Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Hi
You know I love your story always. I think I can understand Bella mood swings a little Bit now that I read to the end of the chapter. Wooowwww what ending. Except she is always douting herself even when he is happy and tell her. But I can say yes Carlie is growing up, But the biggest problems is. that Bella says Yes and Edward says NO or the other way around infront of Carlie. That is bad. I think Bella is more the Dominte one in this relationship she just don't see it. it her way or high. that not right either. 50/50. I really can't wait to see if she does let Edward Dom. Edward showed a perfect sub. They have it only in the sceans. just like she did to Edward. and she would not lose herself. I was totally turn on about the switch. FUCK that was HOT>. While smiles Leona
Ps. Great story..
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Love the kink, as always. I knew it was going to be that way, you gave it away in your notes at the beginning. So, I hope she has a boy.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Wedding & a baby! WOW! Jammed packed. Can't wait to read the Dom/Domme conversation and what's up with Renee.
Reviewer: kemp17 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Hot Lemon, Wedding, and a baby. You could not have wrote a more perfect chapter. Cant wait for the honeymoon. Update soon please
Reviewer: padalf2510 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
That was a fun filled sweet loving chapter!!!!! Sooooooooooooo goooooooooood!!!! ;)
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Interesting. Good for Bella in taking matters into her own hands and knowing what she wants. Good for Edward for knowing when he is well off and leaving it alone.
Nice wedding, who would have guessed Bella would be pregnant! They have a lot to celebrate on their honeymoon.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
yay a baby
Reviewer: azwhalestail (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
great chapter. amazing spins and turns
Reviewer: ParentingTipsDaily (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
The act of the anal intercourse did not bother me, but what can I say about Bella? I know that neither of the are ever going to be perfect, but the fact that she was willing to partake in a switch, but was unwilling to talk about that part of the relationship makes me think she is a chickenshit. She took a coward's way out and went to the doctor on her own, rather than talk to him. He would have been ecstatic to see his child on the ultrasound but she didn't talk to him. I see a pattern.
I also think they need to talk more in the parenting area. Edward needs time to transition from having a little girl to an daughter who is growing up way to fast. Bella and Edward need to make decisions together, and she could help by working out compromises instead of overriding his wishes.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Liked it! Nice way to spring the impending baby *laugh*
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
damn - I'm glad I didn't stop when it said stop! That was one HOT lemon!
Loved the wedding. Esme is such a sap - just like me!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
I hope they talk soon, Bella really needs to clear the air!
And preggers! AWESOME!!
Please update again soon!
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
wow what a chapter i laughed and cried great job
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
love it
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
Wow, I've lived in Stl for 6 yrs and never found a hot guy like Edward! Where should I look? He he. :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
im so excited for bella and edward!! how many kids are there in the future for them?! and what will carlie think?
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Loved it... Can't wait for them to tell Carlie and the rest of the family about the baby. Keep up the great writing
Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
So glad the wedding went off without Renee actually ruining everything...
Thanks for the update!!!
Jane
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
it was great!!! and im so glad that you update often.
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Um...I think I may be sick, but I reeeally like the fact that Edward enjoyed getting anal. There's something about him getting it up the butt that turns me on...hehe.
OK, I'm going for treatment now. Great chapter.
Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Good chapter!
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
I'm officially happy again!!! The wedding. A baby. And a smoking hot lemon. Just when I though Edward couldn't get anymore kinky...WOW!
Can't wait to see how Renee and The Masters play out.
Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
Okay Edward Sub was really hot. I can't wait to see what their talk is like. I loved how Bella told him she was pregnant. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love this, PMS.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
SQUEE!!! I am so excited I called woo hooo I love when you read a story an theres so many possible outcomes and I nailed it yay me Great Chap this was an amazing heart warming dreamy chapter I LOVE IT!!!!!!! Post again soon I am looking forward to Edwards reaction and their honeymoon wooo hoo
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