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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

I was more shocked by Carlie showing up with Caius than with her knowing of her dad's former lifestyle. What a sleazy character! The talk and Jack's reasons for chosing the different lubes made me laugh out loud.

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Ok laughed at the whole Emmett, Carlie, Edward bailout of jail thing...it was perfect!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

What a fun chapter Edward did good and Bella was a great mama bear!I'd help with the bail money!

Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Ha, brilliant chapter, loved the 'virgin olive oil' bit, and the outtake was hilarious, euugghhhh, cringe at EVER having to have that conversation!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Love Carlie! Go girl! The talk had me laughing my ass off :)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Always love seeing an update to this story!  Love the olive oil situation.   I understand what you were saying about Carlie being able to handle herself.  There is always a chance that your past will catch up with you, even your kids can find out things, so be careful, lol.   Keep writing.   Love this story!

Reviewer: shannabanana1 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

The talk between Jack and E was priceless.  Can't wait to read your other story, It takes place in my neck of the woods, I grew up around there.

Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Holy crap. Coming from someone who found out way too much about their parents...uh...private matters, you're right! You don't want to know!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Wow. I can't even way what I expected this chapter... only, that this was not it! Totally loved it though! Carlie is one of a kind!

And Jack! Gotta love the little guy!! We're going to hear about his talk with Gramps, right?

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Edward's talk w/ Jack was a riot!

I was a bit freaked out when it seemed Carlie was a sub, but she proved me wrong

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Wow.  that was a little scary about Carlie.  but yeah I would not want to know about my parents.  it bad enough my dad seem talk to much.  hahah.  and with Jack that was funniest of hell.  I have a teenage boy and yes it funny.  But it is a must to be honest and abjective.  haha.  Awesome chapter.  smiles Leona

Ps.  I off to check your new story out. 

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

You know what I love most about this story?  That you are letting us know what happens through the years.  I hate it when a story ends and the characters are still in their 20's there is so much more life to know about!  Plus your characters fight and get mad at each other and generally act like real people!  I'm going to miss this story when it's done! :(

I loved the "talk"  You channelled a 13 year old boy really well. lol

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

a rather sticky situation (and i not talking about jack just yet...lol)it was a huge surprize that carlie knew what caius was all about but i think that she handled it brilliantly next i love to see edward and emmett run him out of town loved how the girls said they would get the bail money together.

now the talk with jack i couldn't stop laughing i loved how edward tried to deflect some of jack's questions to carlisle ,lucky he didn't tell him to ask emmett .

checking out your new story now,love spidey and rusty and your past ones so really looking forward to the new one

Reviewer: DDL2928 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

love it....going to start reading your new story!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

I almost peed my pants reading the outtake! I asked my daughter's boyfriend if he ever used Nair as lubricant by accident, of course he got quiet LOL

I was shocked by Carlie bringing that guy home. She freakin handled it awesome though. Surprised she never said anything to her parents about it.

The whole chapter was awesome & I look forward to reading Trip of a Lifetime, but I am definitely raising an eyebrow about the cowboy thing??? But ILY too much not to read it :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

i walked in on my parents once! i still have nightmares 13 years later! gross!! im glad the carlie stood up and that edward talked to his son! cause my husband was too scared to do any of that stuff. he couldn't even buy condoms, tampons sure, but condoms or lube?! forget it! then once after having our first son he started to get handsy, so i went to the store bought a bottle of lube and a penthouse and tossed it at him. i thought he was going to have kittens! classic!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Well thank G-d for that.  I am glad that no one else is getting killed off.  I was almost sure that the reason Emmett came early to the lakehouse was to tell Edward that there were a problem with Carlise.  I just love this fic as it kind of reminds me of my family.  NUTS!!!!!THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

I loved this chapter!  I'm really enjoying watching them get on with their lives!  I'm happy Carlisle is still seeing his friend!  I'm so glad the "boys" are trying to accept her.  Poor JJ, I hope he will be ok!!!!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: lbb83 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

I have really enjoyed this story to the point that my kids and husband are neglected !!!! lol cant wait for the update

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Holy Crap!  That is one scarred litte boy!!!

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Wow, fill me a bathtub...i want some of THAT action!!!!  **fans self and gulps wine** :-o

Edward is so damn adorable, even when he's being threatened by his wife due to his god awful behaviour to his father, Bella ruuuuuuuuuuules!!  (However he certainly knows the words to speak to his wife to make her happy, wink wink nudge nudge) ;-)

I just love the banter at the end with Rose airing all the dirty laundry for Alice, Emmett is just too cute for words (although i'm glad i don't have to deal with him)!

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, keep it coming, i can't even contemplate it finishing!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

Got to tell you, I just love your story more and more.   I'm sitting here in a quiet room, outside my daughter's practice, and I laughed out loud at Rosalie's description of what Emmett has been teaching Jack and Michael, especially with the vision of Jack urinating everywhere, LOL LOL.   God I love this story.    Much love for the writer.

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

well thank God your not killing off anyone else, that was enough!! besides lil JJ is a sweetie! so the tub thing was awesome!! too bad Emmett interrupted them lol. Carlisle is just as I would imagine him. I am not looking forward to the end :(  ~Tracey xoxox

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