without Renee actually ruining everything...

 

Thanks for the update!!!

 

Jane

Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

it was great!!! and im so glad that you update often.

Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Um...I think I may be sick, but I reeeally like the fact that Edward enjoyed getting anal. There's something about him getting it up the butt that turns me on...hehe.

OK, I'm going for treatment now. Great chapter.

Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Good chapter!

Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

I'm officially happy again!!! The wedding. A baby. And a smoking hot lemon. Just when I though Edward couldn't get anymore kinky...WOW!

Can't wait to see how Renee and The Masters play out.

 

 

Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Okay Edward Sub was really hot. I can't wait to see what their talk is like. I loved how Bella told him she was pregnant. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love this, PMS. 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

SQUEE!!!  I am so excited I called woo hooo I love when you read a story an theres so many possible outcomes and I nailed it yay me Great Chap this was an amazing heart warming dreamy chapter I LOVE IT!!!!!!!  Post again soon I am looking forward to Edwards reaction and their honeymoon wooo hoo

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

wow ..great chapter .. and the baby was a pure genious twist !! love love love this story can't wait for the honeymoon *wink, wink*

Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Heartache

I didn't mind the catastophic break up.  Each story has it's own tale, and as the reader we must try to follow where it goes.  The issue I have is paying Jessica off...again.  I loathe when the villian gets what she wants.  In this case, the big break up wasn't the problem.  Jessica getting the money was.  It was hard to swallow.  I hope she gets what she deserves in the end.  Even if she does, she is still sitting on 1 million that she shouldn't have.  She could be disemboweled, but she be a disemboweled chick with 1 millions smackers in her pocket!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

that was an amazing chapter.  loved that Carlie could just switch on and off...

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

Wow the last two chaps have been such a healing change!  AMAZING!  I look forward to the wedding and wonder without the protection of a condom and Bellas mental healthy was kind of shaky did she ever get back on birthcontrol?  I mean what an amazing surprise if Bella were to announce that Carlie girl would be a big sister.

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

I keep holding my breath, waiting for Jessica to pop up again. 

Love these two.

Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

Love how normal they are right now!!!  Just what I needed!!!

 

Jane

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

felt a bit jumpy towards the end there, but i can see the usefulness at getting to the destination... Carlie stole the show though - so happy to be able to call Bella "mom"

:)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

Loved it!

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

Felt rushed, but I enjoyed it. Thank you for making them "not perfect" all the time.  That is reality.  Can't wait for the next one.

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